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Reviewed By: Tsuin_Kitsune15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AWESOME! I loved it!!! It was so sweet! I LOVE shounen ai...anyway, loved the fic, as you already know, and now I am off to read MORE of your fics.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 23:45 CST
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I don't think you have anything to worry about. That was a very good, sweet lemon. It was more of what I'd call lime than hardcore smut, but then that wouldn't have exactly been appropriate to the scene (lol - Hiei whips out the chains and leather "Haha! I may be a virgin but I've watched enough porn videos at Yusuke's house to fuck you silly and leave you begging for more!" Kurama, "Score!"). It was very sweet like your whole fice has been.
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: raindrops On: November 29, 2004 19:59 CST
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very nice for your first lemon. i've read a couple... and this one has to be the best. you go dude!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 18:34 CST
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Awsomness I may not have read the Lemon but damn that was still awsome!Go Hiei you finally told him!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 18:00 CST
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Another adorable chapter. No offense intended when I say this, but his stepfather's reaction seemed a little unrealistic and all of it seemed to happen so suddenly. Then again, maybe I'm just romanticizing it too much.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared ^^ On: November 28, 2004 17:30 CST
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(formerly known as Ataure) I'll I have to say about that last chapter is "awww...."
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far!hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:54 CST
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I love it!And i'm so so happy you decided to update more!Poor Kurama.I feel so sorry for him but hopfully Hiei can calm him a bit and back to the way he once was.
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Reviewed By: PatAgain/MikaSamu On: November 27, 2004 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray, two more chapters! It is our good fortune that you are in a writing mood. Poor Kurama, so depressed, understandably. I know Hiei will help. I loved Kurama's quiet help to Kuwabara, and really, everything about this story. I hope you decide to post again quickly -- the adjustments the characters need to make are large, but the external threat still hangs over them and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: raindrops On: November 27, 2004 12:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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woohoo! i havent been oneling in forever and i come on and about 7 new chapters updated for "coming clean"!!! at first i wasn't to keen on this story cause it was a k/h... but after reading it you changed my view. i really like the way you write this story. i love shiori-san and yukina-chan's reactions to kurama and hiei... XD kawaii! i cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: November 27, 2004 11:00 CST
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Great story! Thank you for the updates!! I cannot wait for more. This story has a way of cheering me up when i am feeling blue. Thank you so much
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: November 26, 2004 15:41 CST
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That was a great two chapters. more more please!! You must give us more. THough i think intaro is pissed Kurama killed Karasu and not him. But its a great story and i want to know if i am right!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 12:20 CST
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Poor Kurama and damned computer!I couldn't even get on the net!Your story was quite digusting but still I loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lil sesshomarus girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 09:04 CST
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hey sweet fic can't wait to finish reading it and love the cliffies. but please finish it would be humorous to hear Yusuke screaming about dream. but please finish. I really must say ur good......
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