| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 10, 2006 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooo! I hate cliffies! Anywho, great chapter. I hope Bulma will be alright though...
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Reviewed By: EnvyxMyxPain On: July 10, 2006 09:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I enjoyed this verry much, I hope you plan to update soon because it's a good storie, I've been following it sense the begining so please update.
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: July 10, 2006 04:50 PDT
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This is so good! I am dying to see what happens next!!! Poor Vegeta. And Bulma, I think she may have bitten off more than she can chew...
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Reviewed By: being drifted On: July 03, 2006 06:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so hot, i can't handle it
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Reviewed By: my envious self On: June 29, 2006 14:03 PDT
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i do not really know what to say about this other than this: it is probably one of the best fanfics i have ever read (and no i do NOT give a compliment easily since im writing myself and ive got a very envious dark and evil spirit living inside my keyboard) and it is the fic that actually got me interested in dragonball fanfics (i cant stand the anime but found your fic by accident and your characterization fascinated me. so even though im still not into the manga or anime i actually started reading a bit of BV fiction cause their relationship is so interesting) i only found it a couple of days ago and quite basically read it in one night (work was pretty tough the next morning and i blame it all on YOU!) its only a bit sad that you seem to update it rather sporadically but hey i guess true genius is worth waiting for it ;-) i know that i WILL be waiting!
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Reviewed By: tsuyamono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 22:26 PDT
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I've been reading this fic since you first started writing it, and I don't believe I have ever reviewed. I love your writing style and I think it has improved greatly since Against all Odds, which incidently is one of my very favorite B/V stories. You've gotten very close to mastering the art of similies and metaphors; in fact, this sets your work apart from that of other DBZ fanfic authors in that you manage to vividly render events and emotions. Additional kudos on plot and continuity. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 10:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another chapter. I'm glad to get more insight into your story. It's so well written and passionate. I can't wait 'til the next chapter.
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Title: Chap 24
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged) On: June 15, 2006 04:00 PDT
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wow, that was so beautiful. The lovemaking scene between Bulma and Vegeta seemed amazingly precious, yet painfully poignant at the same time, it was very moving in a good way, however the twinge of poignancy leads me to dread what will happen at Frieza's victory party. Speaking of Freiza, I loved your interpretation of how he viewed his defeat by Kakarrot, I never really thought of how Frieza took the defeat by Kakarrot, I always imagined how Vegeta felt. The idea of Frieza desperately trying to cling on to his past image of the strongest warrior in the universe; patching together his former greatness, and his anxiety at a failiure to do so is well written. You give an intriguing insight into the psyche of this chilling dictator. I look forward to your next installment.
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Reviewed By: angel of shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 02:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you some sort of famous authour in desguise, who is sating their urge to write Dragon BallZ fics before going back to their usual million pound day job of authouring books? Are you? I really want to know, because that was the best piece of writing I have ever read, When I say that it really means a lot because I have read hundreds of stories and know what I'm talking about. It really is amazing how you can write so well, conveying the mood of the characters as if you were really there. Fantastic, brilliant, amazing, what else is there to say? I can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE update soon!!
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Reviewed By: angel of shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 02:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you some sort of famous authour in desguise, who is sating their urge to write Dragon BallZ fics before going back to their usual million pound day job of authouring books? Are you? I really want to know, because that was the best piece of writing I have ever read, When I say that it really means a lot because I have read hundreds of stories and know what I'm talking about. It really is amazing how you can write so well, conveying the mood of the characters as if you were really there. Fantastic, brilliant, amazing, what else is there to say? I can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE update soon!!
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Title: Nice symbolism!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 20:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. Very romantic, passionate, symbolic and angsty for that part with Frieza. Ha he's paranoid. Love it keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: June 13, 2006 12:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was simply gorgeous. I can't even describe what a fantastic chapter that was, it was just amazing and perfect. I am now speechless, and i can't wait until the next chapter comes. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: stunning
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: June 13, 2006 10:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Vegeta's non armor dressware. You did a great job describing the jewlry and an equally killer job describing his feelings conflicted for Bulma. This is a dark yet fascinating portrait, very realistic and cannon of Vegeta.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 06:08 PDT
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I'm worries for the both of them. I love how you give us some insight into their love for each other without saying it. thanks for the update, can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsi) On: June 12, 2006 20:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOO-HOO! Thanks for the update. I love the way Bulma is breaking down his walls. He's still gruff with everyone else but he now holds a soft spot for her. I also like that your not making him too sappy though. Please keep up the great work. Your fics are one of the only ones that I read now with DBZ. The rest of the quality ones have seemed to disappear. I know alot of people have moved on from this fandom, but it gives me great joy that your sticking to your fics and not letting them go. I really have so much respect for you as a writer. Please keep the great work coming :)
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