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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 18:50 EDT
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It's really nice seeing a fic where Kikyou is actually playing a decent role, has brains... I'm not the biggest Kikyou fan in the world, but it's more because of how she's usually written than how she's been portrayed in the anime/manga. :) I'm really anxious to see where things head with Kohaku and Kanna... poor things, I feel for 'em. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: October 06, 2008 17:18 EDT
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UPDATE!!!! Excellent! Glad you are still working on this!! Though this chapter leaves me wondering who Naraku will kidnap to get some leverage (not that he has to, just seems like a Naraku thing to do)…. A Sango abduction would leave to some lovely Miroku angst, while a Kagome kidnap would give Inuyasha a chance to kick arse. Though the feminist in me would love to see Inuyasha get rescued by Kagome (human night perhaps?). Or the group could redeem Kikyo by helping her despite dubious decisions in the past. Perhaps if Kagura got captured, that'd crack Sesshomaru's cool exterior? Or maybe Naraku will decide to go back to dental school and give up the world domination thing. Whatever happens, can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a not so creepy chapter... they are still giving me tingly feeling though....
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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 06:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel for Kohaku and Kanna. The two of them are so victimized that their tunnel seems it will stay dark. I'm anxious to see where you will take Kikyo's situation. Seems rather bleak. I am SO enjoying this story. Peace!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 06:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that this was a REAL update instead of a fix or repost or what ever I remember reading this in school and hope I didn't read any thing more about Naraku's icky perversions or I might let out that I wasn't doing school work at that time... (other wise it was a right about of *shivers, icky, grossed-out feeling*
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Title: landofthekwt
Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku are beginning to crack. As Naraku gets more enthralled with using her, Kikyou is beginning to become wary of him and wonder if being with him is worth what she is being forced to do. Kohaku and Kanna are realizing that they are being used and are showing a desire to be with sisters instead of helping Naraku. I liked the research approach. It gave us more information about what was going on without having some character launch into a monologue.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 11:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It looks like everyone is starting to add everything together and figure out what's going on. I just hope that they haven't put the pieces together too late. As for Kikyo, I'm glad to see that there are limits to perversion, even for he. Unfortunately, it seems like she may be waking up too late. And is she's putting all her trust in Bankotsu.....she'd better not, lol. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Good one.
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Title: Ch. 35
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I might be starting trouble, but is our boy Inuyasha gonna try to rescue Kikyo from the clutched of Naraku? Where did I come up with that notion? When Inuyasha was told what might be her probable fate and Miroku studying his emotions due to the new moon night seeing his emotions more because he's human now. Poor Inuyasha timing all bad now that Kagome's may be in danger. Keep on keeping on! Peace!
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Title: Minoue
Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: August 23, 2008 10:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting so darned good! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm really starting to wonder what Naraku's got instore for Inuyasha and the gang. Keep up the good work, my friend...and keep on howlin'!
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Reviewed By: kitty008 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 04:47 EDT
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ooh... cliffhanger... Nice chappie! And i'm so glad you posted it faster than the last one! Keep up the good work! kitty008 = airen0920
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: August 21, 2008 16:27 EDT
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"[Yeah I'm human] ... Where's my ramen?" -- one of my favorite lines! Always did have a soft sort for the practical and spartan communication of Inuyasha. Though now I'm eagerly awaiting showdown at the Higurashi shrine... I feel comfortable the gang can handle it, but Naraku is a devious bastard, and to try to save Kikyo at the same time... while a nobel endeavour, I think may have it's wrinkles. Can't wait to hear the next installment!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh, loved this chapter!!!! The thrill, the nerves, the expectations for what was going on. The mystery of what were they hidding. The timing to show Inuyasha's human night. Loved the idea of Miroku's been inspired by vampires stories to place the spell. Wonderful. I'm so hooked on this story that now I'm all eaten up due to the suspense!!LOL Great job sweetie, great job!!!
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Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I am enjoying this story. I love the way you have your characters in place. I must say that this chapter is abrasive in the description of Naraku and Kikyo. And Bankotsu... well I find he's one to take or leave. Kaguara and Sesshomaur's relationship is mysterious to me. But I bet you'll straighten me out.LOL! Congrats! on your nominations and seconding in the categories given where your story is recognized. Peace!
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 11:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the idea of Kagome and Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru and Kagura talking about the problems they faced. I think that this dialogue made them stronger as couples and better able to face what lies ahead for them. Now that Kagura and Kagome have been told why the inus behaved the way that they did they are better able to deal with the brothers. I glad that Miroku has finally realized what Sango means to him. It is almost sad what has happened to Kikyou.
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's turning out more interesting. Each chapter is like taking layer after layer... like peeling an onion!LOL But seriously, loved the paced you are working this story. The switching scenes really help the building of story, like taking you to the top allowing you have a peek on the different protagonists behaviours. Makes it more interesting and thrilling. One of the things I like the most is that, although this is an AU, you keep all of them in character when it's not really necessary. I think that is one of the hardest thing to accomplish considering that this is an AU, a different world, a different environemet, but in escence they are the same. Really love it and am enjoying it a lot. Thank you so much for this wonderful story, keep up the great job.
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