| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 22:35 PST
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omg. i cannot wait for inuyasha to see kagome again!! update soon please!
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Reviewed By: dreamer778 On: December 01, 2007 21:55 PST
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AH! im so glad you've updated. keep up the great work adn please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next! AH! kagome is going to see inuyasha again soon im so excited. i winder what will happen.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 21:18 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Kagome has some really tough choices to make about her life's direction. And, clearly, she is much more aware of what she'll be getting herself and Inuyasha into. It'll be BEYOND tough.....but it looks like she's decided that Inuyasha is worth it. And who can blame her?! LOL. Rough seas ahead, though. As for Inuyasha, he's changed, too, whether he knows it or not. He's ranting, raving, and tearing things up at the shrine not so much because things have changed there...but because HE is different. He misses Kagome...and being treated like a person instead of an object. He's not content with that anymore...and it's causing him to act out. Kagome's already ruined him for that place, whether she or Inuyasha knows it or not. I can't wait to see them square off next time (hopefully, pretty please!). I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 21:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic.
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Title: Always good
Reviewed By: Xryte [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 20:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always fun to read your story. Really. The only thing that leaves my questioning is how you're going to introduce the demon that Kagome's mother was with, if indeed you do introduce him. Maybe it would be interesting to see him later on in the story as Kagome progresses with her "Pro-Hanyou" ideals. That's just a little suggestion, though. I'm sorry to hear that your life has been a complete mess. It happens. But, I really appreciate that you actually took the time to sit down and write a chapter for us that was enjoyable. Keep on living. Carpe Diem.
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Title: Fantastic Story
Reviewed By: Priestess Skye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 17:39 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally get to send you a review! I've been reading this over at AFF but wasn't able to leave a review for you there. I'm glad you're writing here here to so I can leave one for you. I am so enthralled with your story right now. It's honestly the only inu/kag story I'm reading. I love it. Completely original, well written and I'm hanging onto every word. Take your time updating, I'll be here reading every step of the way.
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Reviewed By: seatravelernine On: November 18, 2007 17:43 PST
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great story. i love the way that you're adding more plot now than you had in the earlier chapters. it's always hard to wait for your next installment. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 16:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH man! I hadn't gotten updates on this! I didn't know you'd written like 5 chapters since I first read this! I love this story so much! Inuyasha's so stubborn! Poor Kagome! Please, please send me an alert when you update...JusLa23@yahoo.com. Thanks! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 18:24 PST
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AH im so happy you have updated! this makes me so happy! i absolutly LOVE this story. i cant wait to find out what happens next. i feel so bad for that little boy. this was a very sad chapter. im glad to hear that you would never give up on this fic tho! keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 08:21 PST
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Love the story. Please update again soon. This is one of my favorite stories and I love when I get an email saying you updated again. Thank You.
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 12:56 PST
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OH and heres my email. I want to be on the list. Prchica4256@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 12:55 PST
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Hey Im review 301. So close to that 300. lol Wow. What a chapter! SO much drama and action going on. And poor Inuyasha still getting his treatment. Yet I think also inthis chapter since Kagome found not one but TWO hanyou her perspective of the whole thing is changing. And she is starting to understanding the whole dilemna more and more. And also that there might even be more people with her views or an extent of them out there that dont like what their doing. BUt cant do any thing until its changed. :sigh: Well an awesome chapter once again. And I telling you by them time you finish this fic your gonna be rolling inthe awards.
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Reviewed By: mic_check1212 On: November 11, 2007 00:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for updating!!! wow, its so angsty with inuyasha trying to deny any possible feelings for kagome, i hope that he will have some sort of breakthrough in the future! looking forward to the next chapter!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [nsi] On: November 10, 2007 17:09 PST
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Whaaaaiii awww cutie Josef!! It's like a mini Inu
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 15:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful. I would go so far as to wonder if the anti-racism thing is the message... ^___________^ i absolutely adore this, dearest. Your writing is wonderfully articualte and i love the new character additions and the not-having-the-hanyou-boy-die-alone bit. that ment something. you've the character's behaviors down pat. i love how everyone acts! the pervert i am, you write great lemons ^____~ but the tiny, sentimental parts and what make this amazing. i really liked your style, and this is damn creative, i liked it, specally towards the end, even if it got a little monotonous in the middle...but PLEASE UPDATE!! me encanta!
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