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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 › » ] | Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the Sesshoumaru introduction. I hope he isn't too cold to Kagome. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 18:27 EST
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My favorite part of chapter 17 is how Kouga totally underestimates who he's dealing with, has no sense of strategy, and gets his nose wiped because of it. I can't help it. It tickled my heart. Does that make me wicked?
| Reviewed By: the_library_ghost [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 20:22 EST
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This was very good. I'd like to say something profound about how well you have done the plot and the characters, or give you constructive criticism, but I'll just say I really enjoyed your story and hope to read more.
| Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 02:52 EST
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I guess it's appropriate that I write this review while listening to Star Star by the Rolling Stones, considering Miroku's getting himself into some trouble here. I knew that he'd fall prey to his weakness and rub her bottom---but to do it twice? Inuyasha's right that the monk just won't learn. I will say that I enjoyed seeing Sango and Miroku interacting alone, without school obligations and the like. Miroku, up until the groping that is, knew how to play his cards carefully. He didn't pry into her life, but offered some information about his own to make her feel comfortable, and it worked. I am curious to hear more about this life he led as a child living in the monastery and just who his parents might have been really. I wonder if his parents choice for him might somehow be connected to our mysterious sinister figure behind Kohaku's crimes? I do like the idea of how he arrived at being a professor, too, because it just seems to work. It might seem odd to some, but if you really think about it, it seems that the jobs people get have more to do with WHO they know than WHAT they know. Miroku's qualified, but considering that he wasn't necessarily "experienced," it might have caused him to not get the job, but because he knew the soon to retire professor it opened up for him. I like the fact that Sango is furious with him one moment and the next she's concerned. I'm not sure she even realized that she behaved that way. I felt so bad for Kagome and Inuyasha, at least for being embarrassed that way, but they really need to get beyond that. Sure, they don't have to tell everyone they come across about their sex lives, but then again it's not something to be entirely embarrassed about, either. I must say that the LAST person I thought would ever say they would try to be more "subtle" about something is Inuyasha. That line made me laugh, considering just how he's about the least subtle in the cast of characters---although that can be argued if you take it from the right angle. Your Inuyasha in this AU certainly has a lot more of that going for him. He's a lot calmer, he's a lot more level headed, and he generally thinks things through before he really makes his move, which is unlike how he appears to behave in canon in so many ways. Inuyasha tends to rush into things in canon, but each thing Inuyasha's done in this AU has been done with a lot of thought and consideration. He had to be talked into the tournament. He spent YEARS waiting to tell Kagome how he felt and even thought of how he'd do it and the steps that would lead up to that very moment. He may lose his temper and get surly with Miroku, but he doesn't really get as angry as he could---or as fast. It's the Inuyasha I think we'd see if we could see him a few hundred years down the road from the canon time line. His cautiousness is very emphasized in this story, and it's a feature I think he would have to have to survive. Don't get me wrong, Inuyasha has that element in the canon time line, but it's just not as prominent as it is here. I'll be curious to see how he finds a way to approach his brother about Kagome. I get the sense that they're almost neutral about one another to a point. Don't mess with me and I won't mess with you is how it feels thus far in the brief mentions we've had of Sesshomaru. I don't see him objecting to Inuyasha and Kagome so much. He might have his say and he might say some insulting comments, but he won't object. Inuyasha's hanyou, after all. I will be curious to see how Sesshomaru behaves. He's running an art gallery, which is almost, how shall we say, urban. I do like it, because while he's running a business, it's not the classic cliché of him being some huge business man. He's dealing in art and that can be profitable but also subjective. I just wonder if there's a Rin in the mix somewhere. It just has her touch all over it. He may be doing it to preserve his history as a youkai, but it still smacks of her. Either way, I can't wait for | Reviewed By: Ravenreux, NLI On: November 18, 2007 23:31 EST
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It never fails to amuse me each and every time Sango puts Miroku in his place...and seeing them getting so familiar with each other is just a super plus. Souta threw in for another endearing Inu-ni-chan moment, and don't think Kagome will ever stop blushing...even when she's an old woman and been through it all. Thanks for another amazing chapter!! ~Reux
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 22:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chapter. I now how hard it is to write these chapters that really have nothing going on in them but you are so good at it. It almost seems that they are just as important as the ones with lots going on. Great job. Keep up the good work. And your welcome for the nom. I hope you get it!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter!!! Enjoyable, funny and with lot of information. Loved the little interaction between Sango & Miroku, finally able to get a little bit closer although, we still have to find out about Sango's story. Beautiful the way you brought out Souta's adoration towards our hanyou. Wanted to know a lot of things but, yeah... I know... the story is just starting -sort of- so, must wait to let it be unfolded. Thank you for the update! And thank you for sharing it with us!!!
| Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 16:28 EST
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Miroku finally shows his true colors, very funny. Inuyasha and Kagome having to revile such a thing was priceless, I think Kagome will forever be red in the cheeks. Sota's little part in this chapter was rather amusing too, they never give Kagome's mom enough credit in the anime thats for sure. She knows whats going on more then Inuyasha and Kagome do. The one and only strangeness, Emily
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Reviewed By: LiHudson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 15:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this story, one of my very favorites currently. I'm glad that Sango and Miroku are getting back into character, but I really hope he stops his lechery, because Sango seems even more vulnerable than normal. Great job, as always.
| Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 13:35 EST
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awwww poor miroku and his cursed hand. i extremely happy that you put in a little Sango and Miroku finally, even though i love the whole Inuyasha and Kagome thing. this was a greaet chapter. you gotta update soon.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. Poor Miroku.....and I had such hopes for him! That poor man is a lech to the depths of his soul....but at least now it seems to be aimed at one woman. A woman who will apparently knock his block off, concussion or not, lol. That's the Miroku and Sango we know and love. They've been pretty much in character the whole story anyway....but I have to admit that I missed the violence, lol. As for Inuyasha and Kagome....too perfect for each other. Inuyasha in particular is ADORABLE in this story. His reaction to Souta telling him that he was happy about Inuyasha and Kagome being together was so sweet....but also a bit sad. Deep down, Inuyasha still seems to expect the rug to be snatched out from under him, that he will still be somehow rejected by Kagome and her family for being hanyou. He's starting to believe it's real....but it's still going to take time. He's obviously been through a lot of pain....so it's good to see him happy. But.....Kagome still has to meet Sesshoumaru; that sounds like "fun." I like Sessh....but he's a poison pill most of the time, no doubt about it. I can't wait to see where you take this next. I LOVE this story.
| Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 11:29 EST
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Awwww...kawaii! thanks for a lovely chapter!
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 10:36 EST
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Will the real Miroku please stand up? Yep, and there he is! I wondered how long he'd hold off, cause you can't have the monk w/o that 'cursed' hand. Good though, that Sango wasn't totally repulsed, she did stick around for the second, so I agree, the monk has met his match. This is gonna be fun! Glad K and IY are bonding so well, and that they are slowly but surely opening up to others, and widening IY's circle of friends. Very well done.
| Reviewed By: DaughterofBastet [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I really love this story ^^ You portray the characters so well, and you don't employ the kind of over-the-top OOCness that makes many fics unenjoyable. FarAwayEyes is right, Koga is kind of, well, screwy. Initially, I was hoping Ayame would come in and mellow him out (my second favourite pairing!), but I guess it is a necessary part of the plot. I'm really glad you didn't make Naraku the main antagonist, though! It gets kind of old... It's nice that you've used emotional conflict rather than huge battle scenes and dramatic dialogue (not that huge battle scenes don't have their place in ficdom). It does make me kind of sad, though, how often many Inu/Kag fans (and I'm all for the pairing) use Kikyo-bashing in their stories, and vice-versa. In summary: I've really, really enjoyed it so far. Please keep writing!
| Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 11:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Stupid wolves got more than they bargined for with Kagome and Sango! lol Go Kagome...good to see her so strong and confident! How cowardly and pathetic of Kouga to basically hide behind Miroku...never liked that wolf anyway. Poor Sango feel left out as everyone knows more about what is going on around her but I think Inu and Kags are in for some shocks too. They don't seem to realize their own power and that will be an interesting discussion coming up! :) Maybe Sango will get a little closer to the injured Miroku?
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