| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: Now it makes sense!
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: September 04, 2006 10:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truely stunning. After the last roller coaster ride I finally see her plans come to fruition. Now it all makes sense what was building up to. I'm glad that I kept on reading. Bravo. Sheer Brilliance :D
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Title: That was intense
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 09:57 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. That was an awesome chapter. The emotion was amazing. Description twice as good. It's all very vivid. Keep writing
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Reviewed By: claire_ff On: September 04, 2006 03:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me again!I was soooo happy to find another chapter this morning!!The plot is awesome, it's getting better and better!At least Bulma had a chance to explain herself...I wasn't expecting her to kill Zarbon,and with salt!Amazing!And Vegeta's reaction was better than what I thought!You exceeded my expectations (again), really really well done!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 01:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 26 and 27 were heartstoppers! I couldnt believe the story took a turn like that! It feels like they are never going to be like they use to be.
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna (not signed in) On: August 18, 2006 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That makes me want to CRY. Please update as soon as possible, I AM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 15:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooo! i've been reading this fic for 2 evenings and i am beyond speechless. why? why did bulma do it? i know there's a reason, but i hurt for vegeta too much to see reason right now. arrggggh. i have to see the next chap soon or i'll have enough 'what if' and 'now what' questions to fill up the rest of my life! i am in love with this story. beautiful and intense! i need more... please.
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: August 16, 2006 07:42 PDT
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Oh my gosh, she is really gonna do it!!! W,ll she realy has no choice, but he may never forgive her for this... *sniff* Brilliant update, simply brilliant!
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Reviewed By: Goodness_Gracious On: August 14, 2006 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are amazing, and so very talented to write a story like this. IT IS AMAZING. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 17:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, I can't take it! It's all far too depressing. Poor tailless Vegeta, will he ever be able to forgive her? *Runs away sobbing*
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
DAMN!
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 13:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* I'm should upset over the direction of this plotline (poor Vegeta) but I know that it's required to not make the story bland and worthy of eyerolls, not to mention uncliched. Loving it, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: thesilentone On: August 14, 2006 08:38 PDT
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ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I had my fists clenched from the instant Freiza started talking about his tail..... I love you Tempest......
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Reviewed By: aly1 On: August 13, 2006 21:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you kidding me? are you freaking kidding me? oh my god...what the hell has happened to this story! XD *i love it!!!* but oh my god! are you kidding me??!?!?! damn...poor poor POOR vegeta! :(
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 19:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma kicks so much ass. She is playing the cold card nicely. I like her this way. Vegeta is being far too angsty considering their situations and past conversations. Edge of your seat chapters though.
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Reviewed By: NSB On: August 13, 2006 18:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
OH MY DAMN !!! SHE CUT IT@!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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