| "The Sweetest Escape" Reviews/Comments [ 255 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 02:50 CST
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That was just too depressing - I'm glad you said that there will be a happier ending... gotta agree with Knittingknots, life is too sweet and too short. However, it was very well written and shows your talent as a writer because of the strong emotions it evokes. It was simply heartbreaking!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 02:23 CST
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Screaming, crying, heartbroken.....I'm glad you're going to have another ending, cause this Inu surely didn't deserve this. Life is just too sweet, and there's just a hell of too much grief to make art of this type of misery. The older you get, the more you lose, the more you realize that celebrating angst because life's a bitch is not a good thing. And this sweet boy surely doesn't deserve this nightmare ending. We get enough of that in the daily news.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 02:12 CST
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You know, it's really interesting how we lie to ourselves. IY's father, full demon, made the choice to bed IY's mother. He had to know there was a risk of pregnancy. He took a chance, so turning around and blaming the child for HIS decision is really low. Of course, we've known that all along, I'd just really have liked to see him have to face it. What happened to him anyway? Did he ever regret his behavior?
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: Sunekai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY!.....he has taken her offer and yay....i hope they do live together....>
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 29, 2008 13:58 CST
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I found this story a few days ago and it took me that long to give you a review. I absolutely love it. This story have such great potential to go either way. Like Inuyasha benefactor can die leaving Inuyasha his wealth (Inu goes to school and finds out he is very good in understanding business). And since Sess has his own business he may want to make a deal with Inu's benefactor but he dies. That will me he would have to deal with Inuyasha again. Sounds familiar 'Tensiaga' Sess has always wanted it but never can because it always belong to Inu. Can not wait until you update. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: hot for ABERCROMBIE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 20:47 CST
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Holy, this story is awesome. The plot line is so original. I love how you had Inuyasha be the 'abused character', and Kagome his 'savior'. It's always the other way around, and I personally, am so sick of those stories. They're way overdone. Inuyasha is so adorable in this;the way he becomes so shy after he does something sweet. I think the character development for Inuyasha is very interesting too. Anyways, good freaking job, seriously. You are an amazing writer. I seldom come across a truly 'great' writer, but I think you are among the very few. And, I have to say, this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Keep up the good work! UPDATE SOON=]
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Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 07:11 CST
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Wow! I love this story! I couldn't stop reading this and am eagerly waiting for your next update. Love the tempo of your story and your style of writing!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 19:36 CST
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my heart is beating and i'm shaking, nice description, like i was the one running away. . . won't his father follow his scent trail to the shrine? now would be a good time to have some miko powers to build a strong barrier. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet! Inuyasha is finally getting out! Can't wait to read the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879(NSI) On: January 22, 2008 21:54 CST
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OMG do you ever know how to write..i am sitting here on the edge of my seat my heart beating nearly as fast as Inu's should be..i can't wait to see..i'm nearly as scared as him for when he opens the door to find out how his father greats him his brother is still there
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Reviewed By: PhoPoe On: January 22, 2008 20:12 CST
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Jesus, you've got me at the very edge. And the fact that I've been CRAVING you to update... well, I'll pounce on the next chapter like crazy, I can tell you that much.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 14:48 CST
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Urk. Really and truly, urk. Of course. I should have known you'd go with Sesshoumaru; like an author true to her title, you're laying on the tension thick and heavy, to make sure that the climax is perfect... I can feel it coming in my bones. I do hope you won't leave us waiting for too long this time; it just might kill me.
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 00:25 CST
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OH GOD! My heart is thumping! I'm mad that you had to end it like that! I seriously want Sesshoumaru to DIE! Oh my god, oh my god oh my god! Is he going to make it? Will his old man go nuts! Will Kagome be in danger? Holy crap you're killing me woman! PLEASE CONTINUE SOON! I'm so scared for him! Hell I almost peed in my pants when he was being interogated by Sesshoumaru! I scared out of my wits! You gotta update as soon as you can! Or I'll go out of my mind!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 21:38 CST
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omfg i cant wait for another update! well i love it keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: silenthoughts [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 20:48 CST
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Holy crap! You're killing me! Ahhh! I have to know what happens next! I just have to! I know something terribly bad is going to happen! I just have to know what happens! And even if he does make it out, what if his dad goes searching for him at school! i am so on edge! This chapter was so good! It has to be one of my favorite chapters in the story! I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon! You're doing a spectacular job! I absolutely love the story!
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