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| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] | | Pages (74): [ « ‹ 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 › » ] | Title: The Flammer
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: April 27, 2005 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nez is sweet, if a bit thick-headed...or just generally in denile. Hopefully when she gets back from Egypt she'll see what Ryo is TRYING to tell her. Doesn't help that he is about as good with words as my mute sister. Oi... I don't know, don't care, and for the sake of the flammer's hide, don't want to know the actual-real-world identity of that...chicken-livered fetus eater or I would, in all truth, take Nez's frequent flier miles and show them what a REAL flammer looks like. As that is impossible I will just give my not-so-silent support and hope that I make you laugh once-in-awhile. Oh, and the almost-'lemon' that was almost-cruel, but I respect your choice. Just make the actual citrus that much sweeter. I'm sure now Ryo is about to take his own miles, fly to the moon and figure out a way to chuck it far, far away... OH! And it isn't biologically impossible, techniclly the organs that produce sperm could only be activated on certain days, and otherwise be turned-off. Like how people's minds go kind of loco during lunar phases... I think too much. ^_^; Hire someone to much throuhg your reviews and cull the bad ones for you, then you'd feel better. I work for curly fries.
| Reviewed By: Kyonarai(nsi) On: April 27, 2005 17:06 CDT
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I know I haven't reviewed in a while, mostly because I've been pretty busy and have barely had time to read the new chapters. I just had to say something though. I really hate all of those people who flame you and say stupid things. I wish that they would just not review if they don't like something, it's your story after all, you can do whatever the hell you want to it. I love all of your characters, they have great depth and personality. You are an awesome writer, and please don't let anyone convince you otherwise. I have a perfect quote for those flamers: "Never miss an opportunity to shut up!"Anyways, love your story! ~Kyo
| Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 16:27 CDT
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haha i can tell that things seem to be going VERY well between ryo and nez hehe but yay! they seem to be getting closer and understanding one another so sweet!! n i just want to also comment on that rude review...i definitly agree with you on how if a person doesnt like a character or even anything about a story then there really is no point in reading it...i mean THEY should try writing a story that benefits what they like instead of criticizing others...but thats just my opinion...well anyways I THINK that this story is FABULOUS and i'm reading your other fics [chronicles] to me the characters fits what the plot of your story is and thats just peachy with me...
| Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was an awesome chapter!! I loved the way Ryo explained the whole story about the Shikon No Tama. . . . I thought it was really cool. I don't know why I thought it was cool, it just was. Hmm. . . . . I am VERY curious to know what Nezumi had to say, but oh well, hopefully I will find out on the next chapter. I think that without Nezuni realizing it, she is gradually growing used to Ryo's prescence, because she seems like a totally different person now since the beggining of the story. Am I on the right track? I don't know. It may just be my twisted head thinking the wrong thing.
| Title: awe!
Reviewed By: fudge On: April 27, 2005 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!! they are finally starting to undersatand each other and it's soooooooo cute!Pleasae keep updating and nice work!
| Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 14:42 CDT
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Oh, i want to hurt that commenter. How can anyone be so rude as to flame someone on how the character's personality is?! It's just plain stupid. If you don't like the character, why read the story? Myself personally, i love Nezumi. She taking everything really well. She's shy about her feelings, too. She reminds me a lot of myself and i love her for it. The way you write is beyond anything i could ever do. I'd like to see these flamers write a story. Most of them don't even have fics. What right do they have to flame other writers?! Ugh, drives me insane. Alright, anyway, i loved the fluff in this chapter. Very cute. And i suppose it was wise that he told her about when she could get pregnant. This chapter is probably my favorite. Good luck on your story and i'll keep reading it!(and hopefully reviewing)lol -Steph (CresentMoon21)
| Title: about insensitive reviews
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh sue, I am so sorry you are upset. I hope with every one annoying review that you get twenty supportive reviews that love your writing. I will be honest that I may not always like a character but I havent found a character created by you that I didnt fall in love with. I truly love your characters in all your fics, but especially in this story. Nez and Ryo seem to be acting like any couple trying to understand each other's feelings and making mistakes or learning what love is. Isn't that how most relationships are? I really am touched how your writing seems to bring these two characters to life. Thank you for writing this wonderous fic. J.
| Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I have 3 cats myself and I laughed out loud at the beginning of this chapter. If I had a nickel for every time one of them has decided that I needed playing with while I was asleep... Enjoying the story immensely, I love the way Ryo and Nezumi are inching closer and closer to each other. Looking forward to more!
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 27, 2005 10:57 CDT
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Ah. Looks like Nez is finally coming around. Good for her! Don't be stubborn Ryo. Go back to doing what you love - protecting humans and law abiding yokai. Thanks for the hopeful chapter! I needed it today!
| Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Sue. I agree with you, but I still hope that you will continue to write... and to block reviewers like that! Ugh, the nerve! I absolutely love the character of Nezumi. And I love reading her character development. Her conflict is what makes her Nezumi. And her resistance to (most of) Ryomaru's charms makes this one hella fun story to read! Hey, at the very least, you have a faithful reader in lil' ol' me. (Like that helps, but...) Oh, and might I say: "Go Grammar Beta!" Damn, that was funny. Sue, with people like that behind you, just know that you are loved! ~pagan_sedjou
| Reviewed By: Dar CoBien On: April 27, 2005 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know, while I enjoy reading all of your stories, this one is probably my favorite. You started with, what I believe was a great original plot, and continued to make it just like all your other great stories: completely addictive to read. I have a question about Ryo, did you mention how old he is? (I really can't remember) Thank you for not giving up on posting. Everyday I look forward to reading something of yours.
| Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 27, 2005 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again another great chapter. I have a question. How old was Tyo when he started to hunt demons for his uncle? How old is Sheshomaru? What year is this based in? I apoligize if I have already asked you these questions I tend not to remember things. Wait I have one more question. If You could name a author with as good writing style as you and creativity who would that be?
| Title: Catching Up Again
Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 03:53 CDT
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Been offline for a few days, so I had to play catch up again. The latest chapters have been wonderful, Sue. Please keep it coming! "whoresonned mandrake, most lacking in gall" ... Wow, I thought I was the only one who liked Shakespearean insults. :D
| Title: Nezumi
Reviewed By: naeryn-nsi On: April 27, 2005 01:41 CDT
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I'd just like to say, I have been reading your fics for quite some time, and have loved almost all of you OC's. Nezumi is one of your most complex to date, and she is one of the reasons I am enjoying this fic so much. She is a real person, with insecurities, bravado, fears, and endearing traits. (Not that others don't have this, or that the original characters lack in any of these...) She blends so seamlessly in with the original characters and other OCs in this fic it's hard to remember that she isn't actually in the anime. Thank you for the time you take to write fanfiction and post it. Don't let the idiots get you down, especially when they can't even punctuate correctly.
| Reviewed By: Rawben.. On: April 27, 2005 01:40 CDT
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"whoresonned mandrake, most lacking in gall"...that's damn funny. ;) ok, loved the chapters! and i'm glad nez is figuring out that ryo hates his job, i dont want him suffering alone. I LOVED THE TOGA PART! damn funny! and i love seirras reaction! lol... "yeah, i got a new low light lens! i have others!" lol... anyhow, i love nez! i know others may not, but shes' one of my fav of your original characters... along w/ ryo and kich... anyhow, i'm excited for your next chapters! and dont mind the bad reviews, sometimes people are just mean. ;) your style of writing and originality are exceptional! dont take mean reviews to heart. have a nice day!!!
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