| "Lab Monkey" Reviews/Comments [ 442 ] |
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Title: bluerelic
Reviewed By: bluerelic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 23:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what an awesome story. it's no over right? vegeta still has to 'rescue' bulma! right? can't wait for the next chapter. you're an excellent author!
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Reviewed By: bluerelic [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 11:30 PDT
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awesome story.. love the (twisted) relationship between bulma and vegeta. lol
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Title: post!!!
Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2007 12:41 PDT
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i love ur story!! but pleeeeeeeeease! for heavens sake, poooost!!
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Title: Where are you?
Reviewed By: Hello? On: August 25, 2007 00:41 PDT
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Hello? Where are you? Are you still there? Please post more chapters soon! I love your story and have been waiting for more. More Please!!
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Reviewed By: poison_ivy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 16:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! very creative! i hope you update soon! kisses all the way from Portugal!
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Reviewed By: isy On: July 23, 2007 21:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!!!!! please!!!! i'm begging you!!!!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: isy On: July 19, 2007 21:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story!!!! can't wait to see what happens next. update soon. please!!!!
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Reviewed By: isy On: July 19, 2007 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome story!!!! can't wait to see what happens next. update soon. please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:12 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story. It's been a very long time since I've read a story that could make me laugh, blush, and sigh all in one sitting. Please update soon!
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Title: starbrella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 10:48 PDT
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yay! an update! i can't wait to see whats going to happen now. and who those men are.
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Title: chap 34 Dread
Reviewed By: Venus Legacy not logged On: June 23, 2007 10:10 PDT
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Man I didn't expect that, poor Bulma, I wonder what's in store for her, will Vegeta come to her rescue like he did in the past, or will she have to save herself this time?
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Title: Wrath chap 33
Reviewed By: venus legacy not logged On: June 23, 2007 09:54 PDT
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Wow. That was a very raw, intense and passionate chapter. I can't believe the drastic change in their relationship compared with how they were before the cold episode, when Vegeta took Bulma shopping, the pride he felt at being able to give her her hearts desire. And now it seems as if the passion between them is cruel, sinister, dark, oppressive, but then I wonder if the nature of their relationship in the beginning meant that these feelings were bound to arise in the future. Is it really hate that Vegeta feels towards Bulma, he hates with as much passion as he loves, but has that love really disappeared? Will Bulma recover the strength she had in the beginning? Perhaps absolution is the answer, and maybe it should not only come from others, from those killed on cold's ship, or Vegeta, but from within, she needs to feel absolved of the sins she believes she has committed before she can feel redeemed somehow But will she ever forgive herself? Maybe healing Vegeta's tail is the first step...
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome awesome awesome story!!! I think this story is just amazing! I cant wait till the next chapter! I hope Vegeta comes back!!!
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Reviewed By: keleosnoonna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy sh**!! what? who? why? omg, my heart is beating like crazy! you're amazing! thank you sooo much for updating!! hopefully vegeta will come rescue bulma soon!! keep it up!!!
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Title: aff
Reviewed By: pisq On: June 21, 2007 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH!!!!!! What?? Is that the FBI?? MIB??? CIA? INTERFREAKINGPOL??! Come back!
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