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Title: AAAAAHHHHH
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: August 13, 2006 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im in shock! I can't believe she cut off his tail..... i dont even know how to react......thats horrible. omg my poor Vegeta baby. oh plzzzzzz they have to get back together. oh please let her tell him that she was kidding the whole time. ~Aaralyn~
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Title: O.oo?
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: August 13, 2006 17:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. Im gonna cry. this is horrible!!!! they're not together!!!!! this is so not okay. i luv Vegeta and Bulma; if he kills her, i will cry forever!!! please put them back together!!! ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 04:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no, not his tail, how could you... please update soon, im on tenderhooks here..
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: August 12, 2006 18:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
pardon my french buy oh my fucking gosh that was by far one of the best chapters I've read from you... I absolutely loved it... **don't worry I'm taking good care of Vin while your dealing with Veg ^_~**
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Reviewed By: Dark_Saiyan On: July 29, 2006 20:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please tell me you're going to update soon... this is so much a beautiful story and so much well written... I can't wait for the next chapter !
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Reviewed By: Miss. Anonymous On: July 20, 2006 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I did not see that one coming, I was just as in much shock as Vegeta. But in the end Bulma was holding the winning hand. *snaps fingers* You go girl!
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON ! ASAP!
Reviewed By: UPDATE SOON! On: July 19, 2006 21:19 PDT
Comment/Review:
omg! This was a good chapter! Oh no Vegeta dont believe wat Zarbon says. Bulma is only trying to save you! I hope he reconsiders his decision about Bulma and sees through Zarbons lies. Anyways awesome chapter and I cant wait till the next one comes out!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: July 18, 2006 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I can't beleive you updated so quickly. Nice job with the chapter though. I can honestly say I was not expecting that. Can't wait to see how this plays out.
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Reviewed By: crazed_reviewer On: July 18, 2006 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh NOOOOOOOO! WHY BULMA?, WHYYYYYY! I luv this story, by the way. oh dear, can't wait for the trouble that will undoubtedly come from her actions.. ahhhh, the things u do for love.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: July 18, 2006 19:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
oh evil... but so awesome... this is going to be very long isn't it... ^_^ good times...
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Reviewed By: aly87 On: July 18, 2006 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damnit!! a plot twist!!! god i hate it when that stuff happens...how is bulma gonna get out of this? how can she possibly convince vegeta that she was lying!! :( ahhh!!! lol anyway cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Miss. Anonymous On: July 16, 2006 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God no! I can't take it, I just can't. I never believed a few days ago I would care about Bulma this much. Oh can't take it, I just Can't! Damnit, why do you have to be such a talented writer. You got me hooked to Vegeta and Bloomers romance.
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Title: Update Update Update
Reviewed By: whit On: July 11, 2006 09:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
I just read this story and i have to say that it was so good. Uh oh.. I thik Bulma is in trouble. And whats going to happen to Vegeta? Anyways Bulma totally owns Zarbon. HeHe. I hope you decide to update very soon.
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 21:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods no! How did I know that was going to happen! Damn its so unfair! But Bulma totally owned! YES!
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Title: oh....problem!
Reviewed By: Aaralyn On: July 10, 2006 16:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god.. she is so screwed unless she can think of a way to take him down because i have a feeling that Zarbon can be very creative if he's insulted properly. Think bulma!! Please update soon; the anxiety is killing me! ~Aaralyn~
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