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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 00:21 PDT
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hey, sorry for the late review. school and friends have been keeping me extra bissy. i loved that chapter. it was so sad at the end though. poor Yukio. i hope his heart turns out ok. can't wait for more. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: u ignorent fools [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 21:22 PDT
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AAwww. Thats so sad. I hope Yukio becomes happy. Nobody should be alone, left with nothing inside of them but emptyness. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 18:22 PDT
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wow this is touching please update soon
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 17:22 PDT
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*sniffle* I feel so bad for him, but he is so sweet and gentle. I hope that he can find happiness again, even if it is not nec. with a mate. I am REALLY enjoying this story and look forward to your future chapters. Till next time. ^.~
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Title: EXCELLENT!!
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 15:27 PDT
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Great chapter! It was absolutely excellent! But man, I felt so sorry and really felt for Yukio and his conflicting emotions! Oh well, I guess in time he'll be able to move on. Great job! I'll be looking forward to a new chapter soon so update as soon as you can! Thanks. :)
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 15:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Emma and Yukio... i likey! They seem perfect for each other! Were did Inuyasha go, though?
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Reviewed By: purplepeopleater On: October 11, 2004 13:30 PDT
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Awwwww! Poor Yukio! I want to give him a hug. Is Emma Miaka's reincarnation? I'm anticipating the trip to Arizona. It's been my favorite state ever since I took a six day road trip down there. People who say the desert is brown have no idea what they're talking about. I just came back from a trip to Ohio to watch bull riding (and stalk cowboys), and it was great to see an update. Update soon! Cheers.
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Reviewed By: Usotsuke On: October 11, 2004 00:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your writing The Lucky Ones was especially great, but this story seems to be also very good. This story is turning out to be another great epic.
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Reviewed By: Bloodykitsun(NLI) On: October 10, 2004 22:57 PDT
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Poor Yukio..... on second thought, it's kind of....... funny I guess, but still, poor Yukio....
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: October 10, 2004 21:56 PDT
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Aww. Poor yukio. So sad. Another great chapter. Thanks!!
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Reviewed By: karla On: October 10, 2004 20:44 PDT
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another ouvre d'art! i'm eternally grateful that u decided to continue with ur story.....really brightens up my day when i come home from a long shift and see an e-mail saying you've updated. i'm patiently waiting for your next chapter, i hope yukio is feeling better!!!! arigatou!!! beautiful-cherry-blossom
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Reviewed By: darkinufan On: October 10, 2004 19:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter as always and I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope to see if youko will court the girl or not. keep up the good work and update soon! dark
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: mebizevil On: October 10, 2004 17:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter just makes me love your character Yukio even more! It's so sad what he puts himself through!! Glad to see a sequal to the Lucky One's universe, keep writing!!
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Title: Nice to spend time with these characters again!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story last week, and I'm enjoying it very much so far. Poor Yukio--still in so much pain, after all the years that have passed since Miaka died. And it's nice to return to the universe of The Lucky Ones.
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Reviewed By: Black Wren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:18 PDT
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We are going to get Yukio a woman he deserves who is ten times better than Miaka. Took me a second to understand the joke in Kagome's t-shirt but then I had to remember Wizard of Oz before I got. All that talk about pizza made by mouth water. Being stuck in a little town college with no car sucks! I'm stuck eating cafeteria food, blah! Love this love this love this! More chapter please!
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