| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... there must be a reason why inuyasha is addicted to kagome... everything is still mysterious... hopefully in the next chapter you can shed some light... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: ^.^
Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 09:13 PDT
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...have I ever told you, I love you? (rotflmao loved the update!)
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Reviewed By: bk On: October 02, 2007 06:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. This chapter was great. I wanted the chapter to go on and hated to see the it end. Thanks for writing a great story. I will be watching for updates.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 05:25 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG Miroku and Sango are in it now!!!! OMFG i need to know more!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE dont be long!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 04:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It's so ironic that kagome thinks she looks sick when the rest of the world thinks that she's gotten prettier. And it's also amazing how SHALLOW guys can be. She wasn't interesting to them at all before her dealings with Inuyasha enhanced her looks. Now, all of the sudden, she's getting asked out on dates by guys who normally wouldn't give her a second glance. How UNflattering....and typical. I do wonder what Miroku and Sango's roles are in this story. It will be interesting to find out. Good story.
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Title: l love it!!
Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 10:20 PDT
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This is quickly becoming one of my favorites!! I absolutely can't get enough of it! BRAVO!
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 15:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, from a one-shot to a full fiction. It's great! I am looking forward to another chapter. Chanda
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 12:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. I'm liking the interactions you have going on, as well as your OCs, most excellent. Now what will Sess do when he finds out. Not think he'll be a happy camper, lol. Till next time, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: future author On: September 20, 2007 11:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter as always. I wonder what the rest of the truth is. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Until the next update, good luck!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 07:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... kagome's not happy about her situation... hope inuyasha & kagome will get along... wonder what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 04:02 PDT
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Good chapter. I am really enjoying the interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome, and I definitely look forward to finding out more about their situation. Obviously, there's more to this than Kagome's been told, and I can't wait to find out what that is.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 01:44 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo i LOVE it!!!! im sooo drawn into this story! your such a great author!!! you must type more!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: September 18, 2007 21:26 PDT
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I know I wanted him to bite her again. ^.^ Anyway it was a marvelous job and I enjoyed the longer chapter. So what happens now? He's bitten her twice now...what will the punishment be? Will they just have to be together so that he can feed off her now? Not that that would be a bad thing for the sake of the story and for their developing relationship. Honestly I understand that these Nightwalkers are different from vampires...kinda like Carpathians right? They thrive at night and feed off of people but don't kill and they aren't evil but they do have an animalistic quality/side to them. If you like that kind of guy you described in the beginning of this chapter I highly recommend that you read Christine Feehan's Carpathian series...My fav is Dark Guardian. ^.^
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Title: common day vouyer
Reviewed By: Maeve Kelly On: September 18, 2007 08:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not everyday I get to read some good ol' smut. It's even better when it the reading populace says to make it into a story. And I love the fact that Kagome is not a classical beauty. I was hooked with the first chapter- the one shot, and as I've read, am anticipating more. My only critic, watch for little spelling mistakes and continuity of your sentence structure. BUT - your story is a mastery in the works. Another shiny star I've added to my fav's list. So I'm off to read your other work. It's the joy of finding new authors (to me) to read, because I love to see a author's development in writing style and you paint a pretty picture with your words. :) Ja ne! Maeve
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Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: ca_ca_00 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 07:53 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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