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Reviewed By: Yabou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed reading this. I just started during the last chapter, and I thought I had reviewed... but... lol I have a very bad memory. I don't usually read Sango/Miroku based fanfictions, but you tend to jump around enough that we get to see all of the characters. And, I'm really intrigued by what *did* happen in Sango's past, and Miroku's. I also like your realistic view of the characters... you're not skewing them so much from the canon. It's great that they retain their personalities. I can't wait to see what you turn out next!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. MAN, Kagome's friends are pushy...except for Ayumi. I'm glad that she had sense enough to care what KAGOME wanted to do on her birthday. However, she may yet be able to get some use out of the outfit they bought her. If Kagome wears that for Inuyasha on Sunday, he will have no doubt what she wants from him...if he doesn't pass out from shock first, LOL. I look forward to seeing what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 13:32 EDT
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Ah, Eri and Yuka...It's good that Kagome has Sango to help be counterweight to their wildness, and be a friend anchor for Kagome and Ayume to hold on to! Somehow, I sense more troubles with ookami in the future....Can't imagine Kouga being happy about losing students to InuYasha....and the birthday draws ever closer....
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 13:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I especially liked the repor with Inuyasha and Kagome while she was sitting in his lap. Keep up the terrific work!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 12:28 EDT
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Great chapter. Love the IY/K interactions, so sweet. Good to see IY gaining students, of all races. Love your writing style, always in character, and very easy to read.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 12:09 EDT
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each time you post a new chapter, it's like a little vacation for me. I just love the way the story is developing. Just so sweet! Love it and I can't wait for more.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 09:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A cute and tame chapter. I loved how Kagome was insistant on Sango hanging out with her. I love the relationships you've developed between everyone. Great job.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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CONGRATS on the award!!! Another sweet chapter! Very fluffy that Kags has know for so long that Inu was the only one for her! There's so much to look forward to in the next chapters...how will Kags birthday party go on Saturday? Will it be safe for them to wander Inuyasha's property? How will Kouga respond to losing some students to Inuyasha? Will the Higurashi's need a bigger litter box for Kirara? LOL Not to mention Sunday...whew! Inuyasha had better like whatever Kagome is making if he knows what's good for him! :)
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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 20:43 EDT
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Another great chapter. I'm really liking the progression of Kagome and Sango's friendship, as well as Kagome's relationship with Inuyasha, and I can't wait to see what happens over the weekend.
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Reviewed By: The Daimyo On: September 22, 2007 21:53 EDT
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the August 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/aug2007awards/Best-AU-AR-Fiction -3rd.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Aug2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our seventh term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 23:17 EDT
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My mind is just filled with a million different scenarios that could go on with everyone during the event-filled weekend. I can't wait to find out! I love the progression going on between everyone...not too fast, not too slow...it's just right. Another great chapter! I patiently await the next installment! Until then, keep it up and thanks so much for sharin'. Reux.
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Title: sorry I didn't login to lazy
Reviewed By: shivonne aka ladytokyo On: September 20, 2007 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so excite with the new update. seems like the monk has change althought I want to know the story behind why he goes out of his way to be a pervet. It's almost Kagomes birthday yeah!!!! I wonder what romance does Kagome plan with Inuyasha that she has to get birth control heyheyhey! lol Is she planning to cook dinner? hm I guess I have to find out in the next chapter. I wanted to say thank you for coming out with another fic after live and let die 3 it would have been to much of a shock if it just all ended. and even though you deserve the break many of us are happy you didn't take one. catch ya next chapter ladytoky
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 22:17 EDT
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yay! im so glad you have updated!i love the whole story plot! i cant wait to see what happens netween inu and kags next! and i wonder whats going to happen with miroku and sango in chapters to come! please udpate soon i cant wait. i just have one question? how old is everyone? i kinda think kagome is around 20 but thats just a guess from what you have said about it being 5 years at the dojo. but how old are inuyasha sango and miroku?
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what Kagome has planned for Sunday. Although, I can probably guess. I wonder what will happen on Saturday as well. I hope something exciting. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. I'm really enjoying how things are progressing with Inuyasha and Kagome. And if she's planning what I think she is on Sunday, poor Inuyasha is in for the shock of his life! Not that I think he'll mind it very much...LOL. They are so cute! As for Miroku and Sango, I definitely look forward to seeing where they get to. Thus far, you've done a really good job of letting us get to know the two of them individually. So, that will make it that much better when they finally do start getting together. Good story.
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