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Title: "Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 09, 2004 09:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i'm going to be sick.how stange the way this story is turning out to be...maria
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Title: rotten_future16@yahoo.es
Reviewed By: Joaquin86 On: August 08, 2004 13:23 PDT
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The turn the story's taken still surprises me. Two chapters back there was no indication things would turn that ugly...But even though the descriptions in the beginning of the chapter and the things happening to Bulma and her aquaintances were gruesome, it was the stories about Frieza that really got to me. It was more personal and therefore had more impact...
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Reviewed By: EvilSaint (not signed in) On: August 08, 2004 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gruesome, yet effective. I think this is a very realistic view of what a purge would be like. I've never really seen anyone try to accurately describe how the soldiers would behave and what it would be like from inhabitants' POV. As with all your writing, you did an excellent job ^_^ Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooooow. That was horrible... but well written and beautiful at the same time. I think this is the first time in years that I can actually say that this will give me nightmares. I hope you're happy, lol. Anyway, it was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for your next one. Thanks for getting them out so quickly but not skimping on quality!
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Title: chapter 13
Reviewed By: yoshine On: August 07, 2004 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please write the next chapter fast I have to know about vegeta in chapter 13. This story is very good dont stop writing.I cant stop reading this story I read it like five times.Hurry and write another chapter.PLESE!
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Reviewed By: Kethry ((grrr not loged in)) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:52 PDT
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I am hooked on this Fic. I started reading it on the GR! I found it here and was like "oh cool I can get the update notices!!!!" I love your Vegeta. He is such a bastard and I am all over it. Muhahahahahaha... please keep rolling this out fore us junkies. One thing... he will come save her right? I mean he is a bastard but there is that little part of him that cares. SO he will save her right.. besides he is the only one that can kill her!! **paces waiting to see what happen next**
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Reviewed By: dbz fan jess On: August 03, 2004 22:30 PDT
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oohhh... will veggie come and save her... will she be taken by veggie or become a pawn of freiza... ooooo... can't wait can't wait
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Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 18:41 PDT
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yay, this story rocks...but if only you were a little faster with updating, this would be so much better!
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Reviewed By: me On: August 02, 2004 20:46 PDT
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now having frezia enter into the story was very far from my mind! but damn if it wasn't a twist for me! woot! now what's vegeta going to do when he finds out that bulma is off the ship?
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 16:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! I'm so glad you finally updated! I love you're story and I wish you would do it more often. Hope to see mors soon!!
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Reviewed By: Baggin's On: August 02, 2004 09:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic! Everything is well written and nicely detailed. And I love how you characterize Vegeta and Bulma. *Drools* Sexy Vegeta~ Can't wait to read next chapter.
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Reviewed By: IntellXx On: August 02, 2004 07:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy your style. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 02, 2004 05:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for updating.i missed vegeta in this chapter.i want to know what happens next so update soon...maria
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Reviewed By: DeathStalker On: July 22, 2004 23:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update Update UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ!!!!
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Reviewed By: 954657 On: July 05, 2004 19:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honey, Read these reviews. We love this fic. UPDATE!!!! I know there might be stuff that's keeping you busy and all, but please UPDATE!!
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