| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: pisq On: February 12, 2008 09:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this since it's beginning, so I can honestly say the ending wasn't at all what I expected. I've always loved every single chapter you wrote, but I understand why you did this. It's been 4 years, you've grown up, got tired and instead of just ignoring us and 4 years of absolutely fine writing you gave us this gift. An ending, not the perfect ending, but at least this wasn't one of those WIPs that never cease to be a WIP. Thank you so much for writing this story, I am disappointed at the last chapter, but know that I pretty much love every single word you wrote on Vegeta and Bulma! I give you my best regards! xoxo
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Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 21:05 PST
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wow! this story is finally finished! and it was great! i loved it! i loved ur fic! i can't express it with words as well as u can with emotions lol! but after reading this for so long it has never once gotten old and i have always got hooked on it with every chapter!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: February 11, 2008 20:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I can't believe its almost been 4 years! Im glad you stuck with it though to finish it. I have so much respect for you from that. And I can understand not really being into DBZ anymore...I for one have moved to Inuyasha, but when ever I got an email notice saying you have updated I rush back to read. You did an amazing job with the fic girl, you should be proud. Are you still writing fanfiction after this?
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Title: This is surprising
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 16:26 PST
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I just finished chapter 36 on Saturday, and all of a sudden kaboom, here's your last chapter a day later. I didn't even have to wait for it. I believe this last chapter was good, but I am not sure I loved it. There are a few things that you kinda left in the air, such as the whole ki gun thing and the fact that you foreshadowed that the Colds may not have died in the explosion. I think I knew what you were aiming at, because after all it is a little implausible that Bulma single-handedly managed to wipe the Colds with their world-shattering power in a single explosion. Vegeta was supposed to be the ultimate savior, to redeem himself through it, and frankly giving him a chance to do so would have been very fair to the character. All in all I realize at this point you just didn't have it in you to extend the story, hence having to chop it off. I expected a little more zest at the end, especially because this is a really dark fic and an intensely passionate, lustful ending would have been fitting. Instead you chose to bring them into the light and strip them off that dark unconventional pull that tugged between them. I am not saying a Lemon was in order, but just something that reminds us of who they were and that they will retain that same spunk. The dancing inthe clouds, as romantic as it is, struck me as a bit Disney. Please do not take this review as if I am bashing your work, because overall, this story is fantastic. If it wasn't, I wouldn't be here writing so much about it. I am new generation, but thank you for what you left me. I am sorry I wasn't here 3 years ago. I wish you simply the best. Caprice
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Reviewed By: gandadiyosa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 15:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I'm glad of this. Well ended. I'm done with this fandom myself, but you...made it into one helluva going away party, if you could call it that. A gem in a sea of middling fanfics, truly worthy of notice. I'll probably follow you to another fandom if you're gonna churn out another fanfic as kick-ass as this one is. Or better yet, hit your fans with some original piece. Make us fall in love with them all over again by breathing life into their souls. You are a magus of words. Use your gift well. Know that you are blessed.
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Title: Lost for words!
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 13:12 PST
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Wow it's over.I know what you mean when you say that it's time to move on. As much as i love Vegeta and bulma fanfictions i love the real world just as much. Thank you so much for giving us this wonderful story. I wish you well both you and your family. Maria.( a very big fan)
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Reviewed By: tin7979797 On: February 11, 2008 09:58 PST
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Thank you very much!
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 09:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first found this fic I instantly fell in love. The passion with which you wrote seemed to evoke a desire for more all the time. But I have to sadly say I was quite disappointed with this last chapter. It's a horrible thing when stories get left undone but it's even worse when an author forces something out when they've clearly lost their zeal they started with. In the earlier chapters you can really tell you enjoyed writing this story but this last one seemed as if you were just trying to make the last four years you've been working on it not be wasted. While I commend you for finishing I wish you had put more heart into it. Altogether though this was a highly enjoyable fic and I am still impressed with it on a whole.
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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 06:00 PST
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Wow. You're such an amazing writer, and I love all your fics with this fandom. I'm saddened that you've decided to stop with this fandom. So now I must keep up with your new ones. The ending was great. I love the emotion you evoke from your writing. I hope you continue. Good Luck with your future projects.
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Reviewed By: venus_4902 On: February 11, 2008 05:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I have been anxiously awaiting updates on this fic ever since I began reading it, somewhere around chapter 10, I believe. Though it is quite possibly the finest fanfic I have ever had the pleasure of reading, I have to say I'm a little glad to see it end. I'm just realizing that I have been awaiting new chapters for this story for about two years and it is good to no longer have to mild anxiousty of wondering if there would be a happy ending. :-P Great work, great style and great storytelling. I hope you never stop writing. Even if you give up fanfition, I hope you continue to use your fantastic gift. Thank you for a wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: lady azul On: February 11, 2008 04:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow its finally done and sniff well ya know. thank you for sharing and finishing. it was a pleasure to read
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Title: You are amazing.
Reviewed By: Zillah On: January 11, 2008 19:48 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in awe of your skills as a storyteller and as a writer. Your story is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The personality and the emotions that you have put in your characters is really astounding. But, I have a request for you; please write more and finish it. The suspence is killing me!
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Reviewed By: Jasu On: January 08, 2008 03:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! You have made this fic a work of art! There are quite a few spelling and grammar errors that disrupt the story, but the originality, characterisation and effortless style more than make up for it! Hope the next chapter comes soon - I'll be waiting eagerly for it~
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Reviewed By: Venus Legacy (not logged) On: January 06, 2008 16:26 PST
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Wow, that last chapter was ...wow, Vegeta was just deadly, the rage which engulfed him on the ship, the painful passion as he tried to destroy his memories of Bulma, and the deadly calm as he addressed the general..I loved it. I wonder what has become of Bulma...
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Reviewed By: MisaoChan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 09:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is that this story is not one of the best fanfics I've ever read. It IS the best fanfic I've ever read! This is just absolutely amazing! Everything just draws you in even more. Amazing job!
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