| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: DragonHostile17 On: May 02, 2005 18:14 CDT
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Balls?! you used balls as a curse word?! where do you come up with this shit?! i swear you must have like this psycotic dream to make us all die laughing. honestly, no one but you could come up with something that censor-friendly funny. props to you on yet another successful chapter. you never cease to amaze me. rock on sister.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 18:01 CDT
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I felt so bad for Nez...she was desperate to get that box...not that I blame her. Well, even if you decide to edit your chapters first, I still hope you continue to write because you're stories are always worth reading.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story. I've been reading it from the beginning and I've enjoyed all of the chapters. I especially loved this chapter. The testosterone was flying! I kind of expected Ryo to freak when he saw Nez in the dress. There is one thing I have been wondering, though. This may sound weird, but does Kicharo have feelings for Nex besides friendship? I'm kind of wondering because he gets really frustrated with Ryo when he upsets Nezumi. AND he was the one who started everything by asking if Nez was gay. I may be wrong, but is he secretly jealous or something?
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:16 CDT
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o o o o *jumps up and down in excitment* i wanna know what's in the box...can't remember if you told us(don't think you did) hey Nezumi's got a secret, and Will Ryomaru ever shred that dress(it be funny if he did :D) PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...*this continues for a few hours* *gasp* Please *gasp* oh i give up i'm so out of breath *gasps for a while while a few random kids come up and pokes me with a long stick* OW! that hurt you little brats *scares 'em all away* N E Ways please update any fic I don't care just do it ASAP PLEEEEAAAAASSSSSSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank-you, Zirra
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it the same box that Nez put the flower in? Anyway, thank you for updating (Now that youy aren't the chapters are getting even better--no offense or anything) and it was a WONDERFUL chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 16:37 CDT
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warm fuzzies sue! This chapter was wonderful! I wonder what was in the box! The question is was nez embarrased or was she afraid of what was in the box?? Yes I am the queen of randomness! Awesome A/N! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Wolf's Rain Kagome On: May 02, 2005 15:52 CDT
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Wow, I was hoping that Ryo would finally tell Nez how he feels, or visa versa(sp?). I do hope that you continue to write fanfictions after you finish the purity series. I enjoy your stories so much. I was just wondering, have you ever written a fic because someone requested it? One more question, are Nez and Ryo going to have kids in P4? I mean, even consider having kids at all? Do they ever really warm up to each other or is there always going to be this angsty-type thing between them? I don't think I have anything more to ask you right now, so GREAT CHAPTER!! As always I love your work.
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:13 CDT
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Lol luv the whole dress idea!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 14:59 CDT
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arrgghh! Damnit- His Youkai told him to tell her, not ask her a question. Stupid Ryo. Growling in public - he has a lot to learn still, but we love him, and so does Nez... I love them and their story. Sometimes I feel like these chapters are the only thing that I have to look forward to during the day.
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Title: two questions please
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue, I have two questions for you. 1. I know this probably sounds stupid but what is a "Beta"? ( I am really sorry if I offend anybody by asking this question) 2. Have you published any works and If so can you please tell us? thank you sue. Joyce
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Reviewed By: LadyBlade (NSI) On: May 02, 2005 13:37 CDT
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This is more question than review, although you've yet again put out a wonderful chapter. Props to Diana for the creative put-down and taking the time to explain what exactly she'd said. ^_^ Ok, my question is this, you mentioned you liked Anne Rice and her 'incarnations'... does she write as JK Rowling? My sisters claim no, but I figured I'd ask the person who wrote the statement for clarification.. please?
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Title: good writing
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always sue an overall ten and a half to your great writing. I loved the chapter. Sue, I do read some of the writing on ff.net and I think it would be sad for you to stop posting there because the readers would miss out on a great writer as yourself. I understand the painstanking time it takes to create something. I make jewelry and when I hear a comment like " this isn't anything of interest here" at certain craft shows where I display my jewelry, I what to rip those people's comments out of them and shove it up their a****s. Yep the world is a stupid and cruel place at times. But you sue are the best!! Please keep the creative juices flowing and be blessed. J
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 13:28 CDT
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Ah ha! With a little prodding from his youkai (ok, maybe a lot of prodding) Ryo is finally questioning 'why' Nez allowed/participated in that fateful night with him. Her continued reluctance to discuss the encounter is not surprising but it looks like Ryo is going to use that good old stubborn nature, courtesy of his father, to get his answers...now that he's asking the right questions. I have a feeling that finding out that she has loved him this whole time, all through his idiotic parade of women and clueless camaraderie...by his side and secretly hurting, is going to absolutely floor him. (Is it too awful of me to enjoy the anticipation of the impending water/fire works? *chuckle*) Ryo's finding of Nez's secret memory box reminds me of that game Hot & Cold, where you helpfully call out, "You're getting warmer!" to someone searching for a carefully hidden object. Finding the box is a Red-Hot find for Ryo (appropriate for such a Red-Hawt Hanyou! LOL). I also love the frustrated dominance fueling all the "you can't -blank- your Mate!" rambling, turning the normal tongue-tied Ryomaru into an adorably loquatious buffoon. Just another example of his passion. LMAO! -- Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 12:36 CDT
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LOL! Great chapter! It makes me sad that you don't think you're going to be posting for awhile after Purity 3 and 4 are done. :o( By all means, take as much time as you need (not that you need my permission lol) but I really hope you decide to keep posting, because your stories are amazingly well done. Honestly, I think most of them are better than some I've read by published authors. You and your wonderful stories are the main reason I've decided to try my hand at writing and I want to thank you for that. You are an inspiration to young authors everywhere, and you should be extremely proud of that. :o) Ok, enough of my rambling, can't wait to see what happens next with Ryo and Nez! Have a great week, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Shiga(not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 00:14 CDT
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Hello there! Sorry about not reviewing for a while! I have been so damn busy and then on Tuesday I lost my uncle so it's been hectic. But today I was able to catch up and review! Sorry about all these bad reviewers! =O! It's really horrible!!!!! But as long as you post I'm gonna keep on reading =D! Now I am off to bed *yawn* 1:00 a.m.ish ugh! =P BYE! Awesome story by the way(forgot to say it) loving it more and more!
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