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| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] | | Pages (38): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 22:22 PDT
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EEEEK I need to know what happens next! :: giggles excitedly :: I love what you have so far. Most original! This is not like any of the other "modern" Inu-Yasha fan fics I have read. I like what I am reading
| Reviewed By: Qui (i can't use this name again?) On: September 29, 2007 14:39 PDT
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update soon!! if i were Kagome, i'd be scared shitless haha :]
| Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: Kamalakali(not signed in) On: September 28, 2007 12:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no way! You seriously did not just leave me with that sensational cliff-hanger! Lol. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I love this fic. It's one of the few I follow religiously. This last chapter was just fantastic. Really well written. Is you head filling with hot air yet, lol? Good, because you deserve a moment or two to bask in ego building. It's good for the digestion. Or something like that. Anyway, it was masterfull the way you were able to have a chapter without Inuyasha actually taking part of it, but, as readers, we never forgot he was there and felt poignatly for Kagome's plight. I just wanted to cheer for her when she continued on the path she set for herself and then broke out of the mold to forge a future for herself and hanyou's of the world. I'm doubly excited to read the next installment and to see where this 'hidden-hanyou-hunting' has taken her (and how Inuyasha is holding up, of course!).
| Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 15:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AWWWWWW thats so sad! Poor Inuyasha thinking nobody could ever love him! That was a really good chapter. I read this story awhile ago and was dying to read the rest! I am so glad you updated! Please update again soon!!!
| Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 00:47 PDT
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wow. that was a really good chapter and thankyou for updating. please update again soon.
| Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 21:15 PDT
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A little bit of text is still blue..hehe. Great job getting this out!!!
| Title: HELLA GOOD!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until the next chapter's posted!! You're definitely on my favorite list, because I adore how this story is going on!! And yea, I have a few mediocre fics for when I'm bored shitless...THIS ISN'T ONE OF THEM!!! I love how you're writing this, Inuyasha is such a brat and I loveeeee it! WELL they give a hella lot of letters for writing reviews, and since I'm a chick of few letters, then heyyy I guess my review is over!
| Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 17:49 PDT
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Hey how goes it? Thats wonderful or horrible depending on wheter the response was positive or negative.I'm doing well myself. Anyways I love the story, and you do really keep a good job with keeping inuyasha and kagome in character. Its amazing really. Often when people write while using others' characters they often change their personalities however drastic or slight. Now then I do hope you'll be updating soon because already the cliff hanger is eating away at me. I think I have a good view as to where this is going. Review ya later!
| Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 17:44 PDT
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Oh my! You got her kidnapped! No no! That thing sounded so gross. And when she first walked into the store, I thought they were going to throw her out of the place. I really can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be waiting. =]
| Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 17:22 PDT
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oh god! i wonder whats going to happen next. ahhh!!! please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. i love this story soooo much. keep up the amazing work!
| Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 16:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, great as always. is she gonna meet Jeninji or something? cause liek hes a hanyou. and i kinda figured. sooo... yeah well i love Inuyasha, arrogant or not, and the proffessor is crazy-cool. lol hope too see more soon, keep it up, love.. ^_^
| Title: I'm saved
Reviewed By: Xarei On: September 26, 2007 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm saved! I'm actually saved! My Shrine Prostitute fix is finally here! Anyway, to start out, you're style of writing is fabulous, but there is just one little thing that got me. Your foreshadowing was too short in this chapter. You had the this ominous sign that Kagome would be approached by youkai in the middle-end of the chapter, and then it happens at the end of the chapter! It was like.. bam-boom! It wasn't a bad thing, but I felt you could probably do something else with it. You could've drawn it out and had a gradual transition to the end result. Possibly have given some more reactions on the youkai, or the stares. We, as readers, have only seen one instance where Kagome asked about Hanyous, and therefore when the boar-youkai states that she's been 'stirring up trouble', we don't necessarily get it. Other than that. Great chapter. I'm sorry you were sick. I'm glad you're feeling better and please be sure to write another chapter soon! =)
| Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 14:45 PDT
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Another awesome chapter. They're in quite a mess, aren't they... can't wait to see how this all goes down (and I hope that there's a happy ending in there somewhere... :D ) Keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: Caitriona who is to lazy to sign in On: September 26, 2007 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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I may write another review on this chapter a little later but I wanted to jump on a few thoughts before they escaped from my brain forever. First - Kagome is terribly in character. Naive, sheltered, yet willing to stick her neck out for the one she loves. Even though we don't see him except through Ryu, Inuyasha is also terribly in character as well. He is pissed because he lost something he desperately wanted, and pissed at himself because he let himself care enough that he was pissed off about its loss. Oh, and I just like Ryu, and Professor Hirohito hasn't been around enough for me to truly form an opinion (although his unspoken questions about why she was asking about hanyou lead me to believe that he could be a very interesting character - very insightful). Now, onto the thing that really jumped out at me upon first reading of this chapter. Kagome, during her rant, asks "Since the two are compatible is it possible to transplant youkai body parts to a human or vice versa?" That would have to be a really scary thought for the youkai, and hanyou. (and an excellent topic for her medical ethics class when/if she has one) Part of me hopes that you explore this a little more because it would be a great subplot. Kagome asking these questions could lead to a full scale targeting of her by the youkai community. They don't want to become nothing more than body part farms for the human community - and if a med student and her professor started asking questions like that, this is what might be thought. And Hanyou, who are 1/2 human and have no rights, would be in even worse danger for something like that. Don't want your extra rich benefactor to suffer from another heart attack, find a demon that will fuck you, have a hanyou child and transplant the organ. Or find a way to incapacitate a youkai, take out one of it's lungs and transplant it into a human. The youkai could possiby re-grow it and it could happen again and again. Scary scary stuff. ::beats plot bunny to death:: Kagome's adventures in the youkai sector of the town was interesting. I would love to see the reaction when/if she asked what some of those things were that were being purchaed at the story. I wonder what the youkai were saying and thinking when they noticed her in their area? Perhaps the boar youkai will answer some of those questions. I also wondered why Kagome hasn't contacted Kouga and asked him questions.... Things I hope are done in the next chapter include: Look into how Inuyasha has been dealing with his return to the shrine (possibly something mushy like using his memory of Kagome as a balm against one of his horrible clients). Look at his reaction to Kagome's letter/letters/calls. Look at Kagome's classes and how the other students are treating her if it is different. Thanks for sharing with us. I have loved this story so far!
| Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 10:19 PDT
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I could have sworn that I'd reviewed this before...but I obviously haven't. How inconsiderate of me. Well, I've been reading this for a while now and have been thoroughly enthralled by it. The whole air around it is refreshingly new, but also easily foreseeable in the real world. All the differences in their reality have not shifted their characters at all...which I commend you for. It just seemed natural that Kagome would launch a crusade for Inuyasha...and for him to negate the entire effort based on pride alone. Very true to form, although I can't help but wish he'd learn that not everyone is out to pity his existence. Anyway, before I write a novel here, I wanted to tell you that you have a gift for storytelling- an amazing gift- and I should have stopped and told you before. Thank you so much for sharing this fic with the rest of us. It is a beautiful and awe-inspired tale. Thanks again, Reux.
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