| "The Sweetest Escape" Reviews/Comments [ 255 ] |
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 02:18 CDT
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*grins* Sherwin Williams sure plays a good part in the color scheme. I like the chapter and am happy you put it out there so quickly. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu/different computer and can't remember my password On: September 09, 2007 21:18 CDT
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what's with his father? beat him up until he stands up to him and fights back or torture him then toss him out when he's of age? . . . that was a very touching scene, i'm usually a strictly 'romance/comedy/parody' sort of person but this story kinda got under my skin and even though i'm all traumatized by the angst/drama i will stick to the end... i shall counteract with as much fluff as i can find. ~ thank you, ginny
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Title: awsome story
Reviewed By: adamileJ On: September 09, 2007 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I can relate to Inuyasha about never had any friends in school and being made fun of. So I think you did a great job in writing. I wanted to know if Sango and Miroku was going to still be friends with Kagome. Love the story and hope you will continue to write it. J
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 01:28 CDT
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This chapter was absolutely amazing and really indepth to the characters feelings and emotions. I absolutely adore how you portrayed this chapter. I want Inuyasha and Kagome to be happy so badly, and you're slowly putting it together. I hope Sango, Miroku and Shippou make it into the story as well, because Inuyasha needs some friends. It makes me ache to read that he is lonely. No one should be lonely, no matter who you are or what you are in his case. I know its hard to befriend someone who is a social outcast and I know how hard it is to be shy and uncomfortable. So please find some time to write another chapter. This story is amazingly sad and it touches some part of my heart and squeezes some tears out of my eyes.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 20:10 CDT
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different last name? does that mean that his 'father' isn't his biological father? or was yasha a product of a short affair or a tragic love? the fact that the boy exists is his own fault and punishing his son for it is just stupid. . . glad yash had a good time, the boy deserves it. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 19:00 CDT
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I enjoyed the chapter a lot. I think you're doing well at moving the relationship along without rushing. NOTE: Kirsch, despite being cherry brandy, is colorless, at least all I've seen.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 15:57 CDT
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the scenes of yasha's abusive father, the descriptions of the humiliation and alienation of both characters, the sincere interest and naivete, her persistence kindness. the reactions of so called friends and fellow students and faculty to what he is and kagome's reaching out to someone she feels is lonely and in need of friendship. the lyrics to the song: 'you've got to be taught', from the movie 'south pacific' come to mind ~~ "You've got to be taught to hate and fear, you've got to be taught from year to year, it's got to be drummed in your dear little ear--- you've got to be carefully taught! . . . You've got to be taught to be afraid of people whose eyes are oddly made, and people whose skin is a different shade--- you've got to be carefully taught. . . . You've got to be taught before it's too late, before you are six or seven or eight, to hate all the people you relatives hate--- you've got be carefully taught!" ~~ thank you, ginny
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: mrs_skelington23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THANK U SOOO MUCH 4 WRITING THIS STORY. THIS IS 1 OF THE BEST STORIEZ I THINK I'VE EVER READ ON HERE. THE WAY U WRITE IS REALLY AMAZING THERE'S SO MUCH DETAIL NOT TO MENTION THAT THE STORY LINE IS INCREDIBLE AS WELL. I CRIED WHILE READING THIS I'M SERIOUS! IT'S SO SAD AND THE WAY YOU INTERPRET HIS FEELINGS AND HIS LIFE IS REALLY AWESOME AND REALLY BRINGS HIS CHARACTER TO LIFE AND SHOWS HOW HARD HIS LIFE IS. THE LINES ARE LIKE POETRY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE AND MORE AND MAKE THIS A REALLY LONG STORY..NOT A SLOW STORY BECAUSE I WANT HIM TO START FALLING FOR HER REALLY QUICK! BUT YEAH THANK YOU AND KEEP IT UP!
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Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard On: July 31, 2007 09:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've taken a standard storyline and made it your own. Very interesting work. I'm not a fan of abuse stories but again, it works in context and I look forward to reading more of the growing relationships. Pity Papa's such a prick.
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Reviewed By: roshyn77 On: July 29, 2007 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic you are writting is awesome. Not only does it have good writting skills but it also has a believeable background, because something similair happened to my friend awhile back except they were crueler they pasted nude pics all over the school and pasted her face from the yr book on the bodies. She had it so bad she had to switch schools and she didn't even do anything she just stood up for what she believed in. I just hope they grow up sometime and get what's coming to them. Anyway I just find it amazing how you make it so realistic. Keep up the good work.
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Title: The Sweetest Escape
Reviewed By: Traveling_Miko On: July 29, 2007 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am thoroughly INTRIGUED!!! I love the way that you have moved this fic to pull me into this world you have created. So that I in turn cannot help but love these characters more and more. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: youki_luver78 On: July 29, 2007 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapters! Please continue to post more! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Pariah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 14:37 CDT
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Great chapter! The build up is starting to come to fruition. I can't wait to see what happens from here. I wonder how Inuyasha will handle himself now that he knows Kagome has no devious intentions. That'll be something to see.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 05:44 CDT
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lol great last two chapters. I really enjoy reading this. I didnt catch any typos, but i wasnt really looking for them. I can't wait to read what Kagome and Inuyasha do over their winter break, but I hope you bring Miroku and Sango in soon. Maybe even Shippou. Anyways, its 6:44 am and i haven been to bed, so im gonna jet. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 05:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done! I really like the way the last chapter turned out; It was even better than I expected. Didn't see that key scratch in the car thing coming, but you're right, that'd totally be something significant enough where Inuyasha would think...hey, wait a minute. It was perfect.
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