| "The Sweetest Escape" Reviews/Comments [ 255 ] |
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Title: WHY?!
Reviewed By: sunekai to lazy to log in On: October 19, 2007 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooooooo.....it should have been longer...T-T......so good....when's next chappie?
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Reviewed By: roshyn77 On: October 18, 2007 15:07 CDT
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Wow! This was just amazing your story is going very smoothly the only problems I see are a few spelling errors in some chapters but other than that I think this fic is great.
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 07:42 CDT
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I am so possitive that I blushed through this whole thing! It was just painfully adorable! You know I did a google search to see what easter lillies look like! That's how hooked I am! I got up at five am to study and just when I check my e-mail, I see a new chapter! I'm not lying! It was so sweet! I like how he painted that portrait, the image looked so nice in my mind and it was so cute how he kept messing up, correcting himself, then sounding so nervous. I love how he had cluched to flowers so hard from nervousness; the description of his anticipation couldn't be more imaginary. I could visualize it perfectly in my mind! Anyway, Souta's hyperactiveness and Ms. Higurashi's kindness had me going "AWWWW" seconds before Kagome came in. I wanted to faint at the end. That scene where he's so self-concious and Kagome absolutely revels her picture. That was precious! I like how he's also getting closer to Sango and Miroku. Oh and I noticed that little note, "You.Are.An. Ass." ^_^
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 03:15 CDT
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Very nice. Love the fluffy Inu and his blushes. You've got his hesitant nature a/b relationships down pat. And K is just perfect. Like that she wasn't gone long, but that IY made new friends while she was away. Learning to branch out on his own. But will he ever break free of the evil that is his father? Make his own way, and become the unstoppable hayou we all love? A thought, how old are they again, 17? Good, not so much time then, til freedom. Can't wait to read the journey there!
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Title: yup its one of those nights hehe
Reviewed By: Autumn the Reviewer nsi On: October 18, 2007 01:10 CDT
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Yay!! that was an awesome chapter! So light and fluffy, it made my own heart lighter. I was really glad to read a chapter minus the usual angst, it was exactly what I needed to read. Thank you for sharing your story! Keep up the excellent work!
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Title: rolling in fluff and loving it!!
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 00:43 CDT
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well you can't have us witnessing the poor boy being abused or bloody on every paragraph, i wouldn't be able to read it. really, the only way i would read any angst is if there is a balance of good with the bad and an eventual happy ending or i refuse to even consider reading (my family and friends won't rent or try to watch scary/dark/angst films if i will be there, i become physically ill). . . i revel in your fluffiness!! ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 00:06 CDT
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I was so hoping for an update to this today...and then to have it be a happy moment. Thanks...lovely how you catch the awkwardness and make it just right...
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Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a wonderful heartfelt piece of work. I am spellbound. This is so provocative emotionally. You really get into the heart of abuse, loneliness, and are able to skillfully draw in your audience. Kudos to you. I can't wait to see him get outta there and find true happiness. Shame on his family, but cheers for Kagome and other real characters out there who step and save the day. I know because minus the beatings, I personally know how little "Yash" felt. You have a gem here. Be very proud and continue to update.
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Reviewed By: KemicalRomantik [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 02:52 CDT
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I just finished the last chapter, and *sniffles* it was beautiful! Except for the kikyo part but nobody really cares bout her anyways. Inuyasha is so cute! And the comic relief was good, thouugh its good in other chapters too. I always have a little giggle fest. They make me smile so much, anyways love this story, can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: KemicalRomantik [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 02:30 CDT
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I'll have you know that I started reading your story today and am already at the second last chapter so far, I'll be reviewing after I finish the last one. And the tears have been coming non stop. God this is one on THE most amazing stories I've read on this site. And things that make me cry and smile at the same time, believe me I never forget. So thankyou for giving me and many other readers the privelige to read your story. The one you wrote cuz you wanted to. something that came from the heart. I love stories like that. Sometimes things that start in your head don't work out and sometimes they do. But the ones from the hearty are like magic. You feel like you're living the story ad the characters are your best friends. But when the end you're sad. Because they're not there anymore. I know I'm rambling, anyways thanks.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 02:29 CDT
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ganbaru- to persist; to insist on; to stand firm; to try one's best. ganbatte- Hold on; Go for it; Keep at it. . . you could look them up at: Jeffrey's Japanese~English Dictionary Server. . . one would assume that his father wouldn't care if he wasn't ever home. . . yash and miroku's boy's day was fun, it's good that he's spending time with someone while kagome is away. . . the bad stuff -i still say that the only way to get back at people is to become a success. . . good chapter. goodnight. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: soooo tired...
Reviewed By: Autumn the reviewer nsi On: October 12, 2007 00:56 CDT
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blah, too lazy to sign in again, but not lazy enough to not review. :) Gah, great chapter, I like the time Miroku and Inuyasha spent together. A boys day out, was just what we needed. Will Kagome come back in the next chapter? Oh and Kikyou was a total shithead. How dare she lead Inuyasha on, and then dump him with a bill. Poor Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 23:12 CDT
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AHA! I knew it! I knew something like that happened in his past! Why else would he have been so distanced from Kagome when she tried to help him. Needless to say, I don't hate Kikyo either. Even in the anime, I felt simpithy for her. It just so happens that many fanfictions place her as the she-devil because of personal bias agaisnt her character. Aw well. Anyway, I wonder what will happen if Inuyasha starts to rebel and gets a more corageous outlook. If he starts fighting back agaisnt his father, the students. But I don't mean like physical violence. True, I do wonder what would happen if he used self defence agaisnt his dad, but as for the students...well what if he just proved...I can just see him telling then off when they talk behind his back. I can see him turning with a half smile and saying, "I. Don't. Give. A. Fuck." It's so nice that he now has a guy friend. I'm so glad that he and Miroku are getting along. I really hope things get better! I want to see what happens when Kagome comes back. Will Miroku spill the beans? Duh dun dun! Of course I don't think he will. I think Kagome already knows though. ^_^ tee hee. And another thing, I want Sesshoumaru to get flabberblasted out of his mind! OR I just want Inuyasha to get revenge, sweet sweet revenge! Sorry, it's your story not mine, but I can't help it! OOOOH! See what you are doing! you've got me wrapped around your finger with this story! Write more please and soon, or my brain will implode! *BOOM*....Too late. Hope I made you laugh!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 15:04 CDT
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Poor Inu, to have such a background! One of my kids smashed his locker like that! But they didn't expell him. I think it was nice that Miroku thinks of him as a friend and that he got some reinforcement that Kagome really likes him...Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Anninat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 11:15 CDT
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I really love this story, especially your characterization of Inuyasha - and the way that each chapter reveals a little more of his past in a way that has me completely and utterly hooked! Thank you so much for putting this up, as well as being so good at updating. Can't wait until the next chapter!
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