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Title: lab monkey
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2004 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow great chapter..i'm glad that she realizes that there are other monsers out then vegeta..please update soon.maria
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: October 16, 2004 06:13 PDT
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It's about damn time! I have been waiting for you to update forever, thank you. I am in love with this fic (as well as all your others) so please try to update faster. You've got me on the edge of my seat with every chapter. You truly are gifted.
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 08:24 PDT
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OMG. You've got a gift for this dark stuff. I've been following this one too on your site so I thought it was time to stop by here and give a comment. This last chapter was profoundly moving. I'm awed. I got that swell in my chest that makes me want to get off the computer and go distract myself with my happy, mundane life! Oh, I can't wait for more. Your monstrously maginificent Vegeta just makes my ff reading time so worthwhile. I don't know quite how to say it--but he helps me understand those assholes called men better? AH, anyway, keep up the great work!
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Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: thoughts On: October 05, 2004 22:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really am enjoying this story. I hope that you will continue with it. The premise is wonderful and I like how you have skillfully manipulated the events so that Bulma was the only one left on the planet to defend it. IN this story, your Bulma is a strong character and your Vegeta is believably callous. I do hope you will contine to update this story.
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: intelXx On: October 05, 2004 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't Stop! It looks like its getting really interesting. What happens next to poor foolish Bulma?
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Reviewed By: KanSol On: September 25, 2004 22:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far I've only seen 1 typo and that is damned good. this story even taught me some new words. I LOVE this story, and you must definitely finish it. This is the freshest idea for a VB get together that I have read in a LONG time. Please finish this story, it's just too awesome not to finish. I love it.
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Title: Shame, Shame
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: September 25, 2004 05:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am ashamed of myself. I only just realized I have been reading this all along but I haven't reviewed. Let me just say, I love the way you have written these characters. From pure, driving hatred to dependance on one another. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 07:50 PDT
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Wow, this chapter rocks. Hey wait, did you ever notice that little thing at the bottom with the numbers. its a 1385 now. hey wait now its at 1353, but it was at 1356... whats it mean??? I'm so confused!!!! Oh well, I still say its a great story keep it up! Your Friendly Neighborhood Idiot, ~~~Inuyasha
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Reviewed By: Veglma, The Insane Wolf-jin On: September 01, 2004 20:19 PDT
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Ewwww!!!!!!! I feel sick!!*Start to braf* Xiahou Fumi:*Stare at the story* Thank you everything that good and evil in the world! Bulma didn't get eating! Komachi Ayako: Vegeta is definely(I don't think that I spell that word right, Oh Well....I guess) a dark hero. *Look up from her brafing* I will say one thing and that is Dark Hero sound a lot cooler that Anti Hero. Xiahou Fumi: Heck Yeah!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 16:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderfully written chapter, but also kind of disappointing in the fact that Vegeta couldn't tell her that he'd never hurt her. I understand where he's coming from, though, and that he wants her to be able to be strong. Plus, it just wouldn't be Vegeta if he gave in that easily. Once again, great chapter and please hurry with the next one!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2004 13:42 PDT
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This was very nice. I really enjoyed Veg's ominous presence, the exchange btwn him and is "associates", and his conversation with Bulms (mainly their touchy-feeliness). ^_^ I'm actually glad Veg didn't make that promise; it would undermind how you have characterize him thus far. I like the edginess you give him and how their relationship -- even though it has progressed -- still is uncertain at this stage.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 07:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still can't beleive that those aliens ate that woman alive. *Shudders* Anyway, Liked the new chappy. I loved the way he answered her question with out giving a direct yes or no.
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Reviewed By: Kethry (not loged in) On: August 31, 2004 07:06 PDT
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**dances around** He came to save her, He came to save her. **stops and looks at everone staring, clearing throat** hmm yes, well I knew he would. Sooooooooooo well, one thing... more more more need more... pleaseeeee update soon!
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Title: lab mokey
Reviewed By: mlf On: August 30, 2004 19:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this by far is one of the best chapters that you have written.wow i can't say enough..i just can't wait to read more..please update soon..maria
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Reviewed By: Zonkie On: August 25, 2004 21:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story...but dont end it there!!! UPDATE SOON!!! with more chapters please!!!! I miss Vegeta :(
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