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| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 › » ] | Reviewed By: Twin_Star_of_Suzaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 01:38 CDT
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*growls* it's flamers like that that really pisses me off sometimes. I don't get them due to the fact that i've been trying to write original fiction and am kinda protective of my stories so I don't post them on the net... But as so many people, and the lovely Sueric said herself, "if you don't like the story for any reason, DON'T FUCKING READ IT!" come on! it's not that hard of a concept, is it?! Sueric, I'm a big fan of your writing and an always axious to read anything new you post. Please don't let the few stupid, and often time, Fluffies get you down. ^_^;
| Reviewed By: Ladyblade (NSI) On: April 27, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter ^_^ Just a short note really, since I personally think our betas to be the true reviewers seeing as they kindly, and bluntly, point out inconsistencies, grammer errors and general "this doesn't fit" botches. LOL ok maybe it's just me. But I was wondering if you could pass on to your grammar beta that her note left me laughing at such an extensive and well worded set down to the 'troglodytes'... ugh I'm sure i spelled that wrong... well off to see if i can get another chapter of my own out.
| Reviewed By: Red Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:55 CDT
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Beautiful...I don't have much more to say than that. Although I do wish that you had someone to filter your reviews, or that you didn't bother to read them. I can gather you are the type of person who wouldn't like to be cut off from the readers, but to tell you the truth, I'm terrified that after your last stories are finished you'll quit posting any new ones. I look forward to each new chapter every day. I don't like the thought that I may not have any new stories/chapters to brighten my day. Much love and a flame proof suit, -Red
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:32 CDT
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Great chappy as usual, I happen to love the character Nezumi, I especially like her real name seeming as it's mine, ;D, but that's besides the point. Update asap please. Oh and I just want to give you my support in your feelings about flames, pointless hurtful words every single one of them.*sigh* To bad so many people send them. Well till next time, Zirra
| Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 23:29 CDT
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All right, I'll admit that I am not your biggest fan(hope that didn't come out the wrong way), but I truly admire your work. It's fics stories like these that attract a lot of enthusatic readers and reviewers, but on the flip side of the coin...it attracts flamers. Maybe this is my opinion but where there is an excellent story and lots of positive feedback, negativity isn't too far behind. That's just true to life, and you have to fight through it. I admire your strength to continue on posting even with the threat of flamers. From one author to another, I applaud you, and I hope you never give up doing what makes you happy--which is posting fanfiction, right? Well, that's all i have to say. Until next time...God bless...
| Reviewed By: Akihana-not signed in On: April 26, 2005 23:04 CDT
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I agree. that review was just dumb. sure, i haven't liked some of your characters, but thats just my problem. no reason to bitch at you about it. I love Nez though. i guess because she reminds me of me a lot. scary, ne? I think there are plenty of readers out there who support you, and will gladly track down and beat stupid flamers. you have us, sue. Great chapter, as usual, and see ya soon.
| Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: April 26, 2005 22:41 CDT
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Great addition to the story! Sorry I haven't reviewed for awhile. *ducks and covers as a precaution* I've been busy working on my own writing ventures: several pieces in communication research, a few dealing with theories of rhetoric, and who can forget all of those damn philosophers from the ancient Greeks to the post-modernist (I'd love to forget them.. really-I would!) Needless to say, to me, reading your story equivalent to what finding a fresh-ice cold-Figi-brand-bottled water store in the middle of the barren wasteland. (See, it's even the good water!) Tonight was one of those points where I just wanted to rip my hair out of my head because of the contradictions from those horrid philosophers. For bringing me a mini vacation for my mind, I thank you greatly! haha. And at the same time, I apologize profusely on the behalf of those heinous people who write horrible things that are untrue. I personally love the character of Nez, I really do. I was just thinking to myself earlier today: wow-Sue really has created a vast empire-All these new characters, all of their lives, all of their stories. It's overwhelming when you think about it. How long ago did you start all this again? It feels like I've been reading your stuff forever, haha. Great job, it really is amazing. Well, I've been truant from my studies for too long and I think I hear them calling my name. Damn it... They found me. :( Well, once again, great job, and I cannot wait for more! --Aitu
| Reviewed By: HAB On: April 26, 2005 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again your writing amazes me. I loved this chapter and can't wait to know what happens next. Please update really soon
| Reviewed By: EAP On: April 26, 2005 22:29 CDT
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DAMN those cursed lunar cycles!!! That scene was absloutally breathtaking, I can't believe it was the full moon....Grrr. And I'm getting the heeby-geebies from that last bit. Is something going to happen thats going to prevent Nez from saying something to Ryo? *cough*death*cough* I hope not. I can't believe you actually get reveiews like that. I don't understand how people would take time to write that out to tell you. Jeez. And your Grammer Beta rocks, by the way. I mean, I haven't heard 'pigeon-livered troglodyte' in a long time. She must be one of those super smart kick ass people. Uh, back OT...I really liked this chapter, one of my favorites, just because of the beginning. I hope you keep writing and updateing despite whoresonned mandrake's!!
| Reviewed By: kitcat99 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! The scene I was waiting for...heh heh wondered how he would break the news about pups. It was pretty much how I though it would be here wondering about it being against the biological laws. But he is right a quarter-demon with miko powers is kind of against the laws anyway. =P I guess his pups if he has any will have to abide by the same rules as other hanyou even if they will only have a 1/8th demon blood? Anyway keep up the good work and don't let stupid people get to you. To that flamer: If you don't like clueless people than don't watch Inuyasha at all. You have to admit as far as Kagome goes Inuyasha is just plain old dense. Though he does seem to start to realize what is going now. (don't want to spoil it so I won't say more) We'll see when it all ends what happens but until then fanfiction keeps me going and this series is one of the best out there. I like Nezumi, Sierra, Toga and all of your characters and you characterize the original characters quite well. Looking forward to more and to see if Toga changes diapers. ::evil smirk:: I'd like to see that illustrated. I have a feeling if Nezumi and Ryo have a pup she would find a way to get him to help. Eagerly awaiting the next installment, Kitcat^_^
| Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: April 26, 2005 21:53 CDT
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Ooo very close... I see Nez is getting warmer to the idea anyway, of being closer, of having a -*cough* real relationship with Ryo. I Love the whole kitten-nipple-naked-covering-the bits stuff... LOL. I'm still Loving the story. Love all of your well rounded characters, and their believable reactions. I'll sit at work patiently waiting and hoping for updates - a break I always look forward to.
| Title: IKMS
Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Has it slipped Ryo's mind that he still needs to mark Nez? The action looks like it is really starting to head towards a big showdown and the poor gal is still vulnerable. I love how you make sure to keep all the original characters in the story, even if it's just a little bit here and there. I really enjoy getting your updates so thank you for all the chapters!
| Title: Applause
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: April 26, 2005 21:40 CDT
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Clapping, Clapping, Clapping. Oh, wait. Is that bitchy of me? Oh Hell! Either way. BRAVO SUE! BRAVO! I enjoy your eloquent way of assisting certian slammers into the realization that they are not all they truly believe themselves to be. Their apparent lack of intellect and understanding of plot lines above porn smut is so beautifully stated when you get loose! Sue... I have to tell you. I love you!! The chapter though: THAT I REALLY LOVE! That cat is gonna get hurt! I was rolling! But, I really am suspicious of the impending trouble I think I smell coming. Suspense is painful. Thanks for everything! Wlfhund
| Title: GREAT CHAPTER
Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: April 26, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great chapter!!! i love this story. it brings out the charaters so well! i can rally picture Nez when she says things to Ryo, and how Ry would react. this is a great story! keep up the good work! thanks for a wonderful chapter!
| Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: April 26, 2005 21:12 CDT
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I won't go into another tirade on the idiocy of 80% of the people on the web. If you ever do get fed up and just want to post them in your community I think you would be valid in doing so. I know that I wouldn't mind checking it daily for updates (I am not a member as of yet but that is because I am not a very active internet person and I don't like to join things that I won't contribute to). Anywho, my two cents ... onto the story. I have so many favorite lines! It isn't often that I read a story that has me laughing outloud. You have a real talent - I would even go so far to say that you should consider script writing - you have that sort of quick wit. I also have to believe, from your writing, that your romantic life must be amazing for you to be able to come up with such scenes (kudos to your husband!). I mean dear god - I had to turn the air conditioner up! *grin* Finally, I have to ask - are you able to choose the adds at the bottom of your story? My amusement in them continues with this chapter's advertisement being "soft paws/claws 13.99" *giggle*
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