| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: aaralyn On: June 20, 2007 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness. I need an update...He couldn't have abandoned her..not after all that they ahve ben through. and she's being arrested?! what is going on? ~Aaralyn~
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Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE! On: June 20, 2007 22:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh thank you for this chapter. I seriously thought that you were going to give up on it. Anyways I wonder who these two men are and what they want with Bulma? Does Vegeta have anything to do with this and if he doesnt does he know whats going on with her? Also what is she charged with? Or is Vegeta behind this whole thing? So many questions and so little answers. A short but great chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THANK YOU!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 14:20 PDT
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It may have been shorter than the others, but you caught the essence of the situation perfectly. I'm betting Bulma was taken due to what happened back at the beginning of the fic...................and that Veggie isn't gone for good. Well, I can hope anyway. Great chapter, I luved it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 14:20 PDT
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It may have been shorter than the others, but you caught the essence of the situation perfectly. I'm betting Bulma was taken due to what happened back at the beginning of the fic...................and that Veggie isn't gone for good. Well, I can hope anyway. Great chapter, I luved it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 03:54 PDT
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looking very much forward to the next chapter....!
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Title: Glad you're back
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 03:16 PDT
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I can relate to Bulma, you try o help out the one's that you love only for them to throw it back in your face. I'm happy that you're writing this story again. I really missed it!. The last chapter with the two men in "black" i had to giggle. please don't forget this story...
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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: June 19, 2007 23:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was ridiculously short, but good none the less. I anxiously await the next chapter, keep it up, you know I'm an addict to your work. I love your updates like a fat kid loves cake! :]
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 21:28 PDT
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Hey don't worry about being on a "Supernatural" kick. Everyone gets them at some point. I'm on a Shojo kick so I understand. I was just glad that you were writing again, even if it wasn't DBZ. I was a little afraid that you might take a vacation on us (like most authors). I know I haven't reviewed your work like I should, which is bad of me but just so you know, though I started out reading your works because of InuYasha however I love your DBZ work so much more. It's so well thought out and all the plots and twists...I don't know how you keep it all going. And you still manage to make the best Bulma/Vegeta moments. It is because of you that I started to read DBZ fics and I only read Vegeta/Bulma one's. Sad I know but you have spoiled me and it is near impossible for me to read anyone else's but yours. Just know that the work you are doing is fabulous no matter how spread out the updates are I will remain happy as long as I know there will be updates. Your stories are too good to be left undone.
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 18:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who were those men and where did they take Bulma? *Sigh* And I was hoping for a happy chapter! ^__^ Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 14:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! Imagine the joy I felt when I saw an update of Lab Monkey! Yess! I can't wait for the next chapter, I want to know what's Vegeta going to do, what will happen with Bulma and all that stuff. You're such a great author! Oh and one last thing, Vegeta is so hot!
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Reviewed By: Ancha_289 On: June 19, 2007 14:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so addicted to this story. I have read it (and all your other work) from the beginning and cannot say enough good things about it. One of the reasons I am so addicted is your characterization of Vejita. He is wild and vicious and perfect. Secondly, uhm. Wow. Great plot twist, with the "matter of national security" and all. I suppose it has something to do with Vejita? Of course, he has to come back and save her...right? Poor kids...they're so wrapped up in each other they don't know what to do. I absolutely cannot WAIT for the next chapter, Tempest.
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Reviewed By: pisq On: June 15, 2007 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! PUH-LEASE! I know you're probably not so hyper about DBZ anymore, especially because Dean is so freaking hot! lol But Vegeta can kick his ass!
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Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE! On: June 02, 2007 05:09 PDT
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I really hope that you didn't give up on this fic. Its really good and Im dying to read more as Im sure is everyone else in here. So PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Title: Please...
Reviewed By: Anon08987988 On: May 31, 2007 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, I hope you have not given up on this fic. :( I love it and I am dying to read more. Seriously, I check here everyday to see if there is an update. Sad maybe, but that is how much I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Jill1 On: May 30, 2007 12:56 PDT
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Please give us more!! It's been so long since you've updated and we NEED more!!! Pretty pretty please update soon!!! :)
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