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Title: tp lazy to log in
Reviewed By: stacey/sunekai On: December 03, 2007 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG.....write the next chappie PLEASE for me!?!?...its so awesomerz!!!!.....oichi's brother is the BOMB.....inuyasha can actually go to college, im so happy and that a hott make out session between kags and him...to bad souta had to come and ruin in....ur a very talented author....keep writing for ur beloved fans! **hearts**
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 03:17 CST
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Lets kill Orichi aka Oreo. Lets celebrate Gamy! Whoo hooo, Inuyasha goes to college! All he has to do, is paint. How awesome is that?! Great! I still hate that Inuyasha is treated differently for being a hanyou, but Gamy doesn't care. Or he does, but not enough to not do this. Yippie!! Great chapter, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 01:31 CST
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First of all, Congratulations on winning best dramma! You deserved it! Second, poor guy, can't go anywhere without those hateful looks. Loved Inuyasha's quote. "You got a death wish?" "Only for you." That made me laugh, Niiice! Also, I want to comment on the description for that girl's, Aoko, description of the painting. How ironic is it that those words relate to Inuyasha in a way and how silly of Aoko to think she's been through worse then he has. Souta is quite a piece of work. I'd be embarresed if my innocent little brother came in while I was with my Boyfriend, but I wouldn't expect to be blackmailed like that. And it's a good thing that things are finally looking up for Inuyasha. I'm glad that he gets an education. Happy to see some joy in his life. Thank you for the update. Jian
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 01:28 CST
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when a door closes, hopefully a window will open… it was nice of you to provide an open window for him. some day he and his art will be famous and it will help the hanyou cause everywhere. ~ peace, ginny
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Reviewed By: roshyn77 On: December 03, 2007 00:58 CST
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Wow this chapter was amazing, not only is Inuyasha standing up for himself more he got into school yay. I just hope he doesn't get caught by his dad or worse if his brother ratted him out on where he was going and stuff cause he's Sesshoumaru end of story. Anyway I felt this was a really good chapter excellent work ;)
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 22:26 CST
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Hehe YAY. This chapter left me with a big ol' grin on my face. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 22:22 CST
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Yay! About time he gets a break! Will he be able to get out of his dad's house successfully? What will this mean for him and Kagome and family? I am looking forward to seeing this catepillar bloom into a butterfly, like he deserves!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 22:17 CST
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Alright, something's finally looking good for IY on the school front, and involving his painting, too! But, how long will he have to paint for this guy? How much before the debt is paid? What will his dad do/say? Will K go with, or to a separate school, and if so, how will they handle that? So many ???, but I am loving the discovery!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: November 29, 2007 12:10 CST
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When you described the painting that Inu did, my heart swelled with hope that this would be a stepping stone for him and things would finally get a little better. But then that horrible person who doesn't even deserve a name threw him out of the compitition. I almost cried. I got that tight feeling in my chest and, for a moment, I was truly indignant. You have done a great job of sucking the reader into this piece. Wonderful wonderful job. As for the next chapter. I really hope that Inu's dad doesn't find out about all of this. (you know the fluffy bunny inside of me hopes that the evil man somehow talks to Sess about the wonderful piece of art done by this hideous hanyou and Sess actually does turn his heart somehow....but I know that you are probably going to shoot that bunny in the head, huh?) Thanks for writing for us!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Great updates!!1 I sooooo can't wait to read more! I think that it was really unfair of that guy to disqualify Inuyasha from that contest just cause he was a hanyo!Unfair rich guy.... Anyway, please keep updateing!
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Title: too tired to sign in
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer nsi On: November 26, 2007 23:49 CST
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Wow.. that pompus jackass of a.. grrrrrrrrrrrr.. can I kill that oreo guy? Seriously, I think I might write a short one-shot on the many ways I want to torture him. Poor Inuyasha. That bastard.. I hate seeing true talent get wasted away by the very likes of biased people. And the painting sounded beautiful. Women of my World. Stupid Oreo. (lol). I'm so very grateful to mrs. H. on her comforting Inuyasha. I wish I could step into the story and beat Oreo up and help comfort Inuyasha... I hope the next chapter is lighter and not so dreary. Maybe some ice cream sundaes to cheer inu up? Hurry up and write the next chapter, Im all eyes.. hehehe..Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: silenthoughts [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 23:42 CST
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I absolutely adored that chapter! I love how much you have incorperated not just Kagome, but her mother into Inuyashas life. And you make Inuyasha feelings so unbelieveibly realistic! Even after everything his father and brother have done to him, he still wants to impress them and make them think that he's not such a failure after all- and that is very realistic, to always want to impress the people that hurt you. Your story is just so good! I don't know what to say! I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 11:03 CST
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My first reaction while reading this chapter was 'grrrrrrrrrrrrrr, give me a damned hatchet! I'm going bigot hunting' ..... I admit that I'd thought of them three together in a painting as sort of the 'three fates' at one point, but hadn't thought you'd place that painting here... silly really, seeing that they're the most important people in his life, and this, till now was the most important event. I'm beginning to wonder about your Japan... Is there /anything/ that is fair in it, save the main characters? I can't say I was expecting the austing, while at the same time I was dreading it... I do know that there is some real descrimination of this sort in present day Japan against half-Korean and half-Chinese people, but mostly with the older generations. Now they you've effectively cut off Inuyasha's legs by taking the free-college possibility, I'm wondering how you plan to give him a future ... girl, you've just managed to make me stick to it even faster! I had /really/ hoped the mike had been left on for all the rest of the people to hear, or for someone to be able to record ... Oichi needs a nice lawsuit. Can I go hatchet happy on him instead? I just hope nobody at their school catches wind of this, but with that little ... adorably stuck-up bitch of a girl who gave his marbles away, I don't think you'll be kind enough to let his 'failure' remain a private pain, are you?
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 02:11 CST
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Ahem, excuse my language, but...I.FUCKING.HATE. THAT. GORO GUY! I want him to rot in hell!!! When I read that passage, I almost cried. 'Business' I'll show you bussiness you bastard! How sweet of Kagome to instantly know that he needed her and remind him that he's not a useless hanyou. I felt like I wanted to die when I read that part about him crying. I love MRs. Higurashi. I could understand why she was also in the picture. Oh and that picture! A tripple portrait of who he cares for most. His mother, obviously, the vailent woman who protected him. Ms. Higurashi who guides him and Kagome who believes in him. I could almost picture it in my mind, the painting. He deserved to win damnit! Oh geez. I wonder what'll happen next. Even though I hate him, your take on the bussiness/"humanitarian" Goro was really convincing and villianous. What a truly hateful bad guy!
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Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: adamilej On: November 24, 2007 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really felt this chapter. I could almost feel his despair. Well hopefully something will go right for the hanyou. update soon. J
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