| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: loveroftheflame On: June 12, 2006 18:06 PDT
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I've been reading this from the first chapter and I never reviewed. I'm so sorry. This is an incredible fic. I look foward to every bit of it. I want to say more but I can't find the words. I'm not logged in so I can't leave my proper name.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 10:48 PDT
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Good chapter, if a bit long to me, but as usual you just continue to find ways to make the story jump in unexpected ways. Not the command performance of the ball (that's typical) but the Zarbon bit is good and keeps me guessing. The B/V is wonderful. I love how their relationship exists in a vacuum almost. The intense attraction demands they ignore their other instincts.
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy(not logged) On: May 26, 2006 12:08 PDT
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I am really enjoying this story, it is fantastic. I read it all over again from the beginning to savour the beauty of it even more. Oh my gosh I love your characterisations and the way you portray the interactions between them, you're superb! The twist was unexpected for throughout the story the destination of Namek has been firmly placed in my mind, and to be confronted with the disintegration of Namek was a true shock, but then again this story has been filled with exciting twists and surprises. However this one really topped it. It's even more exciting as I haven't a clue as to what is goin to happen next, it makes me anticipate the next chapter even more. Will Bulma and Vegeta escape Cold's ship, will they be separated, will Vegeta ever face Goku, what will happen to Earth and what exactly is Zarbon up to? he scares me in this story. You know one of the richest things in this story is the progression of Bulma and Vegeta's relationship, I can't even find words to describe it, its so weird so unique when I think of how they were in the beginning and then look at them now, its amazing... I mean what is it? It's.. just beyond words. Even though their relationship sprung from dark circumstances you somehow manage to convey it with a rich purity that... I'm trying to describe it but I can't, forgive me lol
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Title: Hmmm
Reviewed By: Pisq On: May 18, 2006 07:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant as ever, just a few errors, but nothing that couldn't be overlooked. And YAY! A party! That should be interesting!
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Title: !
Reviewed By: Friggin Awesome On: May 17, 2006 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so scared that this story had been left to wither away..but you came back! I'm so happy. Please update more often, this story is so amazingly well-written. I love the plot that it follows too.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 13:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you ever chose to write an original book, you'd make a killer author. Wow is all I can say. Its...Its perfect.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 13, 2006 21:37 PDT
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that was fucking amazing... ^_^
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You're right high school is very much like court intrigue. Nice chapter. Still love your descriptions
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Reviewed By: alySON On: May 13, 2006 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank god you updated!!!! i love this story and i was just thinking how much i wanted to read another chapter! thank you so much for updating!! i love this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Addict606 (not logged in) On: May 13, 2006 03:49 PDT
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I'm so happy you updated! I love the b/v interaction and think that you capture them and their situation so perfectly. The conversations betwwen them flowed really well and their thoughts fitted exactly to the situation. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next and see Bulma and Vegeta really act as a team. I can't help but love Zarbon and the arrival of Freeza will be great! Keep it up and hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: Aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 02:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, an excellent chapter, I love how you described Vegeta and Bulma's relationship. To write a chapter like this one under so much pressure is a real achievement. You should take a well deserved rest Tempest.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsi) On: May 12, 2006 19:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAAA!!! The top Bitch of DBZ fanfiction has returned. *bows* I'm not worthy!! But seriously though, its great to see you writing again. I know you must have either had something going on in real life, or just a case of writers-block. Anywho, this was a great chappy. And with all of the things Vegeta must have done in the past I'm pretty sure he is just; if not more well off that Bulmas family. Can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: ilex9 not logged On: May 12, 2006 16:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job with this one. Interesting the way you are able to have these characters flip-flop in roles in such a subtle way, yet still keep them IC and believable. I guess there's oonly trouble for Vegeta ahead since everyone knows he has something he values now.
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Title: ~Breathtaking
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely fantastic, and they are absolutely the hottest couple in the world. I love your story!!!!! sooooooo much!!!! I'm eagerly awaiting the next update! ~Aaralyn~
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