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Reviewed By: fawn of the woods [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 11:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!! awesome!! stupendous!! I can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 10:14 EST
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I have to say, this chapter made me hungry! Lovely meal, and very fortunate for our fellows that it was so substantial. They needed it, in order to keep up with the shopping divas. So, Sango's having dreams of our monk, eh? Hmmmm, maybe this will soften her even more toward him, if he behaves himself! Will there be drama at the reception? Surely things can't stay smooth forever? What with wolves and angry ex girlfriends, things are bound to heat up!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 06:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry my tardiness!! LOL. The "old man" is always tricking them, some. After all, he loves his grandaughter and he knows -deep inside- that they are one for the other. He is an old man with his old customs but, he can bend things, a little if he is proofed wrong. Always liked how you portrait Kagome's family!!! Good that Sango is realizing what she is feeling, it will take time -after all she went through, what we know and what we don't, to make her really free. It's going to be a hard way but, sort of, she is starting her recovering and -sooner or later- she will open up when she feels comfortable enough with her new "family". She is building up her confidence, we must give her some time. Poor Miroku, hard to stop being who he always was!! He is showing how important Sango is, and that's new to him too. Love Inu/Kag relationship!! It's so good to have them in this stage of their relationship!!! For once, the worst angst situation is on the other couple! LOL Good chapter! Thank you for the update!! Merry Christmas to you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 19:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Imagines InuYasha just popping out of his clothing... drool... Anyway... Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 18:54 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Inuyasha and Kagome are SO adorable together. It was so sweet when they picked out their wedding rings. However, I also liked the "confrontation" with Kagome's grandfather. He wouldn't be a father (or grandfather in this case) if he didn't bust Inuyasha's chops a LITTLE bit. Because he's right; it won't always be easy for them. They are fortunate to be surrounded by open-minded people who love them for who they are....but there are also plenty of Kougas and Kikyos in the world. And they have to be prepared for that. Inuyasha knows this all too well.....but Kagome is still a bit new to it. She's seen Kouga and Kikyo in action, of course, but SHE has yet to be attacked directly herself concerning Inuyasha. Not that I think it would change her mind on bit; she loves Inuyasha so much. But still....she needs to be prepared. Her grandfather is right about that. I look forward to reading more soon!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 13:42 EST
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That was such a sweet chapter with all nervous jitters and heartfelt declarations. I thought the idea of Inu and Kags wearing rings was a thoughtful touch...I mean, in our culture it just so natural to do that it sounds kind of outlandish not to...but that was something clever to include. Thanks so much for another lovely update!! I look forward to reviewing some more great writing ~Reux
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 05:58 EST
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That was a great chapter. Ooooh, Kouga got his assed kicked! And Sesshoumaru was a gentleman. Sesshoumaru's position is surprising. Wow. He had to approve the marriage...Congrats on the awards! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: KAGOMELOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 02:38 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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love the story thus far cant wait for next chap. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 00:20 EST
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i'm really enjoying this fic. i'm taking my time about reading this last chappie because i don't know how long we'll have to wait for an update. and i'm really glad you fibally brought sesshy in. i love chappie 17. i am curious about a few things, but it might already be answered in this recent chappie. curious as to if we'll see Kikyou again, how long we'll have to wait before sango and miroku go on their first date, when sango's issue is out in the open with her and everyone, and if u'll end up featuring shippo. well, i can't wait to see more. please update soon and often
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Reviewed By: Rihannon On: December 10, 2007 01:22 EST
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Well, maybe you won't believe it, but I was only hoping that the reason for Sesshomaru to show up would be to ask Inuyasha to be Rin's Sensei. I have to confess that I was a little disappointed when I read chapter 17 and found out that Sesshomaru showed up because of a very different reason. Anyway, I was so delighted when I read this last chapter… I'm so happy!! Thank you for updating so fast… can't wait for the next chapter! Ah, and... I e-mailed something for you!
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 23:10 EST
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What a lovely treat to be able to read two chapters at once...double the pleasure!! I was only w/o internet for about a week...your updates are amazingly quick! Anyway, I really love the budding relationship between Miroku and Sango. I was waiting for it and reading it was exciting. I'm so happy that Sess and Rin have popped up too...they add great dynamics to the fic. Sess's nonchalant reference to the engagement was so subtle that I had to go back and read it again...haha. So Inu & Kags are tying the knot...I can only imagine what kind of snafus will sprout up because of that... Two wonderful chapters that I enjoyed immensely...thanks for sharing!! ~Reux
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Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: December 09, 2007 22:51 EST
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Still loving the story! Such a treat to read a few entries in a row! I'm really enjoying the relationship developing between Miroku and Sango. Plus I love the Sango / Kirara conversations (very feline)! Finally, I'm happy Rin is joining the story, and I love the line about Jaken, who will be bringing her to class, "much to his dismay" - I can almost see him throwing a fit with his staff! And next installment - shopping! A silly fangirl request for more youkai-Inuyasha /Kag, if it's to be fated in the story (always had a soft spot for him - I'm sure there's citrus potential following 533, if only I was a writer!). But as always, a treat to read a new installment. Happy holidays and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 15:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story and character development. It flows very nicely. Anxiously waiting the next installment!
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Reviewed By: LiHudson [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story, and I was surprised to see how well the two brothers got along. Great job as always, blending the characters into a new reality that fits them.
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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 13:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Congratulations on the iyfg awards! This story keeps getting more and more interesting. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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