| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: I love this story
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: March 12, 2006 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit, although i absolutely adore all of your work, this is truly my favorite piece. It is just so beautiful, and i feel like the characters are so true to themselves, and it's just such a joy to read. I love them as a couple! They are just so amazing and i love ur stories!!!! I can't wait for the next update!! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 20:09 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was intense. Eww the bugs! Just like in Indiana Jone's Temple Doom! Vegeta and Bulma's feelings are very complexy written to make them mysterious cutoes on that.
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Reviewed By: vegetachik7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I've read this story on other sites and got so excited when I saw that there was a new chapter. Your grammar and writing style are quite amazing. I love how you write Bulma and Vegeta's characters. It's a perfect representation of both of them. And I loved the line when Bulma says that she'll be there if Vegeta ever needs saving. I can tell things are about to get even more action packed now that Frieza has been defeated. I can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 17:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a great writer
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Reviewed By: Karen in CT On: March 12, 2006 14:56 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is well writ. I like that she reminds him that he's alive.
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: (Maccam) On: March 12, 2006 14:51 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm surprised they didn't do more to her then they did, then again it's an on going story. I loved the fact that he got there when he did and saved her so to speak. To read how they are saving each other is a treat. I can't wait for more of thos wonderful story!!! update soon.
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Reviewed By: Brkeback On: January 09, 2006 13:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh!!! a cliffhanger!!! nooooooo!!!!! *even though i already new that, this is my,like, 5th time reading this story!!!* its so awesome!!!! you must update! this story is too good to not continue!!! i keep finding myself wishish that they could make an anime out of your story...its so great.
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Title: Great fic!
Reviewed By: snoopy99eb [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 22:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found your fic because of a fan art done on this story by Lupingoddess, which sadly does not seem to be posted anymore. But anyway, I love your story! I can't wait to see what happens next! You are a great writer. Please, please, please update soon!
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 20:26 PST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: striderf0 On: November 22, 2005 12:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best fics i have ever read
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Title: Picon
Reviewed By: Picon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 19:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not going to go on and on about how much I love this fanfic, because God help me it's an awful lot. You are an amazing author, and to write a fic like this and make it work as well as you have takes incredible talent, which not very many people possess. I've never read as good a fic as this one, and I've been reading for a long time. ^_~ I really hope that we see an update soon, here or at FF.net...I'd rather here, though, since FF.net is anal retentive about content.
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Title: oh my holy frickin god!
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! i hate when ppl leave dramatic cliffys, and now im increasingly terrified for whats gonna happen next.. i hate when scary sadistic warriors talk about torture.. ur like what the hell is wrong with you! but of course they think its rele funny and that is extremely scary! but im so thrilled u updated.. maybe u'll have time to update some of ur other stories, like master of desire, slave to lust.. which is one of my faves right there with this one as number 1~~~ well great writing, this chapter was incredible!!! ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: bulma_the_babe On: October 03, 2005 17:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING story! wow!!! one of the best DBZ AU's i've read and that is saying a lot! keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: thoughts On: September 27, 2005 20:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
And well worth the wait. The plot thickens and the readers lean anxiously towards their update buttons. Now I'm worried about both Bulma and Vegeta. Thanks for the update. I'm looking forward to the next one.
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: thoughts On: September 27, 2005 20:15 PDT
Comment/Review:
Before I even read it -- Yes! An update. I've been looking forward to the next installment. Got to go and read now. Thanks!
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