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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 13:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. LOL. Sesshoumaru ALMOST made it through the chapter without being a jerk. He knew full well that Inuyasha hadn't yet proposed to Kagome since he needed his approval first. So, for him tell her like that was just....a JERK thing to do! Sessh has matured somewhat.....but not completely because that was childish. The assassination attempt, though, was interesting. I wonder who would dare try to kill Sesshoumaru. This guy must be smart and well-placed because he nearly succeeded. And, Sessh is probably more concerned about it than he lets on because he never would have told Inuyasha about it otherwise (too prideful). I just can't wait until his arrogant butt has to ask Yasha for his help....because it looks like he's going to need it, lol. As for Rin...too CUTE. And, like in the manga and anime, she is no doubt responsible for the positive changes in Sesshoumaru. And I really like how you brought her in as well. Clever and fearless, not intimidated at all by the "great" Lord Sesshoumaru. Maybe between her and Kagome, they can pull the brothers even closer. I can't wait to read the next one!
| Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 12:30 EST
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Oohh, great chapter. This story is like really great chocolate -- sinfully addicting. More, more!!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 11:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, really, really nice chapter! Loved the interaction between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru. Loved the way you filled us with a bit of their backgroung keeping them "in-character" and true to their original story. The way Sesshomaru met Rin, how Inuyasha suffered and his loneliness. Intelligent move the one displayed by Miroku, the way he appoached Sango and allowing her to open up a bit. It's going to be a very long path to both of them, a lot of things to clear up and lots of things still out in the darkness. But as usual, you gave us a beautiful chapter. Of course, I want more and more and more, but that's the drill, ne? Thank you so much for this update, know through your LJ that you are pretty busy, so this is a double thank you! ;)
| Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 03:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO why did you stop it was getting good like one of those action movies when all this stuff happens and then the iceing on the cake right in the middle WOW. WRITE MORE PLEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
| Reviewed By: Inuluver66613 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 20:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it plz update soon!
| Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 16:04 EST
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I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 12:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Congrats on the IYFG Awards! I can't believe that Kouga actually thought he'd get away with lying like that to Sess! He's lucky Sess didn't just rip his head off! Gotta wonder if that is the end of Kouga meddling tho. The scene between Inu and Sess was really touching...both seem to realize the way things have to be because he's hanyou but seem to wish it were otherwise. Can't wait to see what Sess has to say to Kagome! Again CONGRATS!!!
| Title: Catching up...
Reviewed By: Yabou1 On: December 03, 2007 09:52 EST
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Wow, I've missed quite a bit in my absense, but I had quite the entertaining morning catching up on your story. I really like where this is going. It's not unusual to see Inuyasha and Kouga pitted against one another, but you manage to keep me on my toes by throwing it into a situation that I haven't seen before. I also loved the Sango/Miroku interaction in the last chapter. Very entertaining. His response was so utterly flabergasted that I just had to laugh. Oooooh, next chapter Sesshoumaru meets Kagome. (And I like the way you're writing his character as well... very noble... very true to his actual persona.) I can only hope that she doesn't get so nervous that she does something stupid (as she often tends to... and gets herself in trouble in the process). Thanks so much for writing. Yabou (gah, stupid thing won't let me log in.)
| Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 10:31 EST
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yay!!! Sesshomaru's not an ass in this one. i wonder what he's going to talk to kagome about. this was great. you must update soon.
| Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 10:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! That was a good chapter. Nothing like seeing Sesshoumaru put someone in their place. Very canon, too. Sesshoumaru might not like that Inuyasha is a hanyou, but NO ONE insults his bloodline. Later, Fyrloche.
| Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! On: November 30, 2007 02:19 EST
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I really really like this story. I hope you update soon! And keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT chapter. Kouga just wasn't going to be satisfied until he got his ass kicked for the record. Excuse my French....but that jerk got EXACTLY what was coming to him. In fact, I wish he'd gotten a few more bruises. Inuyasha beat him humiliatingly quickly....but still. He's done enough to warrant much more than that. But, that's just my bloodthirsty side speaking, lol. As for Sesshoumaru....what an entrance. I LOVED him in this chapter. He was regal, arrogant, and quite controlled...but still downright LETHAL. I nearly cheered when he backhanded (pimp-slapped!) Kouga (hmmmm, I forgot about that; maybe Kouga DID get enough of a whupping, from BOTH brothers, lol). And, yes, Sessh was also very SEXY. You can't forget that particular adjective when describing Sesshoumaru. I also liked the talk the brothers had. There is clearly history between them....and most of it isn't good. Inuyasha seems to respect his brother as the leader of his clan...but there isn't much familial closeness. And Inuyasha doesn't seem to be bitter, resentful, or hurt over it (at least not at this point); he just seems to have accepted that this polite, nonrelationship is all he'll have with his older brother. Inuyasha may have wanted there to be more in the past...but has let that go. Surprisingly, it seems like SESSHOUMARU was more open to a more brotherly relationship. He fully acknowledged Inuyasha in front of Kouga and the other ookami, even insisting that Inuyasha be addressed by his title. He even seemed to be admonishing Inuyasha about not seeing him since Kikyou. And, most importantly, he seems to have also come by to check out the woman his brother is seeing, to assess her "worthiness" of being part of the family. Now, I'm also quite sure that Sessh is upholding some stuffy family law by doing this as well....but that's just a convenient excuse, lol. Now, I don't think he all of the sudden wants to be best buddies with his little brother, but I do think he's finally seen that he wants more of a relationship with Inuyasha than this. The rift between the brothers is mostly due to Sesshoumaru's refusal to accept Inuyasha when he was younger. And no doubt, some of the emotional scars Inuyasha carries about his heritage were inflicted by his older brother. So, if I assessed it right, Sesshoumaru will have quite a bit to answer for. And I can't wait to see him and Kagome square off next time, particularly if some of the pillow talk she and Inuyasha have shared has involved his "relationship" with his brother. Inuyasha is really private, and he and Kagome have been together officially a relatively short time. So, he may not have told her the whole story yet, but if he did.....oh, boy! Wow! There was so much good about this chapter that I keep rambling on! So, I'll shut up now. I guess you can tell that I will definitely be looking forward to the next one!
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 20:32 EST
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Alright! Sesshoumaru makes his appearance, very nice. I enjoy how you portray the brothers, w/o all the animosity and strife. There's always some tension, of course, but that just adds flavoring! Glad IY is learning a/b his transformations, and maybe how K ties into that and his life. Also nice to know that things with Sango and Miroku are going nicely. Nothing too fast, but steady foundation building all the same. It will be that much more meaningful when they do get together, I think.
| Reviewed By: inu_luver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 20:07 EST
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Great chappie! I must say, Kouga deserved what he got, the boasting jerk. So glad Inuyasha slapped him upside his arrogant little head... And that was so cool how he got busted by Sesshoumaru! It's never worth it to tell a lie. What I have a question about is Sessh's occupation: Since he had an art gallery, does that mean he's an artist, or did he just have the building named after him? And how he busted Kouga: Is he a lawyer? Please update soon and remember: fish are friends, not food!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! Loved the way Sesshomaru solved the situation, like a true lord. HAHAHA... Kouga had it coming, he is always an arrogant jerk that needs to be put in his place... in the cave where he lives. Loved Inuyasha here, mature and in control... Don't get why they are not talking about youkai mating and only about human wedding. Although, I think, we'll find sooner or later and, they will take both ceremonies... not only for love -Inuyasha is still insecure about been worthy, I think. His youkai is recognizing Kagome as her true mate, tho... so maybe, maybe... Excellent chapter!!! Loved it!! Thank you, thank you! I was needing a dose of Doggieearlover's work! LOL Again, thank you and thank you for sharing with us!!! Great job!!
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