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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 09:27 PDT
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This is a wonderfully complex chapter, and I anxiously look forward to what happens to Kagome with the boar youkai. I'm hoping he has a brother or a sister hanyou. That would be cool. I love this story and i hope you keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 08:16 PDT
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I have been terribly bad about reviewing and keeping up to date on the stories that I'm reading. Sorry. The last two chapters were so sad. Poor Inuyasha. *sniffle* People may not believe it, but there are those who have been so humiliated throughout their lives that they do believe that they are unlovable. It's so sad. I love Kagome's gumption and persistence. And it's great that she has co-conspirators. Making Inu legally human without his permission was a really stupid thing to do. Somehow it seems disrespectful, but at the same time, Inuyasha doesn't believe that he is worth the trouble and must have it proven to him. She's between a rock and a hard place. Can't win for losing. Great chapters. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 07:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual. I wonder if Inuyasha will write her back. He doesn't know it, but he's breaking poor Kagome's heart. :sniff: I wonder if the mystery youkai will shed some light on Kagome's ponderings. I hope so! I'll wait with baited breath for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 07:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful as usual. I wonder if Inuyasha will write her back. He doesn't know it, but he's breaking poor Kagome's heart. :sniff: I wonder if the mystery youkai will shed some light on Kagome's ponderings. I hope so! I'll wait with baited breath for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 04:09 PDT
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Good chapter. I hate that they're separated, but at the same time, this is giving Kagome time to really see what's she's gotten herself into. When they finally do see each other again, she won't be nearly as naive....and Inuyasha will have had a chance to miss her. Though, I'm sure he won't admit to that, lol. I look forward to reading the next one.
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Reviewed By: Sassa, too lazy to log in On: September 26, 2007 03:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's sad that Inuyasha decided to part from Kagome, but it's IC in relation to his personality in this fanfiction. I'm very happy you unlike many others makes sure Kagome's still up and about even without Inuyasha - for some reasons people tend to write that she can't do a thing without him, why is that? Her way of approaching the legal matters are blunt, very naive and rather stupid, as one with good will but no clue tend to go. I'm very curious about the hanyou she'll hopefully meet and what that meeting will resolve in. I am also curious about how Inuyasha's fareing, but can it be anything else than hidden misery and open anger? *sigh* I'm looking forward to next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 23:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all of her interest in politics civil rights and everything, maybe she should take a course in law or something. . . long chapters, short chapters, it doesn't matter as long as you keep cranking them out. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 23:45 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... wonder where kagome is being taken to... she is causing up quite a commotion with all her questions and researching... what will inuyasha do when he finds out what kagome did for him... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: edge
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im on the egde of my seat! Please update as soon as you can although I do hope ur feeling better i remember how zi felt the last time I was sick! I lost twenty pounds in just four day for cryin out loud! Lol--wait it really isnt all that funny since I felt horrible ugh i never wanna get sick again well enough of my darn babbline I really enjoyed this chapter I was glad u updated and it's so long too! Well...I can't wait to find out why that boar demon took kagome! I hope he idnt gonna do anything like rape her or something! PLZ update when you can I really can not get enough of this fanfic!!!!
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 01:48 PDT
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please please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kittychix On: September 11, 2007 08:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Errrrrk. I hate cliffhangers, and the last chapter (updated aug 19) is a doozy. Pleeeeeeeease tell me you haven't decided to stop writting this, that would be most unfair, lol. I will say though, I originally passed up this fic because of the summary, which I know from experience can be hell to write. I'm very glad I gave it a chance, but I did want to let you know that. Excellent work so far, please continue!
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Reviewed By: Fookie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 18:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT?! Arggg! I need to know what happens next. I'm like going to die. I'm crying here because of you! You here meeee? I need to know what happens! glakjfdda.
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Little-Red On: September 09, 2007 19:15 PDT
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OMG, i just read the last chapter and OMG it was spictacular! i just about died i swear! i want to demand you hurry up with the next chapter, but then again i want you to take as much time as possible, the more time you leave me to think about it, the better the next chapter becomes... i absolutly adore you, you are my favorite person in the whole world, and the F im going to get on the paper i was supposed to be writting right now was totally worth it... but yeah, hurry up with the next chapter... but dont move to fast...
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Reviewed By: twilight surfer On: September 09, 2007 08:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was near tears when inuyasha left the door...saying "it's not possible"...plz keep writing!
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 07:17 PDT
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I am still so reading your story, its awesome! And its on my favorite so i will know when it is updated when i check my mail...so keep on writing please! ^-^ Love it!
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