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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 14:26 EST
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Thank you so much for the new chapter! I seriously have to say this: Kagome is kick-ass when it comes to being a mom! I had an idea for the word for the necklace for Sesshy, but I lost it... It has to be something though that wouldn't hurt (like 'sit' for InuYasha), but something that will get him to stop or something in any situation . I was thinking about it last night. I am in desperate need of a thesaurus. lol. Thanks again for the update! =D
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Reviewed By: syoze On: November 11, 2007 15:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about the ants but when i moved into my new house we had mold in the basement cause neighbors pipe burst & it destroed everthing that was made of paper, wood, cardboard, foam, well plastic was easy to clean. we had about $1000. we had about 40 boxes of books that caint be replaced & 10 of those boxes were encyolpedia sets, so i feel your pain. about this chapter, really good & i have no ideas about the name for sessy's beads. caint wait for the next chapter, syoze
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 11:57 EST
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Whew! I finally caught up! I started reading this fic when it was first put up, but I am a teacher, and only have a few minutes a day. this weekend, i did a marathon read! Fabulous story!!! I absolutely love it! Thanks for updating each day, or nearly that. i wiat eagerly for stories to update once every 3 months sometimes! Your story is so well thought out! I love the prophecy. wonderful grammar, by the way. really makes the story more ejoyable!! Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 03:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been beyond impressed with the last few chapters. I am happy about how you changed, or completed Inuyasha and I had always hoped that Kagome and Inuyasha would mark each other. I have always been curious about how Kagome's mark would manifest it's protection and I am pleased with the barrier. I also liked the Miko justice that Kagome dished out.I was wondering if any of those perfect little children were ever going to misbehave and I am kind of relieved that at least some of them did, but I hope that the next time any of them does something they shouldn't that they do not put themselves in danger again.... but, that is in all likely hood too much to ask. I don't know how you managed it, but somehow, you have increased my interest in this story with the developments of these chapters. I am sure that it will only get better. ok... I was thinking on a subjugation word for Sesshoumaru while lavishing attention upon my feline companion which she is currently demanding it occurred to me that "fluffy" would be a rather humorous word to use, but probably a very bad idea... but still... the scenarios that come to mind over that word make me giggle. I just thought you might want to giggle too.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: November 10, 2007 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always did wonder why Sesshoumaru doesn't have a mark, but everyone else does. I wonder what you will write about that later. That was so cute with the discription of Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha laying with Kagome and getting a good night sleep. The twins got into so much trouble. It was cute how they just wanted to see their mom. I had really thought that, that miko would kill the twins. Lucky for them Kagome, Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha came. Though I do wonder what their punishment would be cause I don't think Kagome is the type to do something harsh to them. They tired their little bodies out looking for Kagome. I do wonder where Kagome got the power to take other miko's powers away from them or change them. Another thing that I can't wait to find out. I hope that you have another chapter up soon cause this is getting really good. I think that you did a wonderful job on this chapter.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 09, 2007 09:21 EST
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Wow.... I'm Jealous. You have such a cool family. The only people I consider family now I'm not blood related to.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 16:17 EST
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^-^ Thanks! I almost cried when Kags died. Great job!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: November 07, 2007 20:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, what will happen now? Kagome can't just die after getting so close to Sesshoumaru and trying to find her father. Then Inuyasha is still out there and the new moon is approaching. I wonder what Sesshoumaru is going to do now. I noticed that he hasn't taken his wrist from her neck so maybe there is still a chance. This is getting to good for Kagome to just die right here. No way, I know that you have something up your sleeve for this. Then the children must be so afraid right now. Since they can feel that she has died. They must be going crazy. Ohh, I hope Kagome doesn't die because that would be the end of the story and this is getting to good to stop. Ohh, I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry late review more test.
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 17:18 EST
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Aww, thanks! You're so amazing! Don't feel bad if you can't, though!
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn cliffhangers! You better update soon or go into hiding......GRRRRRRRR!
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Reviewed By: J-Lou On: November 07, 2007 01:44 EST
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I absolutely love your story its so good i can hardly wait till you get the next chapter out keep up the absolutely amazing work
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 16:55 EST
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My birthday is this Saturday. You don't have to do a double post, just put up one chapter (if you can) and that'll be the best! :D
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside! It seems that Kagura has a really good heart to be able to be happy for Kagome. I hope that she is freed and that she finds love. Hmm... I have suspicions on who she could find love with, but I think I will keep my crazy musings to myself for a while. I haven't ever heard of that pairing. By the way, I loved the chapter before this one, but I didn't get time to review it because my laptop died! I am now using my mom's computer and it is in the same room as the cat's litter box... so... I must get my laptop revived as soon as possible... I wish I could just have Sesshy slash Tenseiga over it rather than ship it off somewhere, but alas, I don't think it would work anyway. It is good to see that the toad is finally being agreeable. Perhaps all it took was the fear of Sesshoumaru's wrath to open his eyes to the kindness that humans can possess towards even one such as he. I'm so worried about Inuyasha... I hope you tell us about how he is doing soon. I got a lot of ideas from Souta's musings... I get the feeling that his father will be returning once it is all over, if he survives... so it seems that things will have to be explained to him at some point. I hope he doesn't go into a teenaged fit of anger and rebellion once he discovers that he has been deprived of his father for some weird saving the world scheme. Hopefully his father had some practice with modern razors before he went back. It also seems that Souta is a lot more preceptive than it seemed and that he is just as sneaky as his sister... I look forward to the next chapter. i hope you can go back to daily posts, but I understand that you might not feel up to it with that thumb and the foot bothering you. I hope they heal soon. It looks like you did in fact have a nice Halloween and I hope that the pain didn't put too much of a damper on it.
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Reviewed By: little rini On: November 03, 2007 18:10 EDT
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LOL. There was a great start to this chapter. LOL. If it makes you feel better, I was left alone like those kids at the halloween party and it turned out for the best because I'm not like my family. :P
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: November 02, 2007 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is wow. You really out done yourself with this lemon. It was great. I wouldn't have thought that you would put her montly bleading in there. That just made it even better. I knew that you said that a lemon was coming up and I had thought that it was going to be a short lemon or something. I must say that I am surprised but you always surprise me with every chapter that comes up. That was cute how you had Kagome get mad at Sesshoumaru. Just like every other girl when there montly comes on, at least I am. Excuse me getting off track. Anyways I wouldn't have thought that Sesshoumaru would have helped her like that. I thought that he had some type of spell to make her pain go away but this is even better. Ohhh, this lemon was in so much detail that I must say that I loved it. Some authors just write a short lemon with out that much detail in it. But you put enough detail in it to make it a very sweet and great lemon. I congraduate you on that. I loved it and I can't say anything else. Just that I hope the rest of the story just keep getting better and better cause this was good. I do wonder though what it is that Kirara is keeping a secret about. At least Sango knows that Miroku loves her. Ohh and I can't forget the little ones. That was so cute that they are worried about Kagome so much that they want to stop her pain and who better to do it then there father. You out done yourself and I hope that every chapter after is as good as each one that you have written. Good job.
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