| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: trina monkey On: November 24, 2004 10:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are an amazing author. you are very talented and your perceptions of vegeta and bulma adds a sense of uniqueness to the story. your writing is excellent and the way you tell the stories is brilliant and rivals some of the best authors out there.
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 24, 2004 05:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so happy that he killed that THING and that he did it for her no matter what he says...i'm loving this story more and more eveytime i read it...and how they kissed oh i can't wait for more please update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: kethry(not logged in) On: November 24, 2004 04:57 PST
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GOOD he killed the bug! right on. I love this fic. I am so hooked. Seeing the update notice in my mail box is a major highlight for me. Keep up the wonderful work! Thanks for sharing you world with us. Wind to Your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon
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Reviewed By: Aikathaw On: November 23, 2004 22:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and I thought i'd seen the best..>.> this is truly amazing ^.^ I hope you update sooner, though you probably have lots of other things to do. Really great though!
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Reviewed By: uchiha-chan On: November 12, 2004 05:33 PST
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wow great story!!! i love it! im not good in the Review part -__-' hehehee...soo agine great story-up date soon... ooo and dont let burma die-k? - uchiha-chan
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another perfect and compelling chapter. I mean, wow. Please hurry with your next one, I can't wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Icyness On: November 02, 2004 09:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You are wonderful! WOW! Where did you get so much talent. Your word usage and decriptions are precise you need a medal or soemthing for this story! But please let Bulma and vegeta get it on sometime soon, i've never read a story so long withought a lemon. Wonderful hob though you had me on my heels
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Reviewed By: dbz-fan-jess (not signed in) On: October 31, 2004 12:59 PST
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I fucking loved it... that was so freaking awesome it is ridiculous.... I can't wait for more....
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Reviewed By: angry monkey On: October 30, 2004 13:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I urge you to continue! :)
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Reviewed By: angry monkey On: October 30, 2004 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is easily good enough to deserve a crap load of reviews. This is awesome. The story and it's presentation is superb, as well as the cliffhangers you seem to be so good at.
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Title: lab monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: October 29, 2004 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao...update..
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*weeps* OMG, that was great. I am incoherent with delight. I just love your Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: October 29, 2004 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Reviewed By: Lady Lotus On: October 20, 2004 20:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This is awesome! Please, update quick! Don't wait a wekk, or a month....UPDATE NOW! Email me when you update! *~ Lady Lotus ~*
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Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 01:59 PDT
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Oh Tempest! I have no idea why I haven't read this story before, but I'm so glad I have now. I can't wait to see where you are taking this. Wonderful vivid descriptions as usual, and the sexual tention is tangible.
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