| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Title: Purity:3
Reviewed By: XLWarriorRikkuXL On: April 02, 2005 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I LOVE your story so far! I gave you straight 10's because I couldn't take my eyes of the story until I got up to the chapter you stopped at. I don't wanna rush you but, I really want to read the next chapters! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 13:24 CST
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How in the heck did I miss this yesterday??? I must have been more busy at work than I thought!! Ryo needs to wake the f**k up! Then again, I suppose he can't lie in his sleep either.
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Title: An update?
Reviewed By: tachi_fossae [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 11:04 CST
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I thought you said you weren't going to update yesterday. Why did you change your mind? Not that I'm complaining, I just thought we were in the doghouse (pardon the pun) for complaining about the Purity 4 preview. That aside, great chapter! I was rather surprized that neither Nez nor Ryo shouted in this chapter. Is it possible that the children are finally growing up?
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Title: hubby's wench
Reviewed By: Inuyashas kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm if she really thought about it, could this be the reassurance that she needs? Or at least the beginning of it? He is dreaming of her after all and not some other woman.
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Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 01:38 CST
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Awesome chapter!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now ain't that a bitch; I feel so sorry for Nez.
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Title: heyoooo
Reviewed By: Mizbum2u On: April 02, 2005 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you! when you said only half of him was awake does that mean that his youkai blood was awake? wait... that came out wrong... what i meant was that ryo wasn't actually awake but his youkai blood was kinda couching him with her? i dunno hard to explain... great chapter by the way... nezumi is finally started to get some stuff down-i hope! well if he was a sleep and said her name what does that mean? heh heh... 10's all the way baby! update soon! and have a good weekend! -hien
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Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 00:13 CST
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Well, sooner or later Ryo is going to have to tell Nez what he does for a living, even if he does quit. She is going to be upset but I think she would more upset if he kepts disappearing in the middle of the night.
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Title: Loving every chapter
Reviewed By: thoughts On: April 01, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how wonderful. Ryo is just as you would imagine Inuyasha's son to be like. I think you got it right when you had Shippou explain to him that he inherited his father's "baka" gene. :) I love how you have made him like Inuyasha but not so harsh due to his family's influence. It is always a good sign when I feel like taking one of the characters aside and shaking some sense in to them. Hmm... an interesting form of sleeping there. Poor Ryo. Let him remember some of the good stuff. I like the potential conflicts that you are setting up. I'm hoping that you will continue to surprize me with your solutions. I'd love to see a scene with Inuyasha explaining to Nezumi that Ryo inherited his baka gene or lack of tact/finesse from him. I'm looking forward to seeing how you rescue Ryo from his lovable but truly hopeless self.
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Reviewed By: .Akihana. On: April 01, 2005 22:40 CST
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Nothing like a good fluffy chapter in the evening. I'm sorry i have nothing better to say. What happened to the Purity one shot?
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: April 01, 2005 20:56 CST
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GROWL!!!!!!!! LOL at least I didn't read this one at work I love teh fluffyness... ::sigh:: I can die happy today much wanted fluffyness. Heh is it so wrong that I keep reading the last part multiple times??? I love P3 great stuff you made my day! Thank you so much for the update you rock!
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 20:49 CST
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Wow....yes...wow. LOVE that chapter. Coulda been called...'The Baka gets a Clue" He finally realizes he's putting HER in danger by not marking her and did I see a hint of admitting that he refuses to let her go. Well apparently his unconcious/youkai knows JUST what it wants....LMAO....it keeps getting all the action. LOL...GO YOUKAI!!!
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Title: Purity 3:Forever
Reviewed By: demonqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this story humourous, serious,sad,romantic. Like a good story with a mix, it leaves one wondering what is going to happen next. You hope that Ryo and Nez come to an understanding and admit their feelings for one another. Only then will they be truly happy.
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Reviewed By: gih... On: April 01, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa, i love this story more and more. this is my fav out of all 4 purity stories... also, i think you can rate this a R instead of a NC17... i've read both, and nc17 has more... citrus.
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Title: The Angst...oh Lord the Angst!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 09:34 CST
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Poor Nez, (I'm all too fond of that phrase) she is hurting so bad. I always have to grab the tissues when reading P3, I kid you not. Ryo is going to have to tell her what he does because, as much as she hates blood, the thought that he might be with another woman is worse. Be as gradual with the telling as you want, Ryo, that's good advice, but make a start...and soon. -- God I love this story!!
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