| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 10:53 PST
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I like the original boar characters they certainly aren't a bore! (sorry, i like puns) So often original characters aren't interesting. oh & ty for the update
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Reviewed By: Qui :] (i'm too lazy to log in) On: November 10, 2007 07:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so so so so so sadd :[ this is such a good story. i love how it's more than just inuyasha and kagome's relationship but at the same time kagome's reaction toward that hanyou was based on her feelings towards inuyasha. I'm sure Kagome would have still felt remorse for the boy if she had never met INuyasha.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 05:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved your new characters. joseph and yami are a great tool to use in the story. they give kagome the ability to see some of the conflicts and pain that inuyasha would have gone through in growin up. keep using them well. i have to admit that the death of the young hanyou bothered me. i know it's just a story, and he was ananonymous character, but it still bothered me. in the story it points out the fact that while something needs to be done, whatever is done could cause more danger for inuyasha. with the societal values you have given the story, there is no safe place outside for a hanyou. i just wish we had more of inuyasha in the chapter. it's about him, but he seems to be forgotten thank you for another wonderful chapter. and however long it takes for you to update, i will wait, even if not patiently, as long as you don't try to force things. as long as the chapters continue to be this well written, i can wait
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 02:12 PST
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oh yeah, i forgot to mention how nice it is, that you had Kagome meet Yami and Josef. Its sweet to see her interact with other Hanyou. I hope there will be more!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 02:09 PST
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*sobs* that poor boy, to be shot for stealing and maiming... This is soo damn sad, i hope you make kagome into a legal head or something, or have her befriend some higher ups. Damn, I can't wait until you update again. I really really love this story, and Im so glad you are going to finish it. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 01:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful!
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Title: YAYYYYYY!!!!
Reviewed By: blackr0s3(logged out) On: November 10, 2007 00:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay i was so happy when I got the alert that u updated...and craptastic? this fanfic is ANYTHING but crappy it's one of THEE best made EVER! I am in love with it...I love the original story plot and how well writtin everything is! please update again..as soon as you can!!!
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 00:47 PST
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thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou thankyou!! that chapter was really good!! im sorry that you have been having a hard time lately. i hope that things get better for you. that made my day really. pretty lame that a story can make my day but to tell you the truth i had given up on you ever updating this fic but i am so glad you did! i cannot wait for you to update again! please dont make us wait so long again! however if you are having a tough time then dont worry yourself too much. ABSOLUTE BEST STORY! i cant wait till inuyasha and kagome meet again. should be good. thanks for making my day! xx
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: November 09, 2007 23:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. When will poor Inu get left alone? *sigh* Well written like always. Glad to see your motivated again. Can't wait to see more from you.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 21:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... inuyasha is too stubborn and stupid... kagome is getting more involved with josef... kinda sweet... seems that kagome has a lot of work cut out for her... will inuyasha talk to kagome soon?... will yami get to meet inuyasha?... hope so... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 21:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. As much as I hate to admit it, both Kagome and Inuyasha NEEDED this separation. Inuyasha needed to MISS Kagome, to appreciate the good she brought into his life. He also needed to see that she was sincere in her care about him. It's been MONTHS now since she's seen or spoken to Inuyasha, long enough for even his good sex to have worn off, lol. Yet she still reaches out to him, even when she gets nothing in return. This was a good way to drill into his head that she truly, SINCERELY cares about him period, with no guarantee that he will ever reciprocate. And it looks like he may finally GET that now. And hopefully be more willing to take the chance Kagome is giving him. Kagome needed the separation as well. First, to make sure that it wasn't all about sex, even in her own mind. She now knows for sure that that isn't it, since she and Inuyasha haven't touched each other in months. However, what she mainly needed was to have her eyes opened. Although she truly meant well and she knew ACADEMICALLY what hanyous go through, she needed to truly SEE it, up close and personal. Her involvement with little Josef and learning his story and her witnessing the death of the little hanyou boy at the end were necessary so that she could see what she and Inuyasha would truly be getting into. No amount of storytelling or studying can teach like seeing something like that firsthand. And, although Kagome loves Inuyasha, she TRULY didn't know what she'd be getting him (and herself) into. And she needed to have her eyes fully opened to reality. It won't change her mind about helping him, thank goodness,.....but she won't be so naive about what she's actually facing either. And now, I can't wait until they see each other again face to face, with all their new lessons learned. Great update, and I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: LookAtMe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 11:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all tens because i am a people pleaser, and i like to make people happy and i know when i see all tens that my head goes into the clouds. anyway...love your fic. i want to smash inuyasha's head into the wall for walking out like that but i love it anyhow...he always was a bit thick skulled, and stupid...almost reminds me of an ex boyfriend of mine. besides the point. keep up the good work, i can tell that you are nearing the end.
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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 16:58 PDT
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I really liked this last chapter, even when Inu wasn't in it. Now we see the plot moving on to something bigger. Anyway, what happened with the letter? Did she ever write it? What did it say? What does that stranger want? And more importantly, who is the teacher? He seems very nice, reminds me of someone. Well, guess I have to wait to learn all the answer. Take care.
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 01:31 PDT
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i know you probably hate hearing people asking you to update but do you think you could soon?
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 23:04 PDT
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Why does every male species-human or hanyou, fictional or non-fictional run when they hear " I Love You" from the opposite sex? I hope Inuyasha can get over his insecurities and live with hope. Oddly enough, I don't think Kagome is in any danger from the youkai more like she's about to get some info. Well till next time, read ya later.
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