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| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 23:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UHHHHHHHH I hate U. IT WAS SOOOOOO GETTIN GOOD. I cant wait 4 the next part. But hopfully you'll put some more sesshomeru parts in :-] cant wait to read the rest. PLEASE dont take toooo long. until next time.
| Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo, How could you? lol, Anyways, I really lked the ending "MINE"!! Poor Hojo (not) I hope he gets whats coming for him. I can picture it now, and as you can (or cant) tell I kinda-really-dont like him. *mummbling: Stupid....(insert things that make people choke on their own spit) That happend one time.........Update!
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 20:13 EST
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ahhh noooo!!! keep going!!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes, yes!! SO worth the wait! Fantastic chapter! Let's dive into it, shall we? Great way to handle the Kuwabara/Botan situation -- through Shizuru's thoughts. Can't wait to find out who Yukina has fallen for!! Loved Kagome being angry at Takehiko because she couldn't rmember much of being with Hiei. (Hiei wouldn't be too happy to know that, either, I bet, -- especially since he has to wait to refresh her memory! Ha!) LOVED her plans for Takehiko -- to "twist his balls off and purify them in front of his eyes." Kuramam did a nice job of trying to smooth things over when she felt sad and angry that Hiei wasn't there. I can see him having to take that role a lot in their future, ne -- for Hiei and Yusuke. Love the effect of her touching the mark -- cool that it will affect ALL of them -- THAT's going to be fun. Yusuke and Kurama's talk was great. Kurama's reasons fro Hiei going first hit the mark -- he really is an "evil, cunning bastard." Funny when Hiei showed up and surprised him. And how great that he was amused and not angry after hearing Kurama's little plot! Guess he'd already come to some realizations, ne? But, OH, am I ever looking forward to that possessive jealousy! I am oh so scared and worried about that look Kurama gave Yusuke when he told them they will all have to adapt because they're all 3 possessive. Can't wait to see exactly what he meant by that. Youko was jealous of Iuyasha -- was he the only one who remembered Kagome telling Keiko how much she had loved him? And Kagome advancing on Hiei to show him she could get close to him and Krama having to stop her because he knew where it would lead -- how funny was THAT? Hope Hiei gets a chance to thwart HIM while they're waiting for her to mate with Yusuke. Poetic justice. Loved the reactions to her past and looking forward to hiei letting her know about his own. Really, really loved Yusuke stepping on Inu. Bringing us to the brilliant cliffhanger: awesome scene with Youko trying to get Kurama to peek! The way you revealed Kurama's feelings and longing for her love was perfect -- top-notch. And Kgome coming in to seduce HIM -- YAY!! The chapter-ending word: MINE! Does it get any better than THAT? I think not. As much as i am now longing for the NEXT chapter, I don't think you could have ended that one any more perfectly. I bow to the master. Can't wait to find out about her disappointing news anf for Hojo to try to comfort her. Who will see them? What will happen? Sure don't want to be Hojo! Please, may Ihave some MORE?
| Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:52 EST
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U FREAKIN GRRRRRRRR U NEED 2 UPDATE NOW!!!! FREAKIN PISSED ME OFF BUT I LOVED IT!!!
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 15:26 EST
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I agree with Madmiko. When? pretty please? Although I'm torn between wanting results NOW and saying take the time you need and want to satisfy yourself and write it the way you want it. I assume you do have a life, and those pesky things can interrupt our getting our fix. Everything has been great so far.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still here. Waiting. Oh so patiently. Okay, NOT so patiently. Because I love this story! And i can't wait for the guys to bring her home and see what happens next. And WHO happens next. And HOW it happens next. Will Shippo go to their place to make sure she's okay? Will she show up for work, or will she have to "call in sick?" Will Hojo be waiting to walk her home? My mind is just spinning with the possibilities, and I am just hoping, and praying that you will be able to add another chapter (or TWO) this weekend. Because I'm having SERIOUS withdrawal symptoms. Please feed my addiction!
| Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 02:03 EST
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OMG! That Lemon was sooooo PRETTY! *drools* I cant wait for the ones to come!! ^^ update soon!
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 20:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, Hiei. I knew he would be sweet and gentle, in a sexy powerful kind of way. Yum. That is SO telling that he wanted to make sure Kagome knew who he was, but to call her "onna" was rude, and she rightly called him on it. Now, it seems you are leaving hints there is a master to your villain, as well as a master plan. This sort of mind game/twist smells of Naraku. The villain is looking forward to the time they all get blood bonded together so clearly something bad is planned. You have spoiled us so with updates. I want. I want. I want.
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 18:15 EST
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Great work! Keep it up and update soon!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 10:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must think all I have on my mind is this story -- what have you done to me? I woke up this morning thinking about it, and now am COMPELLED to ask another question. Kurama is worried Kagome will be upset, right? Because of the circumstances and the potion and all. Since Hiei wanted to be sure she knew him before procedding, will he also be worried about her reaction when she's back to her normal herself? Will he insist on staying with her until she wakes up so they can talk? That could be such a great moment. He could be prepared to apologise, and she would probbly thank him for trying to make sure it was good in spite of everything. (Hey this is KAGOME we're talking about, right?) Will the 4 of them try to talk now that the time has been taken out of their hands? Who will be next to mate with our beloved miko? Guess she'll be going to work as a newly-mated woman, huh? Will Hiei be openly escorting here this time? Is he going to feel guilty that she got snatched in the first place on his watch and get all paranoid? Can't wait for her to meet Kurama's family. How is Yusuke taking all of this? An awful lot has happened to HIM in just a few days, too. Keiko, developing feelings for Kagome, her getting kidnapped, having to step aside. Wonder what HE's thinking. And what will happen with Botan and Kuwabara? Their lives just got more complicated, didn't they? And will Sess feel the need to talk to the mates about being a little more careful about protecting her? I just can't wait to see what you do next!!! (But I promise not to review the next chapter more than twice.) :) Think I'll go back and re-read the whole story...
| Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:15 EST
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Okay, I am stoked to read more, I can't wait to find out how the boys react to Shippo! That should be quite interesting especially since he said son... they are probably freakin out right about now, and have no idea how to react, but all will be revealed soon I hope. Until next time, ja ne!
| Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:04 EST
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Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppp Dddddddaaaaaaaattttttttttteeeeeeeee Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww Now that I got that out of my system. Wonder why nobody corrected Takehiko about Botan not being Kuwbara's girlfriend. How will things go when Kagome meets Kurama's family? Why was it important for Takehiko for the three to mate? Does Kurama know something he's not sharing? Why did he want Hiei to go first and not him or Yusuke? How will Kagome react, now that she has mated one of the three? Please update soon.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long, low whistle. Great chapter, great story! I cackled long and loud over her moaning and swearing -- quite a chant she had going there, ne? Liked shippo teasing and testing Yusuke, but he was the one who got the biggest shock, wasn't he? No one wants their reunion with their Mom to be like THAT -- heh heh. When she's back to herself, he'll have to give her the "My eyes! My eyes!" treatment, won't he? Okay, so Takehiko let Botan and Kuwabara go without caving in, and allowed one of the 3 to mate with Kagome -- didn't see that coming! (You are so devious!) I was sure he would try to interfere with the matings. Can't wait to find out what the big plan is! More than just feasting off their energies, right? (Though there should be a lot of that available at kurama's place, right? Heh heh!) BTW, is Takehiko the big bad guy or the sidekick? Can't wait to find out what Kurama's reason for sending Hiei in first was. I'm sure Yusuke wants to know, too. And Hiei. That was a great way to explain how the triple matings needed to be carried out. Like the successive days idea. And you were able to use the explanation to show the evolution of some of Hiei's thoughts and feelings, too -- genius! He's gone from 'do it and get it over with' to knowing he won't be able to be with her AGAIN for a few days until the other matings take place. Love it, love it, love it! How about those Hiei-style touchy-feely moments just before: "Onna." "Hiei." "Yes Onna it is me." "Kagome, my name is ... Kagome." "You know what I'm going to do." Then he decided that was enough talking. OH how I laughed!! Brilliant! So very HIEI. But how touching that he wanted to be sure she wasn't too drugged up to know it was him. AW!! Thank you SO MUCH for treating us to another chapter so soon! It's my dearest wish every time I sit at my computer that a notice for this story will pop up. Did you give me an obsession potion?
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippo, my Shippo. Hooray. he's in the fic. I really like him, and he rarely gets much ink from fanfic writers as an adult. Poor Kurama. I'm surprised he didn't self ignite. What exactly did Kagome expect to have happen when she knocked on his door wearing a robe and then sat on his bed? Talk? Did she really expect him to talk?
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