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Reviewed By: Mr_vampire On: November 26, 2004 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so cool. Please keep up the good work and update as soon as posible.
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 21:57 CST
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That was great! You updated two chapters in one day! You are still alive right? I hope you didn't work yourself to death. That was a lovely way to end the chapter! Yusuke being chased by Keiko, cute! Poor Kurama that must have really hurt... It all seems to have turned out well though. Except who that guy is. A good omen or a bad one? Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: PatAgain On: November 25, 2004 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you posted here, I didn't get a chance to finish my last review. Two more great chapters. I agree, the dark times are needed to better appreciate the light, and all change comes with some pain.
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 14:23 CST
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WooooooHoooooooooo!I loved it!Poor Kurama and Hiei they were having a nice time then some damned Youkai had to come and get them.xcuse my French,and honestly I totally Loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Katy123 On: November 21, 2004 11:18 CST
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Very good story keep iot up and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Youko Kara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*jumps up and down* Yay! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 03:12 CST
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Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!?!?!? You have the next chapter written?!? Well, where is is?!?!?!?!!? Proof-read quickly! Um..Please? Oh, In case you didnt notice, I loved this chapter, so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 20:01 CST
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Oh my goodness! I need to start checking these more often. I didn't know that you updated and I missed a chapter! Shame on me! This is still really great and I love the plot! Please do update as soon as you can, but don't let it kill you that would be horrible! It was really nice of Hiei to give Kurama that gift. Kurama comes out from being babied at the hospital only to be showered with attention at home. Everything went well with Yusuke. Though his mom needs to learn how to handle things in a better way than drinking. How you portray the characters is amazing and it fits them so well. I hope you can update soon!
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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 10:35 CST
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sorry it took me so long to review... i've been busy as hell lately... but that's beside the point. i love this fic, and i want you to up date soon. i love the way you're taking hiei and kurama's relationship slow and not just throwing them in bed to gether. *claps* very well written and suspenseful plot... please up date soon. ja! f.k.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 17:21 CST
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I love it! But i want more action!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter and have no clue where it's going, but will tag along for the ride!
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Reviewed By: HieiAndKuramaLover#? On: November 07, 2004 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I just love your story so much!!! Very clever, well written, and oh-so-kawaii!!! I can't wait to find out what happens -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 20:34 CST
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Yay! I loved it! I hope there's a lot of action in the next one, though! But I loved this chapter and can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 16:52 CST
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SQUEE!!!!!I loved it!!!!That was soooo sweet of Hiei!!!!!!!
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: Matsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story and I don't mind waiting for you to post. I agree that it is better to think out stories before posting. I have to say I was really excited when I saw that you updated. I do hope you are able to update soon but like I said I don't mind waiting.
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Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, am delighted that you updated. Kudos to Yukina for standing up for herself, kudos to Yusuke and Keiko for finally acting like grown-ups, kudos to Hiei for chillin' out some. And kudos to you, for building such a sweet relationship between Hiei and Kurama. It's an absolutely engaging story, and as always, can't wait until your next update!
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