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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 › » ] | Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:00 EST
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Wow, what an action packed chapter! It was good to see Kagome and Sango getting along so well, and not falling into the "damsel in distress" trap. And I'd been wondering when Kirara would choose to reveal her true form... this was a good way to introduce it. Then the way Kagome handled Inuyasha, even from instinct, just wow. They work well together, with him helping to defend her and the others and her being able to keep him in check. I must confess that the part I'm most looking forward to is the possibility of more interaction between Miroku and Sango. I can't wait to see what happens next with those two in particular, though I certainly hope Miroku doesn't try something stupid with Sango and get himself even more hurt than he already is...
| Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: November 10, 2007 16:22 EST
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Ah, Miroku - I'm sure he'll enjoy being nursed back to health by Sango (if he doesn't do anything to make her kill him...). But my favorite was youkai-Inuyasha, and Kagome's instinctive kiss to defuse the situation. I love how the story is progressing, and how true to character everyone is. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: rihannon On: November 09, 2007 23:57 EST
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Very well written… of course, expected nothing less. I think the story was ready for a little hard drama and action, and it was dramatic. I liked a lot how Kagome was able to bring InuYasha back with a kiss… so intense!! I'm glad to know that Seshomaru is going to be more than a reference, but what I find more intriguing is who was Sango's former Sensei. I guess you have a surprise for us… Looking forward for the next chapter!!!
| Reviewed By: serenity101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 15:52 EST
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bastard kouga. i hope one of his students kick his ass. when's sesshomaru coming into the picture? and the scene with her kissing inuyasha was from the 2nd movie too. that was cool. i really like this story. update soon.
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Reviewed By: nekonyago [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated this story very high because I love your stories. They are original but still try and keep the characters true to themselves. You definantly seem to hate Kouga though, but maybe he is an easy enemy for your stories. But I like the way you brought Sango's story into this one. Please keep up the amazing stories so I can feed me addiction. Oh I was also wondering how do I vote for you? If you could let me know. I am on livejournal under Nekonyago. I added you as a friend a few weeks ago. Please let me know so I can vote on all your stories.
| Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 10:47 EST
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Wow! This is one of the most well-crafted fanfics I've ever read! You have created a solid plot, and done an amazing job with the characters. I look forward to the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 07:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work, as usual. LOL Love what you did with those two idiots, even if I do like them. Kouga better watch trying anything with Kagome. She might purify something off that he wants to keep. (Now there is a plot bunny idea, if I ever heard one!) Catch you later, Fyrloche
| Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was an exciting chapter. I liked the fact that Ginta and Hakkaku were involved in the plot, but I'm hoping that they'll eventually turn their backs on Koga as well. He certainly has some issues with control and anger that need to be worked through before he can be considered anyone's leader. I will say that they were foolish for trying to take on either Kagome or Sango, but together really takes the cake. The girls may be human, but they're not weak. It is certainly an attitude a lot of these wolf demons will have to relearn. I don't think Inuyasha's really as angry as he claims---not with Miroku at least. He would have been furious if Miroku HADN'T tried to help those students being attacked by Koga. Inuyasha just falls back on that ol' gruff exterior when it comes to his true feelings, doesn't he? And Miroku. I swear, he'll never learn. Get the man a little punch-drunk and he forgets where he's at and what decorum he should follow. I hope he keeps his hands to himself and keeps going slow with Sango, even if he's a little loopy at the moment. Wanting her to ride in front of him so he could rub her bottom or other areas---so naughty. Poor Sango still doesn't even know of his intentions. I'm not surprised that she had no idea about everyone else's abilities, though. She's a fighter and very skilled, but she isn't a spiritual fighter or a demon. How inconvenient that Kirara had to show her true self in such a bad moment. But it's a good thing she did. I can't say I'd stick around too long if a giant fire cat just jumped in on the scene. After all, it's not every day the little kitty you thought was just a slightly unusual cat turns out to be a magical being! I'm not surprised that Koga found Kagome's trigger button, either. She's never liked being told that she's "submitting" to anyone. She also hates it when anyone says that Inuyasha is worthless or weak. Of course her temper rising would have to affect Inuyasha's, though Koga got lucky again finding Inuyasha's trigger, too. What a jerk, though, to basically say he'll have Kagome without asking her about it. I'm hoping that his own community will do more than change dojos. They're going to have to do something about his attitude and behaviors---even if it's drastic. He's a danger to himself and everyone else the way he's behaving. He's not acting like a leader at all. He's acting like a cheeky pup or a pup in the midst of a monstrous temper tantrum because someone took his favorite toy away. That's not the kind of leader I'd want to have and they shouldn't, either. Just because males and females are considered unequal under Koga or other leaders before him doesn't mean that it has to stay that way. It's fairly obvious that the females are unhappy with this situation, and I'd have to say that some of the males must be, too. I'd think that the males with a mate and pups will be more likely to stand up for their family---and therefore their females---than those without. Why would they want their mate to be considered less than equal if they really loved them? I think there's going to be some sort of uprising to Koga's rule---and even if he doesn't like it, it'll happen because of his foolish views on things. I'm just hoping that when he finally realizes how foolish he's been that he can change his ways. Now, I'm looking forward to this private dinner party between Kagome, Inuyasha, Sango, and Miroku. Sango has just learned some new things about her friends, and I have a funny feeling they don't have these gifts for no particular reason. I don't think it's to stand against Koga, either. Koga's a lot of hot air, really. I can't imagine that he'd do well in a one-on-one fight with Inuyasha. So, this mysterious enemy lurking in the shadows---when will he make his sinister entrance? And will Sango tell them about her past in this meeting? They might already know, but I'll be curious if all they talk about is Miroku and Kagome's spiritual powers. It should be fun, either way. | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is wonderful. I haven't read such a good story with Sango and the main character in a long time (or maybe ever). Love the romance you have there too.
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 22:21 EST
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YES REVIEW 200! lolAt least I should be. =D I loved how this chapter finally showed some true colors ofd th characters. Though some were expected. like kouga being an ass. And especially how you update awesomely fast. Great chapter ;D
| Reviewed By: InusGurl4(nsi) On: November 07, 2007 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 18:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter and a very good insight of ookami youkai females' life, poor girls. Liked Kagome's confidence and how she works along with Sango. I think that both of them still have to discover a lot about themselves, like Kagome's power... Maybe we'll see a bit more of Kaede helping here. At the same time, good aproach to Kouga -as a youkai- behaviour, sorely there will be more of him coming. Don't like him, never did, never will and in this case, cannot stand him... maybe because here he's cut out his "prince possesive charming" act. Loved, the little action and their response as team. Think we will see a lot of that in the upcoming chapters as you are developing them -little by little- towards this, as well as Sango and Miroku's little encounter in the aftermath. Very nice chapter! Congrats! and thank you for the update and for sharing it with us!!!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 18:18 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. That darned Kouga is a piece of work (to say the least!). What he was willing to do to hiw own people just because they left his dojo was ridiculous. BUT, he and minions got their little butts kicked, so alls well that ends well. PLUS, I think Kouga's own people are going to deal.....harshly with him, so thing could get even worse for him. And it couln't happen to a "nicer" jerk. However, Kirara revealed herself to Sango, and Kagome now knows about her spiritual powers....so this may be a blessing in disguise. Inuyasha and Kagome are a terrific couple by the way. I loved when her kiss brought him back to himself after the fight. But I was also glad to see some interaction between Miroku and Sango. This is going to be interesting; I was looking forward to this kickoff. And I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 17:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! I hope you have more commin soon.
| Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 15:23 EST
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Talk about a tense moment...sheesh, Kouga's gone and lost his marbles. I liked seeing Kagome so confident and secure with herself...coming to Inu's rescue for once. Kirara transforming was appropriate, as were Sango's feelings about being left out. I can tell you that I hate when people do that...haha. And Miroku can still play the tragic victim so well...hehe. Just another brilliant chapter and I can't wait to see what Kouga tries next. Thanks so much for sharin'! ~Reux
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