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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I bet the Vegeta in this story would be furious to hear himself being talked about in a erotically ass-pounding manner. Lol. That was a great chapter. The sexual angst between them is killing me. Please hurry with the next chappy!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 16:10 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Excellent. Damn, woman. You weren't kidding about the cattle prod!! And I cracked up every time I read the word "transconfublator" or whatever it was. Loved it when the ship lurched and he caught her with his tail. I was like, wow, I'm in a B/V A/U. I wish more women knew of this sort of delight--there's no one like Vegeta and nothing like being threatened with death and caught by a tail. Sigh. I love this story.
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Reviewed By: Rain-chan(Rain) On: December 09, 2004 14:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was EXCELLENT! I'm enjoying this fanfic so much, and I truly hope that you continue.
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Title: GAH!
Reviewed By: Sluggy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 23:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the 3rd cliffie I've read tonight. I'm going nuts here! My brain is thinking of the worst possible scenarios of what Veggie is going to do for this job thing. Especially when you implied such dastardly deeds. ACK! UPDATE and SAVE MY SANITY!!!
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Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed on) On: December 08, 2004 15:46 PST
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DAMN! Another great chapter from yoU! though it took you long enough to update!! :glare:: But great chapter, and worth every minute of the wait ::smiles brightly:: So who is this guy that's offering bulma a job? and what kind of job is it? how much does it pay? lol so many questions that will only be answered if you UPDAT SOON!!!! #1 fan Starbrella
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Reviewed By: wh00t On: December 08, 2004 14:32 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: December 08, 2004 14:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! I'm telling you, when those two get together they are gonna need more that a fire hose to calm things down. These teasers are killin' me. Anyway, keep up the great writing. :)
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Title: Lab Monkey
Reviewed By: mlf On: December 08, 2004 13:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have to say that the sexual tension is getting to me and and i want to read more then just petting each other...what a great chapter and i'm glad that they are grtting close to each other...please lets read so more of this game that there playing ...maria
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Reviewed By: Kethry(not loged in darn it) On: December 08, 2004 11:22 PST
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anouther get chap!! I swear when I get te notice that this story hasa been updated I put up my busy sign on my messager and stop everything I am doing to read!! The tension is almost unbareable! Who is this guy that has approced Bulma.... WAAAAAA more please please!
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Reviewed By: Frances On: December 05, 2004 17:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I love this! I love this! You are a fatastic writer. I mean it's like reading a novel you spent $50 on. Please, more, more, more! All the love I can give! Frances
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Title: Dear God!!!!
Reviewed By: Deaths Obsession! On: November 25, 2004 18:40 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this is absolutely the best B/V fic that I have ever read. I love it soooo much and I insist that you continue with it!!! *sigh* I love it so much.... ~Deaths Obsession
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 15:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo!! Now that was a kiss...and a gory beheading. All Bulma needed was some chapstick, chapped lips are no fun. Anyway, please hurry with the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 14:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some mysterious reason the day that I had a novel's worth of comments to make on that last wonderful chapter, mm.org wouldn't let me read or write on the Lab Monkey review page. That last chapter, Vegeta fighting for the cure and cursing himself and all the imperfections of the universe, was arguably the best written chapter I've seen from you yet--it was wildly entertaining but just crisp as all get out, not a word wasted, and so much characterization in every detail. I always love it when Vegeta starting inching towards self-realization in the B/V, and I so appreciate your Bulma being so strong, so capable, yet so feminine. Their exchange was great romance, classic B/V--you do dark and you do sexy and you do angsty death but you do the old I think I love you romance thingie like no one else. This is a super A/U. You need to stop making fall in love with Vegeta so much--I going on my third year of being in love with him, and your stories are helping turn an obsession into something--I dunno--like a g-ddamn marriage to the idea of a cartoon man. Oh, I was going to say something else but I forgot what--being in love with Vegeta and all. GREAT CHAPTER. Please don't stop being great when you have that baby. You make me want to get pg again myself if I could just be as creative as this!
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Title: this fic can't have words 2 desribe how good it is
Reviewed By: dbz maniac On: November 25, 2004 01:13 PST
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this fanfic is amazin 1 of the best fics i have read it feels real jst like ur in the fic ur an outstanding writer and u r plsin a number of ppl pls dont let ur talent go 2 waste the way u write is so inspiring
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Reviewed By: Stars Light (starbrella...not sighed on) On: November 24, 2004 17:58 PST
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OMG! I love this story! FInally! An update from you I've waited forever!! EKKK!!!! It's so sweet that finally Vegeta got the cure, and what's with Bulma not remembering anything b4 Vegeta? I want more i want more!! I LOVE THIS@!!!!
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