| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 13:33 PST
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good chapter u just need to fix the layout
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 15:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooooow, that was deep. You left us hanging, though, so that we don't really know whether he killed the man or not. Poor Bulma, her efforts aren't in vain, to us.~Manda
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Title: ...Tear
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was moving. I really felt the drama, the emotion. Good job! Keep writing
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Title: Stupendous!
Reviewed By: Evanscentistoolazytologin On: February 24, 2005 15:39 PST
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I really do love this story. You have a grasp on your characters that is uncanny! You do such good work. I'm so glad to have you back! And welcome to the little one! Best wishes to you, Tempest!
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Title: lab monkey
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 15:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW great charter T. very touching and stronge..i feel really bas for the both of them right now. just when you think that they are on the same page then this happens.. really great work.. and can't wait for more of this great story..maria
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Reviewed By: jbloom018 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 11:33 PST
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I love this fanfiction and I couldn't wait until you updated. But it left me wanting more... oh I hope there is a sequel in the works. So good, please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 08:10 PST
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ah, it feels weird to be able to review on this site again. That was damn wonderful. Your writing just gets better and better. I think it's amazing how you can make Vegeta so baaaaad and yet so vulnerable. Makes me want to rape HIM.
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Reviewed By: x_rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 18:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! plz hurry up and update. this is my all time favorite story out there. its the best!
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Reviewed By: x_rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 20:34 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! plz hurry up and update. this is my all time favorite story out there. its the best!
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Reviewed By: Telfie On: February 02, 2005 16:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to update??? /__\ Please update...this is one of the most comprehensible (yes I do mean that) and well written B/V's I've had the fortune to come across. They're in character, a really rare thing for A/U's. If you discontinue it or something, I might cry...j/k. But really, please hurry and update! ^_^
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Reviewed By: SluggyWhoIsTooLazyToSignIn On: February 01, 2005 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gimme a U! gimme a P! gimme a D-A-T! ...uh... E! what's that spell? UPDATE! louder- UPDATE! one more time- UPDATE!! :D
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Reviewed By: amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 20:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu so write the best stories keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Nicolett Archer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 19:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read very few authors such imagination or skill ; you Ms. T are gifted with both of these talents . The fic. is very enjoyable and I have never read anything where the author makes lust a palpable thing that lies just beneath the surface as it dose in real life . I hope you will complete this soon , for there are few others I would go to check on everyday but your work has infected me and I must say it is quite pleasant .
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Title: ARGH
Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is it that everything you write is so wonderful?? I love it!! I can't even remember if I have already reviewed this one, but I don't really care!! Amazing, Original, Wonderful!! Please update before I end up tearing out any more of my hair!! Btw, one more review and you get 100!!!
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Reviewed By: 3oclock_Tangerine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 00:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I really loved this chapter. Actually, I love the entire fic because you develope your version of ther characters personalities while still staying true to their characters and develope the situaion around the emotions they would feel. Or maybe I'm just way to overanalytical. You capture the Vegeta and Bulma essence very well! But I especially liked this chapter partially because of what it was, andpartially because of what the other chapters were. The other chapters made me feel and worry and think and wonder, which I like, but this chapter made me laugh, which throws it into a balance that I really like a lot. I also want to say congrats becuase I don't usually give a ten in creativity, but Your Vegeta-in-a-cage part was really different and it really set this fic apart. I've been reading your fanfic for weeks now, and I finally decided to get off my lazy arse and review. Also, for the love of Kami, thank you for spelling everyone's names right. I get really sick of people who cant consistantly spell the character's names and call themselves fans, so yokudekimashita, yatta and all that fun, keep updating, as I'm sure you will since obviously people are reading it. *eyes your 97 reviews jealously* *plots to send Vegeta here to steal them for me* Anyway, good luck and keep smiling. oo I forgot there was more I wanted to say! I like your sentence fluency. It is very nice to read fics that flow, and you are very talented at this so thank you. Bye now!!!!
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