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| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] | | Pages (34): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: MUHHHH !!!!!!
Reviewed By: Angelwings21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 19:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUUUHHH why don´t you update anymore :-( I am at the moment a little disapoited in you because I don´t have a Problem when Authors take a little ime till they Update but you didn´t update in so long and I miss your Work and to read new Chapters. This is such a Great Story so please end it and don´t let us hang in there any longer.
| Reviewed By: Forgotten Vowel On: July 25, 2008 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't review often, but I just want to give you the kick in the pants any good author needs to finish a good story. Let the kicking begin!
| Reviewed By: silver_hollows [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 03:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing story. I get so caught up in it every time I read it. Your writing style is absolutly stunning. I can't wait to see what happens next so please write the next chapter soon. I know many people are just dieing to find out what happens next.
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 06:15 EDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20June08 /bestromancefiction1st.jpg ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners of the Feudal Association
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 06:31 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Reviewed By: inufan625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 05:58 EDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors, InuGrrrl and Inufan625, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open from June 18th 2008 through July 1st 2008 (12 am). Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ InuGrrrl & Inufan625 Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
| Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: confusedlove On: June 16, 2008 06:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the chapter. I can't wait tp see what kagomes answer is. I hope that kagome wont say no because that cauld crush hiei so bad. I dont believe that sesshomaru was ever unfaithful to kagome he has to much honor for that. Why doesn't kagome just ask hiei to use the jagan eye. Yes I know that he has try but what if she ask then will the jaan agree to go into her mind. I liked how you ended it I can't wait until the next chapter. ^-^ confusedlove
| Title: Chapter Four
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 23:43 EDT
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The glimpse of Kagome's past that we get from Daitano's point of view is rather nice. While we knew that things would be difficult for her, it's hard to picture just how difficult they could possibly be. Having trusted friends and allies turn on you so easily had to be particularly trying, at best. I have to laugh as how Kagome's sons are challenging Hiei at every turn. Even though he could knock any of them down any time he wants, they still have no problem standing up to him. He has to be ready to slit throats over their attitudes, I love it lol His growing interest in her, despite his mistrust and dislike of her are particularly endearing. I much prefer this side to him, rather than how a lot of people write him as being instantly in love with her. You have a good handle on Hiei's character and I'm greatly enjoying the path this story is taking. And your penchant for cliffhangers lol Gotta love going skinny dipping, just to find there's a hot, naked demon standing next to you.
| Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 23:17 EDT
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Oh the amusement of chapter three. Do I have to say that the boys reactions to Yemon's desires had me dying of laughter? Hiei commenting on how... womanly Kuwabara acted was just so... Hiei. He really does have no shame, or tact for that matter. I love it lol I especially liked the observation of Kagome's fighting style as well. Leave it to Hiei to immediately brush it off as unimportant because it differs from the technique that he uses. I think though, after Kurama's explanation they're both going to take her abilities a bit more seriously. The family reunion was rather interesting, as well as Hojo's untimely appearance. It would figure that he'd do something so bold as to kiss her and Hiei would just happen upon them. Of course, he's a suspicious one and always looking for hidden agendas. On a final note for this chapter, I like how you're getting into Kurama's character. I for one, am sick of the polite, gentlemanly, mama's boy that people tend to make him out as. He is a demon. A murderous, treacherous demon at that, or have people forgotten that he's betrayed Hiei because it suited him? It's refreshing to see someone delving into the underlying character that he keeps concealed underneath that polite mask.
| Title: Chapter Two
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 22:47 EDT
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And a second review, hey, I'm making progress here lol As I'm rereading this, I'm reminded of how I came to like your OCs right away. It's rather odd since normally I don't care for original characters, but something about these three are definitely engaging. If I were to forget how I've read ahead, I'd have to say that Daitano was my definite favorite, probably because of how serious he is. It's definitely reminiscent of Sesshoumaru, but with some distinct differences. I'm also greatly enjoying the banter going on between Hiei and Kurama, or should I say Youko? You can see who has the larger ego of the two at this point. I'm also amused at how little the Reikai really knows about Kagome and her family, given that they're responsible for all deaths and reincarnations. It seemed someone really dropped the ball when they were doing their filing lol And then to let slip about their presence in the Ningenkai. Heads really should roll up in the spirit world.
| Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I told you I'd get around to reviewing this story sooner or later. I just happen to be incredibly bad at keeping up with things, so I apologize for my lateness. First I'd like to congratulate you for coming up with an extremely original plot line that has both kept me interested and baffled at many different turns. I'll try and outline the things I liked about each chapter since I'm a little late in speculations and a lot of my suspicions were voiced in email anyway lol For this one, I have to say I like the characterizations. While there is interest on the parts of the YYH guys, no one is standing up and declaring her innocence without having even met her. And while Youko is proving true to his kitsune nature, he's not being obnoxious about it. This is definitely a story that I can honestly say is one of the top crossovers in the fandom and I will continue to recommend it to anyone looking for an intriguing story.
| Title: Black Widow Miko
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 09:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 23:27 EDT
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I was reading chapter 14 a bit more carefully and read that Koenma did take care of the souls from Kikyou eventually. The purification scene was very poignant. However, there is still no indication that he questioned any of them to find out what they remembered from being inside Kikyou. Someone has information. Not all the souls were as incomplete as the ones she purified.
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2008 23:26 EDT
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I was reading chapter 14 a bit more carefully and read that Koenma did take care of the souls from Kikyou eventually. The purification scene was very poignant. However, there is still no indication that he questioned any of them to find out what they remembered from being inside Kikyou. Someone has information. Not all the souls were as incomplete as the ones she purified.
| Title: More Thoughts
Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 23:06 EDT
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I've been re reading the last couple of chapters while waiting for the next update, and come across something. "There's no masking the fresh smell of sex, and I've smelled it on Kagura enough times to recognize her from it," Would you care to explain why Shippo has smelled sex on Kagura enough times to recognize it a floor away? Hmmm. . . Or am I reading too much into this? The sex scene in chapter 13 was very sweet, with poor Hiei desperate to show his possession of the miko. Now I'm going to re read chapter 14 and probably review that again. Question. How is it that media miner calls 36,000 words "12 pages." I always thought about 200 - 300 words was the definition of a page.
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