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Title: Evil Women!!!
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 01:57 PDT
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ARG!!!!!! I wake up hope, wishing, wanting a LEMON, but that was the best damn chapter!!!!! Thank you!
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Title: Aaah! Update Please!
Reviewed By: Amarie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 21:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. please update a couple more chapters, i'm dying here! lol *begs*
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Title: *tear tear*
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 21:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an emotional rollercoaster!! i love this story sooo much. please don't kill her Vegeta! I love them as a couple, and i will cry if one of them dies. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Reviewed By: UPDATE PLEASE On: September 15, 2006 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! That was a awesome chapter and I cant wait to see what happens next. I wonder what Vegeta will do for Bulmas punishment. Will he listen to her, find his tail and forgive her or will he punish her physically and mentally. Oh God... to much suspense. TERRIFIC JOB! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT BETWEEN VEGETA AND BULMA! PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 23:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter.
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Title: that was amazing!!!
Reviewed By: demonwitch [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly LOVE this fic please please please update soon!!! thanks! bye
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Reviewed By: Pisq On: September 07, 2006 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Die evil cliffhanger from hell!!!! Magnificent, amazing, eyeball bulging piece of work! I loved it! again and again and again! Damn!
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: September 07, 2006 08:38 PDT
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Once again you amaze me with your talent. This chapter is the absolute best one yet! So full of anguish and emotion... I am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter... Bravo!
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Title: Chapter 28
Reviewed By: jamielove00 On: September 06, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god! I never review unless this is a truly amazing story. And this one is. I'm so excited that you wrote a new chapter! The suspense in this one is killing me! The cliffhanger is terrible lol. I want to know! I hope you post the next chapter soon. I love your style and also the fact that there are hardly any spelling errors. You're a great author! Keep up the good work, love.
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Title: Chapter 28 Condemn my Soul
Reviewed By: venuslegacy not logged On: September 06, 2006 14:57 PDT
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Tempest this chapter is mind blowing, my nerves felt like they were pulled tight in frozen anticipation for what was going to happen next as i read this chapter. It's unbelievable, you are such an amazing writer. I felt an urge to cry, scream andclutch my chest at the moment when Bulma kissed Zarbon, the death of an angel that would kill for her demon Prince. That was so tragically beautiful, what also made this poignant was Vegeta's reaction when he realised what Bulma had done, and the way you described Bulma's metamorphosis into an outwards manifestation of Death, the paleness, the black rings under her eyes, helped highlight the effect of her dying soul.
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Title: Yess!
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 14:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yesssssss!!! A new chapter! So now we know what Bulma was planning all along... God this chapter was good lol You really made my day when I have seen that you added a new chapter! Yess I love it, can't wait to see what happens next..
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 04:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another excellent chapter, you just get better and better, cant wait for next installment...
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 18:34 PDT
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Yes i'm sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy. damn that was an awesome chapter. Ye si would kill for vegeta in a heart beat!!!!!! Damn Girl you out did yourself, and i know theres more to come.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 04, 2006 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo Hoo! An update. You rock girl. I had a funny feeling he was gonna "punish her" instead of a quick death. Anywho, great chapter...can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 16:03 PDT
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Another Excellent Chapter... I can't wait to see what happens when they are locked in a ship again... ^_^
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