| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonwitch2468nsi On: November 20, 2007 01:19 EST
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I have 2 guesses 1 being that Rin is the incarnation of Kagome which would be sad because then Rin would have to die before Kagome was born, the other is that Kagome's father is the Lord of the North or what ever wich one that Sessy said kept to himself and noone saw. It would also explain the instincts Kagome has and why it is so easy for her to accept Sessy youki. That would also explain part of the transformation that she will go through, also if he was a lord he would have servents and thoose would be the people surpriced when Kagome and the gang shoed up. I hope i am not spoiling anything for you though by giving this theory though. Update soon so we can find out what is to come.
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 00:48 EST
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Hmmm.....I think that Rin is either a relative (maybe a half sister or something), or yet another reincarnate of Kikyou.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 23:54 EST
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yay! you're back!!! I missed you too! I didn't find a thing out of place, but then again, I was just trying to enjoy the story! mmmmm sesshomaru..... yum. hope you're feeling better! Once again, thanks for your grammar abilities!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 23:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Chapter 50. I can't imagine that kind of dedication. I'm very thankful that you are so dedicated and I'm sure more than a few other's agree with me. Very wonderful chapter. I love how Sesshoumaru tries to reassure Kagome that she is the one he whats and no one else. It's so cute. He's so tender with her but the tenderness still holds so much passion. Anywho, here's my theory. I think Rin is somehow related to Kagome. I haven't figured out how yet but I couldn't help but catch that thing Kagome's father said about how they would all be suprised when they found out who Rin was. I really love that you included her. I can't wait for the next chapter. Get well soon.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 19, 2007 09:38 EST
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Feel better soon. Are you ok?
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 13:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I hope that you and your family get better soon. This is a excellent story. I started reading it and it just sucked me in. That's a good thing ..Well, please update as soon as you can. I look forward to continue reading this story. Cassandralynn30
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 00:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. Sessh is OOC but in a good way. I love the inimate scenes they have together. I also love the way you don't debase Inuyasha. He is a great character and I hate it when people who write S/K fics make him out to be a complete idoit. The story line is very original and I can't help but be sucked in. I usually don't like when the story makes Kagome have new abilities because it usually sound cheesy. Your story is different in the way that it does this so I very much approve. Please feel better and I hope that your mother does as well.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 15:53 EST
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I'm sorry that you all are feeling yucky. I hope your mom gets better, (you too, of course) and I think it would be prudent to get her to the doctor's. It doesn't sound normal to get sick every couple of weeks for long periods of time. I waste WAY too much of my time watching the Discovery Health Channel. *smacks self in forehead* I haven't been feeling 100% lately, I guess it's getting around. I totally love these past few chapters! I can't wait for the next one. I just might die. lol. Feel better!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 09:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi. I'm sorry to hear that you're sick. I, too, am susceptable to the horrible upper respiratory problems associated with asthma (especially when sick). Do you have a nebulizer? If so, try to talk your doctor into giving you some samples of Xopenex. That shit is UNBELIEVABLE! So much better than Albuterol. It will clear you up right away, and make you feel kinda fuzzy (not in an intoxicated sort of way, or anything), and much better for a couple hours. Feel better and write soon!
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 15, 2007 09:08 EST
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I hope you feel better soon. I feel really bad for your mom, but (I'm just saying this to disturb you. :P ) are you sure she's not pregnant? Take care of yourselves. We can wait a little while if it means you're health.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was hot! **fans self** you kind of made me forget all of the nice things I was going to say about the first part of the chapter... That's really cool that Rin is a miko and that Kagome can do little demon things... I think Kouga is in for a huge surprise when he sees Inuyasha... I hope that you and your family get better soon. I used to get sick this time of year all of the time too. It turns out that I had a mold problem. Once I distanced myself from the mold I didn't get sick ad much and not that I live in a new and totally un-moldy house I hardly get sick at all... well, at least not like that. When I moved out of my old place I found that any place where the wall had a piece of furniture against it and condensation collected was covered in mold. Of course, my bed was against the wall. My new house doesn't get condensation on the walls, but the nature of my former dwelling was such that it was almost a constant. ok... I'm rambling... I'll be looking forward to your next chapter as always and may it come soon due to good health.
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 00:00 EST
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AHH!!! Hi! This is Kavfh from Fanfiction.net! I love this story! I really do! I don't know what I'll do if you don't update soon! Thanks again for the names of the other good Sess.kag stories!
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 13, 2007 11:46 EST
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Now that I think about it, she would probably use another language to keep from saying it frequently. Since she's japanese, she would use English, but since we speak english, you may want to use japanese. Results for 'heel' English Japanese heel hi-ru, hiretsukan
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 13, 2007 11:41 EST
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Heel would be funny. I can just imagine Sesshy jerked around to kneel at her heel.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
from scanning through your responses to the reviews, I can see most people are voting for "heel" as the subjugation word. I think that is as good a word as any and she will not likely say it is every day speech. I don't think that Sesshoumaru would want to go shoe shopping with her anyway. The only think I would wonder about is would the homonym of heel have the same effect? A miko who cannot say heal? Perhaps the fact that they are supposedly speaking Japanese and we are reading a "translation" of what they would be saying would take care of that. I really enjoyed this chapter. It is nice to once in a while not have to think about how all of the new events changes everything or how the story has deepened and just see how everyone reacts to everything. Miroku is so funny. I could just imagine him sitting in the flowers trying to occupy Rin. I am going to cut my review short today, I have to go do some things. I look forward to the next update!
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