| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (NLI) On: April 01, 2005 08:40 CST
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Poor, poor Ryo. Such a dumbass. So i have a question about the whole inner youkai claiming Nez thingy: Why didn't Ryo's inner youkai (or whatever you call it) protest him 'dating' other women? Shouldn't it have only wanted Nezuni? Or was Ryo 'dating' other women just to get Nezumi out of his mind? Great Chapter!
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Reviewed By: maniac mansion On: April 01, 2005 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey! Great chapter (as always) Poor Nez, doesn't know what she wants...doesn't she? No chap until monday?! Sniiiiiiiif!!! Purity 4 with Gin... There wi'll be Purity 5 with Kichiro?
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Reviewed By: lakskslsks On: April 01, 2005 02:10 CST
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another great chapter! you're doing so well!
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Title: Trouble in Paradise
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 23:53 CST
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Well, they are going to have an interesting talk when he gets home. I kind of disappointed that you will not be posting a chapter tomorrow but I am excited to see your one-shot.
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Reviewed By: wlfhund On: March 31, 2005 21:15 CST
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Yeah! Sess/Yasha AND Toga/Gin battling! That was so fabulous! Oh, why oh why... I do so get the feeling that Ryo is getting ready to get blindsided. Poor man, i am not sure he even sees the truck barreling down on him??? I love this story sue! A ONE shot??? Can't wait for that! Gotta love it! BEAUTIFUL! Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: March 31, 2005 20:36 CST
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Hmm.....very interesting! I'm actyually impatient. Can't wait to see the oneshot!~!!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 19:11 CST
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ahh! are you going to make a fic for Kich too??!Great chappie by the way!
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I think what Kich said might become reality...if Nez is still awake when Ryo gets home...oh man, he's in for it...big time!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 16:45 CST
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whoa...is ryo losing control of his demon side? cuz he says "what happening to me?" uh-oh....but its just a thought...aww no purity 2maro :( haha but i'll read the one-shot!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 16:25 CST
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Youkai-human relations huh? Well...I guess there is some truth to that... A purity one shot? Arigato!!! WE do love you, even if there are some jerks who flame....
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooohhh cool!!!! Awesome. . . . the blood thing was a littlke. . . anyway. . . . I like blood, I sort of think it tastes good (mine only). I'll make sure to read the oneshot!!!! Oh yeah, and today is my best friend's birthday. I got her a Linkin Park T-shirt because she has a crush on Mike Shinoda.
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: March 31, 2005 15:51 CST
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dun dun dun duuuuuuuuuun.... Oh ya that was an ominous chapter. Ryo is going to get himself into some serious crap... :: shakes head :: The angst level is rising!!!! Makes me wanna smack him I think Ryo got more then just a little fair share of the baka gene. Makes for a great story though. :) Poor Nez I feel so badly for her.
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 31, 2005 15:23 CST
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poor nez... I want to cry with her. She loves him, she misses him, and he's right in front of her.. and she feels like she can't touch him w/o loosing him forever - which at this point is as bad as loosing her mom was at 7. *sigh* Ryo is basically Youkai Law Enforcement. Nez would understand that - but maybe not the means to that end... ah well. Ryo is going to get busted for sure getting back into the apartment - AND he'll feel guilty cause she's been crying again! HA.. guilt is a good thing -Nez can use that!
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Title: Question???
Reviewed By: Jason C On: March 31, 2005 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a good question. It acually has something to do with this story too. Wil Gin, kich, or Ryo ever lose control/get realy realy pissed or have a near death experience for their Youkia blood to take controle (ie transform into their demon forms) So will they or will they not? Has that even happened in any of the Purity stories?
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Title: My plan is almost complete...
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus On: March 31, 2005 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Did I also mention you're the Queen of Angst? Sitting up there in your computer chair with your whip telling the little angst and sextual frustration demons to do your bidding. And hiding it all away when the cow-I mean children come home. "mommy what are you writing?" "Nothing Billy go play with you're toys." "Mommy what's-" "Look chocolate!"And I do try in aswer to your comment. I have those days too... I'm senseing a genetical problem with the InuYasha spawn, they all have problems with the girl but they won't tell the girl because they try to protect her and in the ends it blows up in their faces and the readers have to wait TEN MORE CHAPTERS for them to finnally KISS again. But you're compensation is sweet enough, and you write so well, that we're angry at the charecters for being idiots and when it all comes together we sigh happily and go eat the first soild food we've had in days (Chronicles took me awhile... like scissors-to-the-beard-I-didn't-have-when-I-started while...) Good thing about Nez being afraid of blood is that she can't kill him... of course she could just wrap poisen in a doggy treat...oh dear I'll stop.
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