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| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 21:48 EST
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hmm... so hiei went first. haha can't wait to see who's next
| Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww man, I want to know more, update soon
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am truly honored you considered my words and took them to heart. Thank you so much. I'll be curious to see what you do with Hojo. You seem to be setting him up to do something, maybe not really evil, but something bad. Kagome will do the whole "smoothing over" thing with Keiko. I've never thought much of Keiko. That's why I like crossovers so much and also, IMO, why so many yu yu fanfics are Yaoi. None of the Yu Yu women seem to offer much in the way of interest. They are all two dimensional and weak. Keiko, in particular, seems totally unworthy of Yusuke after his Mazuku blood kicks in. She just never seemed to accept him for who he truly was, and after his Mazuku blood kicked in, fanfic writers mostly wrote it would be worse (to which I agree). she just dosn"t seem to have much fortitude, and wouldn't make a good mate for a mazuku. Kuwabara's sister has strength, but she is such an ancillary character in the manga, there isn't much for writers to work with. Anyway, I really like what you are doing with this fic. Keiko is a silly wuss and good riddance to her.
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 16:33 EST
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Lol! I really loved it! Great work! Keep it up and update asap please!
| Reviewed By: Roses On: November 12, 2006 07:36 EST
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I'm really enjoying your story, and I'm glad for the updates! Only one thing; if Yusuke has his demon blood working, Puu should be a really, really big Pheonix now, not a bitty thing!
| Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 06:57 EST
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To bad they couldn't keep that a secret till after Kagome was found. What will happen to Kagome? I'm sure Hiei doesn't care one way or other what happens to Kuwbara, especially with his big, big mouth, but what about Botan? At the moment do any of them care what happens to Kuwbara and Botan? Wonder if they had to choice between who they have to save first, Kagome or Kuwbara and Botan, who would they choose? Please update ASAP
| Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls on floor clutching sides while laughing so hard tears stream from eyes* Bad Shippou bad! You'll give your new daddies heart attacks! Well as always, LOVED it and think you are an awesome author! Loved the scary look Rin gave them.... Explains why Jaken never wanted to be left alone with her.... As I've said before LOVE the fic and can hardly wait to read the next chapter! Will there be another update tomorrow if I call you evil again? Just kidding! (But seriously update soon!) Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 22:29 EST
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ooo too bad kurama was interupted... would he have kept going? i wanna read the next chapter!!!
| Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: November 11, 2006 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Great! i can't wait to read what happens next, poor kagome i hope the guys get there soon. please update soon!
| Title: A Soul's Seduction
Reviewed By: Aymia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you updated this last one fast. FINALLY!! Shippou! I've been waiting since the beginning of the story to see him show up again. And Rin, gawd, I can just imagine the two of them are mischeivous as hell. Update soon. Tai
| Reviewed By: lil Rin On: November 11, 2006 16:03 EST
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I love Shippo! LOL! I wish he would drive Kurama crazy, but since they're both kitsunes, THAT'S not gonna happen. LOL! It's good. Keep following your own rules with it.
| Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 16:00 EST
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Well, our dear boys.. pardon, youkai, forgot about the Murphy's law and paid for it dearly. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for "getting know each other better" thing, but, considering their situation, it was too dangerous and simply stupid to wait - they should mate her ASAP and then have a rest of their lives to "know her better". Now, the question is, if the 4 of them would have *any* future to talk about... P. S. I support and understand your decision about pairing - after all, if you are feeling like the story you write is forsed, you'd abandon it, sooner or later. Rather sooner, I think. Do we need this? Nops!^_^_^
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 15:38 EST
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One more wicked thought -- had to share! Perhaps Takehiko's master knows who she is and about her past, and has her put in a room with ... INUYASHA with the potion's effects coming on!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 15:35 EST
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Hurray! Just read the latest through twice. (I can't help it -- I just have to do that.) LOVE IT!! It just gets better and better, and I don't know how that's possible. Straight to comments/questions: Wicked cliffy!! The curse's symptome sure do play right into her image as "the sick girl." (Ha!) Talk with keiko -- so tastefully done! Nice that you didn't make Keiko horrible. Realistic. Of course Kurama and hiei were eavesdropping! They learned some things, didn't they? Kagome is coming to terms with her feelings for the 3. Nicely done. Loved the look into Kurama's thoughts -- his worries about losing control and hurting her -- so sweet! Youko's "yes, yes, yes!" when the curse struck with her in his room -- dead on! Ha! Great, believable interruption. Thought I'd die laughing over Kagome's "ouch that's going to hurt." Hiei the voyeur -- who knew? Kagome heard Takehito call hiei "forbidden child," does she know what that means? I hoped it was Botan and not Yukina. Does kagome know she's Hiei's sister? Does Yukina know? (Stray weird thought -- Yukina/Keiko. Ice maidens don't need men, right? With Kuwabara with Botan and Yusuke with Kagome ...) Kagome's really having trouble with those powers -- can't wait to find the cause of that. Curse + lust potion, huh? OUCH! Who is Takehiko planning to put in the room with Kagome? Himself? His master? Read a review that suggested Kagome's two other friends each, separately, meet up with her with one of the other mates. That could be hilarious! Can't you see the 3 girls talking about Kagome's new man, and slowly realizing they're talking about 3 different men? Thank you so much for this chapter today! Any chance for another one this weekend? (Oh, I am so GREEDY!) I just can't wait to see what happens with the kidnapped and the rescue, not mention the 3 new "Dads'" reaction to their "son." Is Inuyasha going to show up? Maybe to help rescue her? Now that Kurama and Hiei know about him, it could really be fun! Keep up the awesome work!!
| Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: November 11, 2006 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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