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Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: October 20, 2007 15:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freakin awesome chapter!
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Title: Loved It!
Reviewed By: cera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, a great job! Superb work with the flashback this time. This chapter reminds us how dangerous Vegeta really is. It is amazing how well Vegeta's character is captured. His emotions are more like turmoil, and they control him like a dog on a leash. Wonderful parellels between his self respect and his lose of control. I can't wait until their reunion. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: kjja [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're very talented... one of my favorite authors. As soon as I reach the end of each chapter - I can't wait until the next. Bulma's influence is becoming more evident now since Vegeta displayed self-restraint and reasoning instead of blasting away to make his point. He's still dark, though, which is good.
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Title: Wanting more
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 08:08 PDT
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Now thats the Vegeta that I've always loved!!!!! I want more!
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Reviewed By: Arianoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 03:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ow, I can't begin to tell you how much i love this fic. I await each new chappie with baited breath, and each time a "new chapter added" pops up in my mail box, it's like Christmas just came early. ^^ Good luck and keep it up! Arianoon
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Reviewed By: kjja [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. My curiosity is killing me! Please write another chapter soon...
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 15:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
worth the wait just stop making us wait so long
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Title: UPDATE SOON ASAP!
Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! On: September 23, 2007 20:15 PDT
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Oh wow! I wonder who kidnappped Bulma and what do they want with her? And when Vegeta comes back will he seriously make good on his promise? What if he;s to late rescuing Bulma? Great chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out! Having said that PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Dont wait so long to update the chapter okay!?!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 13:59 PDT
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Very powerful read. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 23, 2007 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT! I'm so glad you back to working on this fic. I was so afraid you gave up completely. Guess we can expect all hell to break loose if Geta comes back and those people still have Bulma huh? Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: backdoor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 19:49 PDT
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yeeeaaaa for post!! can't wait for the next one!! suspenceful!!
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Title: Long Await is Fruitful
Reviewed By: cera [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 19:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though we always wait so long, this fanfic always proves to be worth the wait. Once again, you have outdone yourself. It is magnificent to incorporate only Vegeta's activities increasing the suspense felt towards Bulma's predicament. The flashbacks were great to include, although I imagine they could have been depicted more lucidly. I agree with Ravenreux in that the darker side may be your forte. I, and I am sure I am one of many, look forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing!!! The emotion was so intense!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 15:43 PDT
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Simply amazing. The visual descriptions and the profound introspection was superb. You may like writing warmer stuff, but I have to say you have major talent for the dark side too. Once again I loved the update and patiently await the next installment. Keep it up and thanks so much for sharin'! Reux.
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 06:54 PDT
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Wonderful! You're use of imagery was absolutely flawless in this chapter. I can't wait for more.
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