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Title: why?!??!
Reviewed By: sneakykit On: August 20, 2014 01:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic! I was in the mood to read some YYH and
Inuyasha crossover fic and I was beginning to lose hope of finding
a good one until I stumbled across your story. I'm so disheartened
to see that it was never completed! The characters were very spot
on and cracked me up (especially with their perverted wits and
charm). I even enjoyed your own original characters. You were by
far one of the best stories I have come across. *sigh* I wish I
knew how everything turned out. UGH! The saddest part about the
abandoned story is that I am probably leaving a review that will
never be seen. I'm gonna have to drown my sadness. xC
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Reviewed By: Koametotenki On: January 27, 2013 09:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It's so original and exciting! All of the wrenches being thrown everywhere and the new and well thought out characters are amazing. I've been following your story for years and I really do want a conclusion to it (I wanna meet the twins ^-^!) soon. So this is my kick and I really do hope it helps. |
Title: Keep Writing!!
Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2012 21:29 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep writing!!! what happens next!? is hiei mad at kagome, kurama, or both? what happens!!!??? argh i'm so curious, i love this story!!! |
Reviewed By: Stabzz On: June 28, 2012 23:50 PDT
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:((( omg I read this story all the time, but the lack of ending is killing me. Any chance you can update? (after three years). I know all of your readers havent given up hope!! It's torture to see such great writing go unfinished. |
Title: I miss this
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2011 07:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this story a long time ago - and I was recently procrastinating from my very VERY important homework when I decided it would be a very good (very very bad - VERY VERY BAD) idea to read this again. *sigh* It's still just as good as I remembered. I'll always hope to be able to read the end. One day, right? Great things can't be rushed. Best of luck to you. |
Reviewed By: SmirkJuno On: January 12, 2010 07:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*kicks butt* Upload another chapter! lol I just started reading this story a few days ago and let me tell you, I was so caught up in the plot and characters I didn't even realize your chapters are RIDICULOUSLY long until about chapter 8 lol. So that should say it all but I'll repeat. I LOVE IT! The plot is so intricate and well thought out and I can't help trying to piece it all together myself to find out who done it and why and how and everything. And I usually hate murder mysteries, I can't believe you actually pulled me in. I love how Kagome and Hiei's relationship progressed too. Very realistic and natural. I have to say I was never fond of the pairing because it's so hard to make it believable but you pulled it off. You scared the shit out of me with chapter ten's cliffhanger by the way. I cant wait to find out how Kagome's going to get out of spending the night in Kurama's room and when her idiot sons are going to finally figure out her love life secrets lol. And I'm dying to know WHO KILLED THEM! *pulls at hair*
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Reviewed By: silver_hollows [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2009 22:18 PST
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I just can't stay way from this story, it's just so amazing. I swear this is like the 5th time I've read it :D. I find myself coming back to it each time I get bored with every other peice of fanfiction. I can't wait to find out what happens next and I really can't wait to find out what you have planned for the conclusion, I knew it'll be fantadstic. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Shinchinati On: October 27, 2009 11:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fanfiction and think you are a superb author but feel that you could also work on improving some things. You're great at spelling and grammar but your descriptions of the setting can be uninspired. Overall however i really love you work and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS (not logged) On: September 30, 2009 12:01 PDT
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Beautiful. As always you end with the largest and evilest cliffies. That was horribly cruel what Kurama did at the end but it's ingenius too. It offers the chance to get revenge on Hiei and throw off the murderer
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Reviewed By: SKnFS (not logged in) On: September 30, 2009 10:18 PDT
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Fantastic, the relationship between the two is out in the open now and it's time to see how the rest of the team reacts. I'm excited though it's so sad it took me so long to actually get on and read this chapter. Going to read the next chapter as soon as I finish this. You as always rock.
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Reviewed By: Kuro Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 01:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... This is truly a work of art you have going. I'm surprised you're not writing your own books! The mystery and suspense that you create through words alone is amazing and I am VERY glad that I started reading this story. You have a fantastic imagination and a way to twist things to suit your writing without changing the characters. It truly is a superb talent (one I'm rather envious of, in all honesty). I hope you update soon! All of the cliff hangers that you've left for every chapter simply kill me and the suspense is TERRIBLE! Please update the next chapter soon! I know whatever you have planned is sure to be excellent. ;P
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Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 10:06 PDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOO! i was so excited and then there was no more chapters up! i think i nearly had a heart attack :O! Anways.. What a truly brilliant story, it is so engaging and i really was enraptured from the start. Such an original plotline aswell and there are nowhere near enough Kagome/Hiei stories. I really look forward to reading the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: TeardropCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 00:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing. It's rare I find a fic that can re-captivate me after such a long break. Are you planning on starting a new story after this one is finished?
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 14:36 PDT
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What a minute. I just realized shippo was still a child when Inuyasha and the others were murdered. That makes me feel better.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 14:35 PDT
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This was a great chapter, as they all are. I'm glad it got out. The cliffy wasn't too bad, fortunately. -------------------------------- Oh My Goodness. SHIPPO. That didn't even cross my mind, but now that Jen9 mentioned it in a review I can't say it isn't a possibility. I don't know. I am inclined to dismiss it, but it really can't be summarily dismissed. He IS devoted to Kagome, and he did get jealous a lot as a child. Oh dear, I just can't believe it could be Shippo. That would be a real stunner. But Hiei pointed out that the last killer was negligent as to whether or not Kagome died with the poison. I'm going to pin on that thin evidence as evidence it isn't Shippo. I can't say it isn't a possibility, though. Isn't there some statistic which says a huge percentage of murders are done by people close to the victim, or at least fairly well known to the victim? --------------------------------------------- Moving on to the chapter, that line from Kurama sums up everything about his attitude. "Your relationship? Do you hear yourself? This is an assignment, Hiei, nothing more." That says everything about what Kurama thinks of her. She is literally nothing to him but a job. It was great when Kuwabara decked Kurama, but very telling when Hiei decked Kuwa on the grounds it wasn't his place to defend Kagome. That told Kurama a LOT about Hiei's involvement in "the relationship."------------------------------------- I still don't understand how the boys got outside when they were standing in front of Kurama's bedroom, but that's o.k. I enjoyed the fight. In many ways Kurama got off easy for everything he has done in this, especially since Kagome went and spent her energy curing him. He tied her to the tree, which really bugged me. Then he went and tried to drug her with the bracelet. Essentially, he was trying to use the demon equivalent of 'the date rape' drug. He got off easy in my book. His behavior has been abominable. Then he escalated it by bringing up the poisonous trees. Hiei hadn't hit him yet, and Kurama brings out the trees. Now maybe he could tell Hiei was wanting to take him apart, but still, Kurama is the one who really started the fight with those trees. -------------------- Have to say the line from Zhang about settling things with your friends before going amongst your enemies was VERY thought provoking. Your new dragon was very inventive, and the line "spare us your girlish histrionics" was fun. Pinning Kurama to the ground the sword was good. It gave us a little blood and forced him to stay put to listen to Hiei telling him to choose his sides carefully. --------------------------------- Then we got to enjoy the male bonding ritual between Yusuke and Hiei. I thought it was rather sweet and really thoughtful of Yusuke to get Hiei out of sight. He knew Hiei didn't want to faint in front of his wife or the others. -------------------- More Later.
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