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Title: amazed the umpth time
Reviewed By: starbrella (not sighed on) On: July 13, 2005 15:36 EDT
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YAY!!! I'm so happy to hear that your going to update this more now, i was worried for a sec that you would stop and considrate on other things ::smiles innocently:: N e ways, i LOOOOVVVVEEEE ITTT!!!! I demand another update! lolz great work!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this. I could just see Bulma smarting off to everyone who tried to help her! ^__^ I know how I was with my first child at least. But you ended it there?? I want Veggie to see Trunks!! ;__;
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Reviewed By: rose of vegetasei On: July 13, 2005 13:08 EDT
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Oh, I wanted to see Vegeta's first interaction with Trunks. It's wonderful to see how Vegeta has evolved from the blood thirsty man we first meet in DBZ. In some ways I'd never say Vegeta was evil but misguided in life and I think that really shows in this fic. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: TT On: July 13, 2005 12:50 EDT
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I simply love it! (well thats abt all i can say, not very constructive but its true. Hope you dont mind me spamming your review board with all these little admiration notes)
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Reviewed By: TemptingTemptation [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 03:13 EDT
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That was just yummy! I can't wait to read more chapters. That was just so stimulating. I love rain soaked, shove me up against a wall intensity. I'm sorry that its taken me so long to catch up on this story, but I'm glad that I have the time to pick it up again.
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Title: Hey again!
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 23:01 EDT
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Where have you gone to? I've been waiting for another chapter to this story since your last one was posted! I will tell ya this again, it's a great story, with a great plot and a great setting. This story really works with the show... due to the fact that it doesn't show anything in that space in time. But this is a story that I find worth reading, not just another story where it goes no-where (kinda like mine sometimes) And considering that this was my first DBZ story that I've really read, I have to say it's my favorite ^.^ Anyways, I'll be writing again when you update, Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: KNMom26 On: July 10, 2005 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a mom of six who is absolutely mad about Vegeta (and Dragonball Z)--totally the fault of my 15-year old daughter. I really enjoy your fics, and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter in "Always a First Time." Also have "Different" saved on my favs list. Thanks for keeping me entertained!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 14:20 EDT
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Yes the baby is coming, but to bad that Vegeta isn't there. I want more so get ta writing WOMAN!!!!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!!!! (Please Continue and Finish)
Reviewed By: DBZBoyLuver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 10:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please continue and finish it! This story seems pretty realistic, too, like those 3 years could have really happened. You got the meteor thing and turning Super Saiyan and everything!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: June 27, 2005 14:08 EDT
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good chapter... the story is going well...
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Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it seems vegeta really has a jealousy issue. he's always had an anger issue so there's no use commenting on that. pretty sad though, that he doesn't have enough faith in bulma to believe she would be faithful to him while he's gone, even when he said he wanted no attachments. in short what a bastard, but a really hot bastard at that. and yamcha's actually a good guy in this story, good for you, you don't find to many of those yamcha being the good guy stories. great job and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Becky-Sue81804 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That is all I have to say-is wow! I love it so far, I cannot wait for you to update. It is so raw and sensual. I am seriuos, it is kind of kinki- lol! But I really enjoyed reading this story, I started reading at 10 p.m. and now it is 1 a.m. and I am not finihsed with the last chapter and I am begging you to update as soon as possible! ^.^ -BeckySue
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Title: awwwwsommmeee
Reviewed By: starbrella (not signed on) On: June 26, 2005 17:52 EDT
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EKKK, i'm so happy u updated. sorry for the late review but just got back from my trip. I just wanted to say that u did an awesome job on this chapter (again). I'm glad to know what vegeta was thinking when he was in space ^_~ Keep it up and update soon!!!
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Title: Heylo Again!
Reviewed By: Fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: June 26, 2005 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo-Hoo! finally another new chapter *does happy dance and then pouts* hey you! You better get going on the next chapter Buster! I'm inlove with this story, it's so freakin' good! Soooooo, please update soon, I'm bored out of my mind and need stuff to read, you're story is on my reading list so I look for updates whenever possible. I now want to know what is going to happen between Vegeta and Bulma and their new baby Trunks! I promise to write again when your next chapter comes out. So until next time, Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero (one of your now loyal fans lol^.^)
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2005 01:54 EDT
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I have a strange tendency to speculate where the plot is heading in a fic. I know, it's a dangerous habit, and I'm usually about 90% incorrect, but I can't stop myself. (Maybe if I took my meds like I'm supposed to...) Anyway, I'm just wondering what the good Dr. Schroedinger is really up to, and where he's going to end up when (dun, dun, dun!) the androids appear. Or, is he going to be linked somehow to (dun, dun, dun!) Cell? Some of his thoughts are just too convenient. Ah well, he's certainly an interesting and entertaining character. BTW, I love Vegeta's nickname for Wolfie! Even though Vegeta's personal battle was endearing, I was impressed with his ability to rein in his emotions. "...he flattened the impulse instead of Capsule Corporation." I loved that. He has such a magnificent amount of aggression that he has to constantly suppress. If Bulma could somehow figure out a way to bottle up that energy, she'd increase her wealth exponentially. Poor Yamcha - let's not set him up on a blind date with Lorena B., OK? ;) Do we get to meet baby Trunks next? This is such an enjoyable fic, threading canon with your own special flavor of great plot and characters. Great job again, Kiddo!
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