| "The Coyote Child" Reviews/Comments [ 743 ] |
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Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 08:36 PST
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Excellent, as ever. I do enjoy the not-so-subtle matchmaking. :)
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 08:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2004 08:14 PST
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Heh. Why doesn't Emma ask why Inuyasha still has teeth in his mouth after giving swords to so many sons? I can't wait for Eri to show up, or at least for Yukio to mention her.
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Reviewed By: Tqo (the quiet one) On: November 02, 2004 09:49 PST
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I love you!!! I love 'the lucky ones' and I was going to re-read it when I saw this! I love your writing!!! Please update as soon as you can!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!
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Title: Dragon's Lover
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 13:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, Terri. Errr chapter 3, I mean. I'm liking this already. See ya on the next update!
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Title: Dragon's Lover
Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 13:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, Terri. Errr chapter 3, I mean. I'm liking this already. See ya on the next update!
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Reviewed By: lolade On: October 31, 2004 10:09 PST
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Please update! please please please please
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Title: VERY NICE
Reviewed By: OIga On: October 29, 2004 15:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your ihstory is very nice, I love it, is very original and very fine. lemon?? I love YUKIO!!
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: Kaila On: October 29, 2004 15:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!! UPDATE!!! I LOVE YOUR HISTORY!
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Reviewed By: ichie On: October 28, 2004 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read your other story the lucky ones on fanfiction after you finished it and luv it!!! ^.^ i luvin this one too espscially since it's a sequel ^.^ i can never get over these stories they are too good XD ^.^ i'll review if you update!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 02:10 PDT
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yo. sorry for the late review. it's amazing how much time school and a boyfriend can take up. loved the chapter. I'm getting a new Ninja this summer. can't wait. gotta love those bikes. nehoo. i have now stayed up way too late and didn't even make a dent in all the reading i'm behind in. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 25, 2004 19:36 PDT
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love it!
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Reviewed By: Almaseti On: October 25, 2004 12:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed a few grammar things to nitpick over, but nothing really major. You've created a highly enjoyable universe with Lucky Ones, (I was pretty peeved at seeing that get booted from FF.net) and I'm happy to see it continue here. One thing in particular that caught my attention: You said that the war in Iraq started five years ago(2002), meaning this takes place three years in the future(2007), when whoever gets the Oval Office will be nearing the end of his term. This means another Effing election year in the near future, with either John Kerry running for re-election against some Republican or Dick Cheney against some Democrat. Think that could come into play in the story any? -Alma
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Reviewed By: Emajor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 11:16 PDT
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I'm so glad you added this continuation! I look forward to further updates!
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Reviewed By: Ms Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 22:18 PDT
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Weee!! I love it! The continuation of character from the "Lucky Ones" to this is just phenomenal. I love the interactions and can't wait for more
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