| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2009 13:06 EDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOO! i was so excited and then there was no more chapters up! i think i nearly had a heart attack :O! Anways.. What a truly brilliant story, it is so engaging and i really was enraptured from the start. Such an original plotline aswell and there are nowhere near enough Kagome/Hiei stories. I really look forward to reading the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: TeardropCrystal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 03:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing. It's rare I find a fic that can re-captivate me after such a long break. Are you planning on starting a new story after this one is finished?
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 17:36 EDT
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What a minute. I just realized shippo was still a child when Inuyasha and the others were murdered. That makes me feel better.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 17:35 EDT
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This was a great chapter, as they all are. I'm glad it got out. The cliffy wasn't too bad, fortunately. -------------------------------- Oh My Goodness. SHIPPO. That didn't even cross my mind, but now that Jen9 mentioned it in a review I can't say it isn't a possibility. I don't know. I am inclined to dismiss it, but it really can't be summarily dismissed. He IS devoted to Kagome, and he did get jealous a lot as a child. Oh dear, I just can't believe it could be Shippo. That would be a real stunner. But Hiei pointed out that the last killer was negligent as to whether or not Kagome died with the poison. I'm going to pin on that thin evidence as evidence it isn't Shippo. I can't say it isn't a possibility, though. Isn't there some statistic which says a huge percentage of murders are done by people close to the victim, or at least fairly well known to the victim? --------------------------------------------- Moving on to the chapter, that line from Kurama sums up everything about his attitude. "Your relationship? Do you hear yourself? This is an assignment, Hiei, nothing more." That says everything about what Kurama thinks of her. She is literally nothing to him but a job. It was great when Kuwabara decked Kurama, but very telling when Hiei decked Kuwa on the grounds it wasn't his place to defend Kagome. That told Kurama a LOT about Hiei's involvement in "the relationship."------------------------------------- I still don't understand how the boys got outside when they were standing in front of Kurama's bedroom, but that's o.k. I enjoyed the fight. In many ways Kurama got off easy for everything he has done in this, especially since Kagome went and spent her energy curing him. He tied her to the tree, which really bugged me. Then he went and tried to drug her with the bracelet. Essentially, he was trying to use the demon equivalent of 'the date rape' drug. He got off easy in my book. His behavior has been abominable. Then he escalated it by bringing up the poisonous trees. Hiei hadn't hit him yet, and Kurama brings out the trees. Now maybe he could tell Hiei was wanting to take him apart, but still, Kurama is the one who really started the fight with those trees. -------------------- Have to say the line from Zhang about settling things with your friends before going amongst your enemies was VERY thought provoking. Your new dragon was very inventive, and the line "spare us your girlish histrionics" was fun. Pinning Kurama to the ground the sword was good. It gave us a little blood and forced him to stay put to listen to Hiei telling him to choose his sides carefully. --------------------------------- Then we got to enjoy the male bonding ritual between Yusuke and Hiei. I thought it was rather sweet and really thoughtful of Yusuke to get Hiei out of sight. He knew Hiei didn't want to faint in front of his wife or the others. -------------------- More Later.
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Reviewed By: Ariana/N-M-S-15 On: June 13, 2009 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is using a friend's laptop* Oh my god! Kells, that cliffhanger nearly killed me! This story is incredible and I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 02:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW MAN I HATE THIS CLIFF HANGER~!! what about hiei?! damn this is gonna kill me until u get the next chapter out anyways, it's official this is the BEST story i have ever read, honestly this story has EVERYTHING in it, and every chapter just got better and better and this chapter was plain awesome i loved hiei and kurama's fight scene that was cool i really feel bad for hiei though when is everyone gonna find our that he and kagome together, she's pregnant with HIS children, and that kagome was never in any kind of relationship with kurama i wonder what's gonna happen next please update again soon!!! i dont think i could wait for months for an update to see what happens next with everyone finding out that kagome is pregnant and if they find out about hiei so please update soon. PRETTY PLEASE?! *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 23:18 EDT
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I am so glad to see that you have updated Black Widow Miko. I was having such a terrible night and then I came home the next morning and I saw there was an update. It really cheered me up. You see, I had come home the previous night to find a lot of my stuff lost and missing, compliments of my niece and her mother. I share a room with my niece and her mother decided to rearrange while I was gone. Several pieces of my jewelry were missing, jewelry that my boyfriend gave me and that was left to me by relatives whom have passed on. My niece decided to tell me that I could either leave or deal with it. You see, I wasn't taking the loss too well, especially since the entire day I was kept in bed by my boyfriend because I was not feeling well. And so, I left, planning on spending the night outside to cool off so I didn't yell at her. Though she insisted on bothering me about coming in so that she didn't catch pneumonia when I got it. It ended up that my boyfriend (who's seventeen) refused to let me sleep outside and after calming me enough, talked me into staying at his house. So he came over and got me, though in the morning I was still very upset, I was calmed enough that I would not explode at either of them. When I got home and saw your update though, it got me to smile as I read it. It made me feel a lot better after everything, though I am still not over being sick from the day before when my boyfriend made me stay in bed all day. And I am still upset over the room since most of my clothing seems to have disappeared, along with many other things. Thank-you for updating your story when you did, and I am unable to wait for the next wonderful chapter that you post. Chrystal-Hearts
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: June 04, 2009 08:19 EDT
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Oh man, despite the wait.. good job. I really want to smack Kurama right now. Aha, sorry gor the shortness of the review, my brain needs to digest everything now XDDD
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: June 04, 2009 07:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok it is SO SO Shippou who killed her mates! he can shape change (illusions, he is a good fighter, all of her mates would have trusted him implicitly, he knows poisons and he is possesive and he offered to court Kagome! it's him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the story so far! hope you up date quicker! i hope Hiei gets over what jelously he's feeling! Ja Ne Jenna
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Reviewed By: taixi On: June 04, 2009 03:47 EDT
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oh my, I am so worried you're making Shippo the villain here. I might have written as much in a prior review but now I really get that sense...who else would be jealous of all the husbands, plus have easy access; it's an Oedipus complex...well either way (if I'm right or wrong) it's an intriguing plot. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 20:23 EDT
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damn i simply love this story!! the mystery part of this is makes it really interesting i think kagome's mates deaths had something to do with kikyo but idk for sure i'll just havta keep reading to find out
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 19:29 EDT
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Woooooo! I was so excited when I checked in and you had actually UPDATED! And wow, was it ever worth the wait. Sometimes when a story takes a long time to come out, you lose track of what was going on--not so BWM. I even skipped the "end of last chapter" recap and I was still right there and ready to go. ^_^ I'm not going to lie to you...I'm a Kurama fan in most stories...but even I thought he had this coming, and I'm glad they duked it out. As they both said, it was a long time coming. This chapter seems to have been kind of a turning point, at least as far as the mystery goes. I wonder what exploring this new avenue will bring. Out of time, but I'll get back to you later I'm sure. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 19:03 EDT
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nah i didn't read until ch16 yet i just finished this chapter XD but im usin all the time i have online readin this story ur doing a fantastic job btw this fanfic has EVERYTHING in it i think that's why i like it so much
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is simply amazing!! it'd really, REALLY good it's my absolute favorite story right now! the story line and plot is really well done nell everything about this is well done!! and each chapter gets better and better
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just became apart of this site and this is the first story i read so far i usually go on a different site for fanfics... ANYWAYS... this is really good so far!! i love it i haven't read anything like this in an inuyasha fanfic so it's different from anything else i've read great job!
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