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Title: Truey sad..
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 04:33 PDT
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Wow, I think i have to agree with you. Bulma is not herself, but then again neither is vegeta. Makes me wonder whats next for these two. sweet song.
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Reviewed By: ruthlessculprit [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my fucking god. i looove this update. it was worth the wait. this chapter was perfectly done. from every action and word they said/did or didn't. brilliant. please update soon!!!! again!!!! i need to know how they will part!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 17:54 PDT
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It never ceases to amaze me with the intricate plot lines woven into this fic. Everything is so high-powered and raw...gripping me in everytime I read it. Despite all the emotions Veggie displayed..never once did I find it out of character. I think you have an amazing understanding of these characters and how their psyches function. I love it!!! I'm really glad you're sticking with this fic...update soon ^_^.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: March 23, 2007 16:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm so emotional! Yeah we needed angry Vegeta back, the make up sex shall be awesome! But I need to see an angry Bulma as well!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 08:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter, hopefully Veggie will forgive her if she can replace his tail. Though something tells me lots and lots of sex will follow. *lol* I can't wait to see what you bring out next.
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Title: UPDATE SOON!!!!
Reviewed By: YEAH! On: February 14, 2007 21:44 PST
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Oh wow! Im so glad that yo updated. It has been awile since you have posted your last chapter. I was so excited to come to this story and actualy see a new chapter! YESS! Anyways I really want to know what Vegetas reaction is going to be. Will he be angry b/c of the reminder or will he be glad? And what's in store for Bulma? Im really happy that Vegeta is starting to feel, well, something towards Bulma. Maybe this is a sign that he can forgive her. This was a really good chapter and I cant believe that you left it at a major cliffhanger!?! AHHHHH! Seriously though I really cant wait for you to update! So PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PRETTY PLEASE! :)
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Reviewed By: tranny On: February 12, 2007 02:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read many v/b dbz fanfics in the past on both mediaminer.org and fanfic.net but i have to say that this story is one of the most well constructed, well written story that i have ever read. i swear i think someone needs to start thinking of publishing fanfics as actual books because i think the style of writing you have can surely be ranked as good, if not even better than romance books that i see published in the book store. since chapter one, you've described the characters of both bulma and vegeta in very descriptive ways that's left me understanding and able to make a real life connection with every ounce of emotion, changes and struggles that these two characters go through. i mean the scenes you write, from v/b's small arguments throughout their journey in space to the lustful tensions that builds up between them are so meaningful and well organized that i could literally see their relationship and emotions progress inch by inch in my mind. i've read many stories and not all of them give me that feeling and sense of connection to the characters but your writing on the other hand are so vivid that i've actually felt the intensity that happens throughout every event in this story. great job :D. i love the plot. i love how vegeta is portrayed in this story, i love his personality and the way he reacts to life and bulma in this story. you've made him very attractive and real..never once did i find him ooc. please keep updating! a lot of authors left me so disappointed because they'd abandon the story halfway but i'm so glad that you've committed to finishing this story after all these years of writing it. please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: pisq On: February 05, 2007 12:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please we need the make up sex!!!!
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: February 02, 2007 15:59 PST
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Oh wow... just lovely! I so look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 21:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are so horrible!! To leave us with such a cliff hanger, cruel.. very cruel. I hope that they can repair their love because they are the perfect couple. update soon!! ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: Monica W. On: February 01, 2007 17:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so happy to see a new chapter. The story is wonderful and I'm so excited to see what will happen next. Great job!
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 16:24 PST
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That's an evil cliffhanger I am dying for his reaction!
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 09:44 PST
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Aw how can he not see how much he means to her. sweet chapter!
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Reviewed By: saiyansandoza [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 09:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think everyone out there will very much enjoy this work. Ok, so this is half a review, half a letter to the author. But for all those out there reading this particular review, trust me, this work of fanfiction is most definitly worth the time it takes to read. Oh, this is a most excellent story. It is so wonderful to read something that not only is very well written, but quite enjoyable at the same time. I have waited patiently for a new chapter to be posted. And now a abit of the letter to the autor part: You are quickly becoming one of my favorite autors. Not only in the realm of fanfiction, but all other mediums as well. I highly suggest you try your hand at a novel, or a manga of your own for that matter. Thank you for your work and as long as you continue to post, I shall continue to read.
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Title: ch 32
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: February 01, 2007 06:59 PST
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Oh my gosh I wonder how Vegeta is going to react to that revelation. Will Bulma healing his tail, heal the rift between them? I love Bulma's cockiness 'As you well know I am a super-genius' lol what a way to initiate conversation ha ha ha
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