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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:03 PDT
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I like this fic already! And even better, there are hints that Yukio will find love! Thanks again for a great read and I look forward to the next chapter. Update soon please! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 15:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!!Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: ChAnDrA16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 14:59 PDT
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I absolutely love how the story is moving. I LOVE how you're putting so many different nationalities into play and how you really emphasize the cultural differences between all of them. It's really really well done. And I sense some fluff going to be going on between Emma and Yukio....am I right? please let me be right! And the ending just made me want to cry.....awwwww update soon!
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Reviewed By: Farahlayla On: October 10, 2004 14:52 PDT
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This was such a sweet sad chapter, almost had me crying! poor yukio! I love your new story and cant wait to read more. It would be nice to see him and emma end up together.....yukio deserves a nice family of his own ^_^
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 13:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!i didn't relize the Lucky Ones was going to be continued. I love this new fic! I hope you update real soon. i love this!
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: October 10, 2004 13:27 PDT
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Oh, that's so sad, I'm typing with tears in my eyes. Poor Yukio is confused and frightened by his reactions to Emma. Is she Miaka's reincarnation? It'd be nice to see him with someone, he deserves to be happy. I'd love to see him with a family of his own. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: KagoKitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:04 PDT
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Ya know, I just knew you'd be trying to get Yukio together with another woman...nice choice! This should be fun to see how it goes with Emma. Great chapter, too. =^-.~^=
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: October 10, 2004 11:47 PDT
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Oh poor Yukio. I hope this Emma girl can do something for him! Once again, great chapter, great story!
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Reviewed By: Lara Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 11:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm falling for this few fic just as quickly as I did for "The Lucky Ones". I'm rooting for Yukio and Emma. I'm usually a sucker for spin-off pairings... speaking of, I'm curious to know whatever became of Ayumi and Miroku. I liked them together also. I hope we can see a bit more of them in future too. Oh and the name Loki is perfect!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNetiri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 11:21 PDT
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awww... poor Yukio... update soon! --Netiri
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Reviewed By: ali_cat929 On: October 10, 2004 10:04 PDT
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AWWWW Poor Yukio. *huggles*
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Reviewed By: MouF [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 08:54 PDT
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Great perspective in view: Yukio and Emma! At least now Yukio's crying. Maybe he's beginning to accept that Miaka's dead, that he can move on and be happy once again. Great chapter!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:57 PDT
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Poor Yukio. Great chapter. Everything I've read of yours has been amazing. Please keep up the great writing.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:48 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Graet job, keep up the great work, I can't wait for your next chapter. ^U^
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Reviewed By: myeerah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 07:35 PDT
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Oh, very well done. :) The tension between Yukio and Emma is palpable and delicious.
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