| "Coming Clean" Reviews/Comments [ 232 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 14:28 CDT
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Please add more soon
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Title: katy123
Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 20:13 CDT
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upsate soon it rocks!
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Title: chapter 10
Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still think this is a great story to where you don't need to do much else to make it better other then add a little more action to it now. I do like how you described the way Kurama felt peace around the tree as he regained his ki it sounded very calming. The wait was worth it for this chapter it puts some of the readers at ease. Everything worked out with Yusuke and Keiko though it was funny that Yusuke thought he was going to get hit with one of the cutlry knives. Until next time!!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover (not signed in) On: September 07, 2004 17:50 CDT
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Hey, not sure where you're going with this now, but i shall remain fathful and wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: dark ice13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it it just so awsome!!!!!Poor Kurama he's hurt but thats okay!!!!!!!!!!!^_^ :P
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 21:26 CDT
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Yay!!!!!! You updated!!!! That made me so happy. You dont know how hard it's been to find GOOD YYh stories, at least, ones that catch my interest, the kind that I enjoy to read. Thank you thank you for not abandoning your work! Man, I felt scared for Yuusuke when you said Mr. Yukimura was beside the cutlery. That man can toss a blade like nobody's business.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 23:31 CDT
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This story is great! I had read the first like five chapters months ago but I couldnt read anymore cuz my internet broke. But it's fixed and now you HAVE to keep writing!!! I need more!!! hehehe, this is great!
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Reviewed By: Crazy Clown On: August 02, 2004 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ Wow! I love it so much I'm reviewin twice! Keep up the really really good work!! Update soon! *^_~* ~Lacey~
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Title: I'm gonna die!
Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOVE IT! oh, my god! that was great! i gotta know what happens! and . . . Sequal? Oh YESSS! please update soon. some of us are dying here!
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Reviewed By: Youko Starr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 06:31 CDT
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*wince* That's not good, not good at all. Poor Keiko...no.. poor YUUSUKE. At least there is no kitchenware within reach. If only he could dress as quickly as Hiei *grin*
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Reviewed By: D.J.-chan On: July 22, 2004 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story,and hope you keep wrighting it! ive read it sooooo many times ive lost count! Please keep wrighting and ill keep reviewing^_^!!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very touching yet at the same time funny. Poor Yusuke and Keiko! You do a whole 'I love you' sceen then her parents show up! I found that very amusing. After re-reading the chapter I found his name, but I'm just to lazy to type it... heh. Update soon!! Like you did with this chapter. I've never seen someone update so fast!!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune On: July 21, 2004 11:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so kawai!!!! I love these stories!!!! Who's the one who wants revenge on Kura-kun? Is it your made up or someone from his past??? Update soon please!!!!!!!! Ja Ne!
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Reviewed By: Y.Starr On: July 19, 2004 07:16 CDT
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YAY! Update! I waited as patiently as possible and it was well worth it. I feel bad for Kurama, finally a chance to be healed and Yukina said "Nope nope, tell first, heal later" But I'm impressed with her for actually sticking by her threat to not heal him. She didn't wuss out and do it anyway and used it as leverage to get what she wanted. Very good. Giggling at 'diaper boy'
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Reviewed By: forbidden kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 17:00 CDT
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please please please update. i gotta gotta gotta know what happens!!!!
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